What do you think is the most poorly written scene in the ME series?
#651
Guest_starlitegirlx_*
Posté 20 février 2014 - 02:29
Guest_starlitegirlx_*
#652
Posté 20 février 2014 - 02:30
DeinonSlayer wrote...
Why would Cerberus troops need to vocalize at all? Wouldn't they be networked?
Yeah, it would be something like Sons of the Patriots from MGS.
#653
Posté 20 février 2014 - 02:30
Nightwriter wrote...
I imagine many do.George Costanza wrote...
Nightwriter wrote...
Stargazer scene should get honorable mention, at least.
I totally forgot about that scene. Whenever I get to the end of the game I turn it off before it gets to that point. Dreadful work.
Stay calm my sweet. Wanna hear another story about the Shepard? Might make you feel better!
#654
Posté 20 février 2014 - 02:52
Lizardviking wrote...
Nightwriter wrote...
I imagine many do.George Costanza wrote...
Nightwriter wrote...
Stargazer scene should get honorable mention, at least.
I totally forgot about that scene. Whenever I get to the end of the game I turn it off before it gets to that point. Dreadful work.
Stay calm my sweet. Wanna hear another story about the Shepard? Might make you feel better!
#655
Posté 20 février 2014 - 03:05
Well, in her defense, she's obsessed with the Crucible, and more or less has everything else on cruise-control. The "normal" interests of the Shadow Broker don't matter as much when the day-to-day matters of the galaxy are pretty much crushed.starlitegirlx wrote...
How about the galaxy's worst shadowbroker ever? She could barely get intel on the one mission she gives you. She doesn't have a clue about the beacon on thessia which if the shadowbroker had all the information they implied in the DLC, I would think that might have been in there. She doesn't think to get off the ship broker's ship before cerberus comes after her. Okay for the Yahg who had that huge crew but she was with one person and glyph. The only useful intel she gives you is a small group of mercs that comes through Barla Von and they aren't even worth that much. Glyph is much more useful than she is. You can use your intel to get upgrades. While the prothean expert seems to have forgotten all things prothean, sucks at her job, and it turns out traynor is far more on the ball and sussing out intel than Liara is. That is the worst writing EVER.
Yes, she ought to have been made more 'up to speed.' Especially when they gave her cutscreen incompetence with TIM too. Really? Not enough to make Shepard Cutscreen Incompetent?
#656
Guest_starlitegirlx_*
Posté 20 février 2014 - 03:22
Guest_starlitegirlx_*
RangerSG wrote...
Well, in her defense, she's obsessed with the Crucible, and more or less has everything else on cruise-control. The "normal" interests of the Shadow Broker don't matter as much when the day-to-day matters of the galaxy are pretty much crushed.starlitegirlx wrote...
How about the galaxy's worst shadowbroker ever? She could barely get intel on the one mission she gives you. She doesn't have a clue about the beacon on thessia which if the shadowbroker had all the information they implied in the DLC, I would think that might have been in there. She doesn't think to get off the ship broker's ship before cerberus comes after her. Okay for the Yahg who had that huge crew but she was with one person and glyph. The only useful intel she gives you is a small group of mercs that comes through Barla Von and they aren't even worth that much. Glyph is much more useful than she is. You can use your intel to get upgrades. While the prothean expert seems to have forgotten all things prothean, sucks at her job, and it turns out traynor is far more on the ball and sussing out intel than Liara is. That is the worst writing EVER.
Yes, she ought to have been made more 'up to speed.' Especially when they gave her cutscreen incompetence with TIM too. Really? Not enough to make Shepard Cutscreen Incompetent?
But after she hands off the crucible, she's not really doing anything on it. There is a whole massive team building it. She is more or less obsessed with it as you say, but while the galaxy is going to hell, her obsession is not really helping at all because she's not an engineer. She's not building it. She's curious. Actually if you bring back Gabby and Donnelly, they are the only ones on the ship that contribute to it. So Mac has her focusing on this thing that she really doesn't ever offer any knowledge on beyond 'it's massive in size and scope and capable of unquantified levels of destruction' - great job Liara. Now that we know that, let's get the real experts on it. But she sits in her cabin and you get a couple of conversations about her trying to find engineers for it, but that's it. Such a waste.
#657
Posté 20 février 2014 - 04:30
Had she of done that, the Thessia mission would be different than what we got.
#658
Posté 20 février 2014 - 06:18
starlitegirlx wrote...
