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[Cainhurst Crow]

And done. Tell me if I need to change anything.

[Terca]

Alright, looks good to me. A bit heavy on the past side but all of it is relevant to him so I have no real complaints. Do you want the group that's going to be picking up Kanae to run into him at Baladrum's club with Vayne being another so-called security member?

[Cainhurst Crow]

Maybe. First I'd need to read up and find out what's going on.

 

I'll be doing that tomorrow. It's midnight for me and I gotta hit the sack.

[Redbelle]

Something I just picked up on. If you run Jess's assumed name and nick name together you get, Jess 'Silver' Stone.

 

The Silverstone race track is about 20 miles from where I live XD

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

So Jess is mistrustful of aliens, but will she want to meet the notorious criminal residing in the Starboard Observation Deck?

[ArcticNova]

Character Name: Elsa’Meerai O’Connor
 

Species: Quarian

Sex:  Female

Age: 26

Occupation: Doctor of Alien Anatomy and Physiology

Biotic: Yes

Biotic Powers: Throw, Singularity, Lash, Smash, & Nova

Weapons Carried/Owned: M-6 Carnifex   

Ammunition Type: Cryo Rounds

 

Basic Appearance: Skin is slightly violet shaded, light blue colored quarian eyes, long mostly straight black hair, quarian markings that are slightly abnormal due to experimentation, thin and fit body. 5ft 5in. 115lbs.


 

 

Personality: Elsa is what most would call “abnormal”. Overall, she enjoys interacting with others, but she refuses to let anyone too close. Those who just meet her usually label her as strong-willed and a down to earth woman who has no shame in her game. She can be complex and withdrawn at times but will speak her mind and defend herself with great amounts of sarcasm and witty comments when necessary. Because of her rare and powerful abilities she is perceived by others to be highly dangerous, untrustworthy, and even “satan’s spawn” as some refer to her. Unlike other Quarians, she shows no interest in tech abilities, mainly because she has no time to focus on it with her biotics. She is more entranced by the universe around her, specifically the human race. Their individuality fascinates her to the point she sometimes observes human interactions closely, taking notes as she listens. Even with her strong-willed persona, she cares deeply for her adoptive father, James, and brother, Jake who have always looked out for her. Because she is grateful of the humans that have accepted her, Elsa attempts to live a more humanistic life. During her school years, she also met Dean Winters: A human biotic who had a similar reputation as herself, which drew her to him. The two have remained close friends ever since, which Elsa’s brother disapproves of highly. Elsa did not and will never go on a pilgrimage as she refuses anything that deals with her Quarian-heritage, due to her past and treatment on the Rayya. Beneath her rough exterior she is a kind and gentle soul at heart, though she rarely shows it and it takes much work to see that side of her. Her emotions do get the best of her at times, triggering her powers to go awry. But most of the time when her confidence is on high, she's wild and fun, with a gritty persona.

 

Brief History:  Elsa’Meerai was born on the Quarian ship, the Rayya, her twin sister, Sora being born only several moments after her. Elsa and Sora had two completely different personalities, yet they were nearly inseparable for the first 8 years of their lives.

Elsa’s life came with many unexpected twists and turns, starting even before birth. When her mother became pregnant with twins, she unknowingly became a possible target for experimentation by a group called “Overshadow”. The main purpose of this shady and mostly anonymous organization was to create biotic potential fetuses on one twin, attempting to control the exposure and maximize the potential, leaving the other fetus completely unaffected. Overshadow had much success with other species in the past, excluding the Quarians.

When Elsa’s mother went to get regular vaccinations during her pregnancy she was injected with a highly concentrated dose of eezo. Upon Elsa and Sora’s birth, Elsa’s immune system was much weaker than her sister’s and was taken to critical care, immediately. As she grew up, her biotic potential became more and more noticeable to others. Elsa was unable to control her abilities at such a young age and when she was 8, she threw a student across the school during a dispute, accidentally killing the girl.

Once Overshadow heard about Elsa’s outburst, they realized she was one of their test subjects. In fact, she was the only living Quarian to survive their experimentation. The next night, Overshadow sent in two agents to capture Elsa. Her parents and sister were killed, and she was taken to a lab where more testing was done to increase her biotics.

