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Guanxii

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Probably wrong section: move to where-ever appropriate.

 

Rewriting the original trilogy for movies/tv/reboot:(s) story idea and tweaks

 

If you could re-write the original trilogy and roll all your thoughts and expectations back to ME1 what would you do differently story-wise? I really hope that any retelling of the Mass Effect story does things differently. It's a fantastic opportunity to have another crack at it. It's not that I thought ME2 or ME3 were bad games or bad stories.... I just don't think they lived up to the original premise. This starting thread is very sketchy and made up of bullet-points to convey a general vision for a retelling of the ME story. Only meant as starting point - whilst allowing me to vent - hopefully giving you and idea of how I would improve upon the original story in my own mind. I'm sure you'll disagree with me but lets have some fun - go mad.  This thread doesn't exactly contain spoilers per say because it's mostly alternate history and therefore non-canon.

 

ME1 Changes:

 

1.     Finding the conduit really IS the key to bringing back the reapers.

2.     Using the citadel as a backdoor is only a desperate last minute back up plan after sovereign fails to track down the real conduit on Ilos

3.     The actual conduit artefact is not found on Ilos – has been moved.

4.     The Ilos proto-relay is merely backwards engineered from the actual conduit artefact.

5.     The last protheans hid the conduit [away from the entire galaxy in a place no-non prothean could reach] after reapers returned to dark space

6.     These details might only be inferred rather than stated explicitly

 

ME2 Changes:

 

1.     The collectors are falsely assumed to be servants of the reapers but are actually guardians of the conduit beyond Omega-4

2.     Collectors are protheans who managed to retain some hive mind form of sentience despite capture and reaper modification or rather “ascension”.

3.     Jacob Taylor leads the Cerberus expedition to the collector base in the prologue to capture all known Reaper technology to expediate work on sanctuary project.

4.     He inadvertently activates the conduit after defeating the collectors and the reapers pour through a supermassive black hole in the center of the galaxy

5.     The Sanctuary project will be the Illusive Man’s tragic attempt at redemption for dooming the galaxy.

6.     Cerberus is behind the missing colonist abductions

7.     The Alliance assumes Cerberus are agents of the Reapers

8.     Normandy crew track down known Cerberus operatives and associates (ME2 dossier) to stop the reapers abducting/converting people into reaper ground forces.

9.     Miranda is the Illusive Man’s daughter and is the key to discovering sanctuary

10.  Sanctuary is the worst war crime in recorded history; yet at the cost of bankrupting his gigantic shadow empire the Illusive Man succeeds.

11.  Reaper indoctrination has been cracked. It can be blocked and it can be overwritten on a massive scale: organics will be able to pit entire reaper ground forces against each other using Cerberus developed orbital and ground indoctrination signal transmitters backwards engineered from reaper technology. The Reapers have in effect lost their atomic bomb style monopoly and what was a strength becomes an Achilles heel.

12.  It is too late for the Illusive Man however; he explains everything to Shepard while he still can and is convinced to commit suicide before succumbing to what Saren described at the end of ME1.

13.  Miranda is capture by the Alliance. The alliance privately and discreetly appropriate Cerberus’s research and begin construction on it’s own anti reaper tech project though publically denies the allegations and condemns the actions of Cerberus at sanctuary.

 

ME3 Changes:

 

1.     The reapers concede that they cannot defeat the organics because as fast as they can indoctrinate the organics can turn indoctrinated forces against them.

2.     The reapers goal is not to destroy organics life which is what they must ultimately do to stop the current civilization advancing beyond type II. Given the stalemate after Harbinger’s defeat at Rannoch, Harbinger/Catalyst AI  explains the motivation of the reapers, i.e. the metaphysical conflict between organics and synthetics. They submit that perhaps they were wrong about their creators and though thought to have been eradicated might be the only ones who can solve this conflict.

3.     [Aboard the Normandy in ME2 legion reveals that the Geth are the shadow broker – they study organics, this is how they influence the galaxy]. After achieving peace between Quarians and the Geth, Legion (revealed and recruited in ME2 on Haelstrom) informs Shepard that the Geth have a lead on the Leviathans.

4.     Shepard must travel to the collective to commune with the Geth to learn of the location of the leviathans which is a deeply held secret. The Geth haven’t formed a consensus on whether the Leviathans are a threat or ally – especially to synthetics.

5.     Upon discovering the leviathans they inform Shepard that they have been studying organics and synthetics for millennia and over millions of years have finally come to a solution only the apex race could comprehend – in fact the only solution. The crucible/synthesis is in fact their solution but it works differently this time.

6.     It would destroy every reaper in the galaxy as an intentional side effect but it’s primary purpose is to modify the DNA structures of all species to widen their genetic frameworks to include organic and inorganic [genetic] compounds which would allow organics for the first time to augment themselves on a fundamental level like a synthetic however they see fit without relying on artificial intelligence. Therefore it’s not forced evolution – we each have a choice about our own destinies.

7.     As a result the organic-synthetics would be able to advance socio-technologically theoretically at the same rate as any pure synthetic species could so a singularity would never be possible.

8.     The Leviathans however need organics to make this possible and they think we are ready to compete with purely synthetic species should the crucible be deployed and work.

9.     The leviathans reject the notion that a machine intelligence will never be able to experience pain or emotion, e.g. love should those become their societal goals. They too must be free to choose their own evolutionary path.