How about the galaxy's worst shadowbroker ever? She could barely get intel on the one mission she gives you. She doesn't have a clue about the beacon on thessia which if the shadowbroker had all the information they implied in the DLC, I would think that might have been in there. She doesn't think to get off the ship broker's ship before cerberus comes after her. Okay for the Yahg who had that huge crew but she was with one person and glyph. The only useful intel she gives you is a small group of mercs that comes through Barla Von and they aren't even worth that much. Glyph is much more useful than she is. You can use your intel to get upgrades. While the prothean expert seems to have forgotten all things prothean, sucks at her job, and it turns out traynor is far more on the ball and sussing out intel than Liara is. That is the worst writing EVER.
The whole thing with the Shadow Broker is absurd. It begins with the points I made in my OP but it doesn't stop there. How is one person able to juggle all the secrets of the galaxy regarding trillions of lives. Try imagining one person trying to manage all the secrets just on earth. It wouldn't matter what VI is helping you. No organic mind could handle it. No wonder Liara misses so much. lol
Also, everyone seems to know Liara is the Shadow Broker except people like Barla Von who specialize in the information trade. I suppose Liara would give it up when the reaper war is finished. At least in the meantime she's relatively safe on the Normandy but someone might want to take her out later on.
Modifié par congokong, 20 février 2014 - 06:22 .
#659
Posté 20 février 2014 - 06:41
I thought it'd have been a nice twist if the "shadow broker" was actually Reaper.
Vigil: "Information is power, and they knew everything about us."
Barla Von: "Every day he trades secrets that could topple governments. Yet, somehow, he never disrupts the natural order. Everything manages to balance out. Nobody ends up with the advantage in the end... Nobody knows who he is. He could be any race, any gender. I have a theory that the Shadow Broker is actually a group of people. How else could they juggle so many contacts at the same time? How else could they keep all that information from getting crossed?"
Sovereign: "You evolve along the paths we desire."
Imagine breaking into the yahg's office, getting a good first-ever look at that big bastard, then just when you go to attack he seizes up, starts glowing a sickly yellow and bellows out "ASSUMING DIRECT CONTROL."
#660
Posté 20 février 2014 - 06:45
Or Feron. That would've been a hell of a twist.
#661
Posté 20 février 2014 - 06:58
I would suggest several posters be a little less obvious in attempting to disguise their dislike for Liara as something else. It's not convincing in the slightest.
Modifié par Bob from Accounting, 20 février 2014 - 07:00 .
#662
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:06
The yahg thing would be silly, yeah. But really, a Reaper behind the scenes pulling the strings, with access to every military and diplomatic secret in the galaxy both directly serves their purposes and makes far more sense than a single organic (from a previously unheard-of non-spacefaring race, no less) being able to keep all of that in his head. Right on the eve of the cycle, they could orchestrate a half-dozen "give me five minutes and I could start a war"-style data leaks and watch as the cycle's leading militaries tear each other apart as a prelude to the Reaper invasion.Bob from Accounting wrote...
That would have just been silly.
#663
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:12
#664
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:14
She didn't actually have the data at that point. Hence her request to Hackett for backup. Hence the "race to the archives."themikefest wrote...
My question to Liara, when you first meet her on Mars, is why didn't she forward the data to Hackett when she realized it was somrething that could stop the reapers? She knew before the reapers invaded Earth by Hackett telling you to go to Mars that T'soni may of found something to stop the reapers.
Had she of done that, the Thessia mission would be different than what we got.
C'mon, now.
#665
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:15
The only reason I threw in the "direct control" thing is because the format of a video game demands that players get something to shoot at. The big terminator skeleton thing was already done.
Modifié par DeinonSlayer, 20 février 2014 - 07:28 .
#666
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:21
#667
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:25
#668
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:32
The yahg is not particularly interesting. That's fine. The position of the Broker itself and Liara's takeover certainly are. I doubt either of things would be in place if the Broker turned out to be nothing more than a finger of the Reapers.
That doesn't even touch the considerable backstepping this would require.
#669
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:39
The trilogy is tied off. Anything "what if" we discuss now is purely speculative. Everything that already exists is fair game.
One scenario I read before LotSB came out was that the Broker was actually three people - an Asari, a Drell, and a Volus. Each would have skills which contribute to the work they do, each trains an apprentice as their successor. Nyxeris was the apprentice to the Asari broker. The idea in the alternate scenario was that Liara was trying to eliminate all three and recruited Shepard's help.