For 8 years Elsa underwent countless experimentation and testing, praying for a death that never came. However, when she was 16, one of her experiments had taken a turn for the worst and she was believed to be dead. With their most valuable asset lifeless in the facility, Overshadow decided to burn it to the ground, leaving no evidence. Shortly after they left, a human alliance ship saw the smoke and investigated the burning facility. Captain James O’Connor was unable to find any evidence against Overshadow, as most of the evidence had been charred, however, they did recover a Quarian body before the building collapsed.

O’Connor unmasked the supposedly deceased Quarian, seeing she was quite young. Feeling a pang in his heart for this strange girl, he held her hand, only wishing he’d gotten there sooner. Air forced its way into Elsa’s lungs and her bright eyes sprang open as she grasped the hand that was around hers.

Elsa was alive and James was to take her home to the Rayya, though when addressed by the admirals, there was much dispute about what should be done with her. If Elsa stayed on the Rayya it would endanger not only her own self, but whomever she was staying with and perhaps the entire Quarian population, with her biotic abilities. They had agreed on termination of the child, since she posed a threat and had no family to look after her. Upon hearing the admiral’s decision, Captain O’Connor offered to take Elsa into his home on Arvuna and teach her how to use her biotics, being a biotic himself. The Admirals agreed and for the next 10 years, Elsa lived with her human father, along with James’ son, Jake, who’s Elsa’s age.

Living on Arvuna was an easy adjustment for Elsa, though it wasn’t without its hardships. She was quite rebellious and her biotics always seemed to get her into trouble. During this time, she became close with Dean Winters, the “biotic bad boy” of the town, yet she also remained close with her brother, Jake and her human father.

Now, at 26, Elsa has grasped the knowledge of how to control her biotic abilities thanks to James’ training techniques, however, she still has outburst at times. In addition, she has flown through med school, taking many advanced classes in alien anatomy and physiology. She’s an exceptional doctor for her age, however, Elsa hopes to go exploring, wanting to use her knowledge to aid those traveling the universe as well as gain more combat experience with her biotics. She’s received many job offers on planets far and wide because of her talents as a doctor and a biotic, however Elsa wants a chance to explore the universe, in hopes of finding and destroying Overshadow. As the years fade by, Elsa eagerly awaits the day when her adventure can truly begin.
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Other Notes:

Main Personality Traits: strong-willed, sarcastic, witty

Ultimate goal: Revenge on Overshadow

Ultimate fear: Being locked up and more experimentation

Frequently used phrases: “You’re so dead.” “Stop showin’ off.” “Let’s just say, I’m full of surprises.”

Interesting fact: Because of the experimentation that eventually boosted her immune system, Elsa is able to remove her visor and enviro-suit entirely without getting diseases that would kill most other Quarians attempting the same thing. However, because she’s so self-conscious about how she looks, she very rarely takes it off. Only her adoptive father and brother have seen what she truly looks like.   She also collects one small item from each planet she visits as memorabilia. A very humanistic trait she acquired.

Combat: Though she’s quite powerful, Elsa lacks experience using her abilities in actual combat presenting a key weakness. She’s very emotional when certain subjects such as her biological or adoptive family are brought up in a negative way, along with her race being praised, or her past with Overshadow. These subjects are easily used against her, sometimes fueling her rage, increasing her power, but reducing her control of it. When she is in complete control of her abilities she’s a force not to be reckoned with.

Suit appearance:

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Detailed Dossier (Model from Red Shadow, Optional)

 

Name: Elsa’Meerai O’Connor

Alias/Codename: None. (Though she’s heavily referred to as “satan’s spawn or biotic witch)

Race: Quarian

Gender: Female

Age: 26

Height: 5'5"

Weight: 115 lbs 

Physical Profile: Very small but toned body. Much weaker physically but quick and agile due to her constant training.  

Ren/Par percentage: 70% Paragon, 30% Renegade (Renegade mostly due to the innocent child she killed. Many saw it as intentional.)

Previous and Current Affiliations: Assistant Professor at the Arvuna Medical Center.

 

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Non Military-

 

Family: Her biological parents and twin sister were killed. She now has an adoptive human father(James) and brother(Jake). 

James:


Jake:


Friends:

Dean:


Economical Stature: Middle class

Experience before Military Career: Medical residency on Arvuna.

Family Service Record: Elsa’s adoptive father, James has been with the system’s alliance for nearly 30 years as a scout. After
adopting Elsa he retired from active duty, taking a desk job so he could spend more time with Elsa and Jake. Jake went to college on Arvuna and is now an expert mechanic.