10.  Firing the crucible will not destroy artifical intelegence. It’s the organic material inside of the reapers that makes them succeptable.



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Zanata-Gamer

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Interesting ... but to make a film based on Mass Effect would work only if it was a spin-off. 
 
The game is based on player choices so I think ... in a movie would not please the fans too, because each one can choose the destination's character. 
 
If it were a movie telling the story before Shepard ... or some character like Liara maybe Anderson or Hackett ... 
 
First Contact War ...
 
Provided that the director did not escape the Mass Effect universe, it would be an interesting proposal  B) 


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I've spent an odd amount of time toying with the idea of Mass Effect as a television series, down to rough outlines on each of what currently sits at 62 episodes altogether. I find myself scribbling notes while on cardio machines of all things.

I don't want to share it until I've done another run this summer but I'll remark on what I've shifted then.

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Probably wrong section: move to where-ever appropriate.
1.     The citadel is not the conduit, only a desperate last minute back up plan after sovereign fails to track down the conduit on Ilos
2.     The conduit artefact is not found on Ilos – has been moved. Ilos relay is backwards engineered from conduit artefact.

Wait, what? The Citadel isn't the Conduit in the first place. The Conduit takes you to the Citadel.

 

1.     The reapers concede that they cannot defeat the organics because as fast as they can indoctrinate the organics can turn indoctrinated forces against them.


How does this threaten the Reapers? Even if they can't use husks and whatnot, they can bomb planets from space.

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Wait, what? The Citadel isn't the Conduit in the first place. The Conduit takes you to the Citadel.

 
How does this threaten the Reapers? Even if they can't use husks and whatnot, they can bomb planets from space.

 

The proto-relay is referred to as the conduit but really it's the citadel that is the conduit to dark space. If the reapers and organics can control indoctrinated forces equally then the reapers can't get a foothold to pacify and preserve the organic species as they have always done  - their only option is to destroy them using conventional warfare which defeats the purpose of their existence.



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Interesting ... but to make a film based on Mass Effect would work only if it was a spin-off. 
 
The game is based on player choices so I think ... in a movie would not please the fans too, because each one can choose the destination's character. 
 
If it were a movie telling the story before Shepard ... or some character like Anderson or Hackett ... 
 
First Contact War ...
 
Provided that the director did not escape the Mass Effect universe, it would be an interesting proposal  B) 

 

Fixed, Liara has got enough content already, she doesn't need more and yes a movie with ANderson or Hackett would work better than one with Shepard. That said I'd rather there be no ME movie.



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I have to say I am not loving it. It slows down the plot, it takes away some of the desperation and a lot of plot that I actually liked. No offence but that isnt the ME universe i love.



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The proto-relay is referred to as the conduit but really it's the citadel that is the conduit to dark space. If the reapers and organics can control indoctrinated forces equally then the reapers can't get a foothold to pacify and preserve the organic species as they have always done  - their only option is to destroy them using conventional warfare which defeats the purpose of their existence.

 

Oh, I see. The Conduit -- capitalized, as proper nouns are -- only refers to the Ilos-Citadel relay built by the Protheans. While it's technically correct in English to call any other relay a conduit, those relays aren't the Conduit. You can see why calling the Citadel Relay a conduit would be confusing,  is confusing, since in point 1 and point 2 you used "conduit" to mean two different things.

 

As for the second point; sure, they couldn't do much of a harvest without ground troops. They'd have to exterminate the current cycle. So what? it's better to lose one cycle, out of hundreds that have been harvested already and thousands more to be harvested in the future, than to run the risk of losing all of them by being defeated. This isn't necessarily a problem for your rewrite; I'm just pointing out the Reapers certainly can "defeat the organics."



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Oh, I see. The Conduit -- capitalized, as proper nouns are -- only refers to the Ilos-Citadel relay built by the Protheans. While it's technically correct in English to call any other relay a conduit, those relays aren't the Conduit. You can see why calling the Citadel Relay a conduit would be confusing,  is confusing, since in point 1 and point 2 you used "conduit" to mean two different things.

 

As for the second point; sure, they couldn't do much of a harvest without ground troops. They'd have to exterminate the current cycle. So what? it's better to lose one cycle, out of hundreds that have been harvested already and thousands more to be harvested in the future, than to run the risk of losing all of them by being defeated. This isn't necessarily a problem for your rewrite; I'm just pointing out the Reapers certainly can "defeat the organics."

 

If the reapers are using conventional warfare (e.g. orbital lasers, glassing planets) to destroy all advanced organic (and synthetic) life in the galaxy it's likely many/perhaps all of the 'younger ones' will die as collateral damage. They could damage the cycle irreparably. Perhaps now the [indoctrination] genie is out of the bottle (the passing of this knowledge/blueprints between cycles e.g. crucible blueprints will doom reapers to eventually destroy organics in future cycle(s) after successive culling(s). Updated my post to make it clearer. Thanks.



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I think the most important thing that could be done for the story of the first two games would be to let crew members handle some of the side missions without Shepard. Obviously a lot of the side mission content would need to be cut altogether, but some of the cool stuff could be presented in a few seconds just by cutting to Garrus and Ashley doing it, then back to Shepard on the main plot content.

 

Obviously the third game needs a completely new ending for its big screen adaptation.