The way I see it, we're free to speculate about how certain parts of the story could have been better written. Some of the alternate scenarios I've seen written on this site blow the canon story clean out of the water.
Modifié par DeinonSlayer, 20 février 2014 - 07:43 .
#670
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:43
Because I'm struggling to see how that contributes anything at all. It just diffuses the Broker's character into three people. Could you explain to me how this benefits the story at all for me? How it 'blows the canon clean out of the water'?
Modifié par Bob from Accounting, 20 février 2014 - 07:43 .
#671
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:48
It is a fact.DeinonSlayer wrote...
It's simply a fact that a storytelling medium is limited when it has to throw a gaggle of faceless mooks in the protagonist's path every five to ten minutes to hold the player's interest. They have toconstantly find reasons to justify firefights, however flimsy (see the alphabet soup merc groups in ME2 and Cerberus in ME3). Leviathan is the closest we've come to breaking this pattern.
It's also a fact that assuming that a general focus on combat and other such activities in the video game industry is a result of inept developers and lazy players without considering the underlying principles of games is, to say the least, very shallow and shortsighted. Even more so to assume that breaking free of this constraint would be simple or that other mediums aren't similarly constrained by patterns.
Modifié par Bob from Accounting, 20 février 2014 - 07:49 .
#672
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:49
Relax, OK? I'm simply pointing out an alternate scenario. I'm not calling it one of those that "blows canon out of the water;" I'd have to dig up Dean_The_Young's thread for that. I only think it's better than vanilla LotSB in the sense that the entire network isn't contingent on a single individual. It's more believable for it to be managed by multiple people with disparate skills instead of "Drooling Ogre Hates T'Soni!" *more dakka*Bob from Accounting wrote...
Do they now? Are they on the level of this?
Because I'm struggling to see how that contributes anything at all. It just diffuses the Broker's character into three people. Could you explain to me how this benefits the story at all for me? How it 'blows the canon clean out of the water'?
#673
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:53
I really see no problem at all with a single individual managing the Shadow Broker network.
#674
Posté 20 février 2014 - 07:59
Huh. What was that about passive-aggression?Bob from Accounting wrote...
It is a fact.DeinonSlayer wrote...
It's simply a fact that a storytelling medium is limited when it has to throw a gaggle of faceless mooks in the protagonist's path every five to ten minutes to hold the player's interest. They have toconstantly find reasons to justify firefights, however flimsy (see the alphabet soup merc groups in ME2 and Cerberus in ME3). Leviathan is the closest we've come to breaking this pattern.
It's also a fact that assuming that a general focus on combat and other such activities in the video game industry is a result of inept developers and lazy players without considering the underlying principles of games is, to say the least, very shallow and shortsighted. Even more so to assume that breaking free of this constraint would be simple or that other mediums aren't similarly constrained by patterns.
See, to me it seems the ME trilogy walked backwards in this area. Firefoghts got harder and harder to avoid, options were streamlined. In ME1, for example, it was entirely possible to get through Port Hanshan without a shot fired if you approached from the right angle. There were encounters like the corporate espionage with Manuel Vargas that gave you no less than six ways to handle the situation. As the trilogy progressed, we saw less of this. The investigative portions of Leviathan, as I said, were an interesting break.
It's entirely possible to write an intelligent RPG without reducing villains to moustache-twirling buffons (Illusive Man, Kai Leng).
#675
Guest_starlitegirlx_*
Posté 20 février 2014 - 08:00
Guest_starlitegirlx_*
Bob from Accounting wrote...
That would have just have been silly.
I would suggest several posters be a little less obvious in attempting to disguise their dislike for Liara as something else. It's not convincing in the slightest.
I don't need to hide my dislike for liara at all. She's a crappy character in my opinion. Plot armored to hell and back. Nothing really special about her. I'll take Garrus over her anyday and I do. I love to leave her till last in ME1 just to see her borderline delusional. I just don't get the love for her. I really don't. She's a sweet character but beyond that there is nothing particularly remarkable about her. Very bland and dull. They wanted a beautiful female race and Liara is that. But nothing about her is even interesting really. The shadowbroker had potential. I loved the DLC when she takes over as the shadowbroker. That is a fantastic moment. Then it falls to crap in ME3. So much wasted potential for a basically boring character. Even her comments when you visit her are enough to put you to sleep.





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