Lifestyle: Focuses on her work, making her patients top priority. Her patients enjoy her professional yet fun attitude she presents. She doesn’t have much of a social life, mainly because she doesn’t find the free time.

Religion: Not following her Quarian-based religion, Elsa believes firmly in reincarnation. The life you live now shall determine the next. She hasn’t really thought much beyond that belief.

 

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Military- Elsa has never directly been involved with the military

Class: Adept

Special Commendations: N/A

Service Record: N/A

Rank: N/A

Kill Count: 121

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Combat-

 

Assault: N/A

Sniper: N/A

Pistol: M-6 Carnifex

SMG: N/A

Shotgun: N/A

Armor Proficiencies: Light (Quarian Enviro-suit)
 
Melee: Biotic melee

Combat abilities:

Unity (mid)
Throw (mid)
Barrier (late)
Smash (late)
Singularity (late)
Lash (late)
Nova (late)

Technical Knowledge:

Novice

Combat Mastery:

Competent

Racial Passive Abilities:

None

Racial Active Abilities:

None

*I hope everything is to expectation. It's 6am and I haven't slept a wink yet because I wanted to finish this. I apologize for it being a bit lengthy. Her "Brief History" isn't so brief.    Anyways, I hope you all like her and if there are any comments or concerns feel free to let me know. I can't wait to start roleplaying again! Let's do this!

[Redbelle]

Jess isn't mistrustful of aliens. She just doesn't trust Spectres.

 

Though when a Spectre rolls up and demands attention she can't just brush them off.

 

Being a pirate/privateer she's in contact with aliens alot so she's come to know them much better than most humans. It's her sister who has more anti alien leanings, though that less anti alien and more pro human. Amy's view on that get's buried because she's working for Terra Firma trying to get Armitage elected.

 

But I doubt we'll go into that side of things since it's outside the BAL thread.

 

I was tempted to bring Wyld into this, but I like to keep active characters apart. Plus we'd then have the whole, Naleena and Wyld met before BAL. How do we handle that situation? Better avoided to keep the character's free form.

[Redbelle]

If I had to describe her point of view, I'd say that she's a law unto herself who is generous to her friends and either destroys or evades her enemies.

 

Most of her motivations is centred around the concept of profit. Not neccessarily monetary though she knows she needs to keep the money flowing to pay her crew. She tends to look at things in terms of, what do I gain?

 

Even if the gain is a warm fuzzy feeling.

[siphernin]

I have this secret feeling that if we pick up the quarian, that she will yell at us a lot... Especially my character.

[Terca]

Alright, two thingies...

 

Firstly, I'm going to have to make Eteon to get everyone onto the Audron in a timely manner. I've been able to grab two characters and there are six others to grab and I don't want to keep you all hanging for too long. Probably let me know where all of your characters are going to be or how a character of mine could get your character and I'll do my best to get them in a timely manner. The order would generally be in the order of those people who submitted their character first but if another character is more convenient (read: close) then they might be grabbed first.

 

Second: We have a looooot of biotics now, ~4 or 5 characters out of nine. It's nice to have a bit of variety in combat abilities so I'm going to ask that any new submissions try to take some of the other routes for powers. It's just to get a little bit more change in combat styles really. Again, I'm not the overlord and you don't have to listen to me, it's just my opinion. All characters that are biotics now are fine of course, I've already given my stamp of approval.

 

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Now for Nova:

 

Experimentation is a rather broad term, and the same with saying that biotics have been improved. Could you please say what specifically? Her magnitude of strength, finesse, or stamina... So on, so forth. It is my general understanding that Quarians would be slightly weaker biotics due to their generally lest robust constitution but I cannot back that up with details from the games.

[siphernin]

Experimentation is a rather broad term, and the same with saying that biotics have been improved. Could you please say what specifically? Her magnitude of strength, finesse, or stamina... So on, so forth. It is my general understanding that Quarians would be slightly weaker biotics due to their generally lest robust constitution but I cannot back that up with details from the games.

Here's some back up on that Quarian/Biotic debacle.  Just click the link.  Also, not important for this but she might be referring to the implants when she's talking about the surgery; to help control the biotics I mean.

[Terca]

Alright, Eteon is up. She'll start doing some recruiting stuff herself... She's kind've a gag character.

[Gabi_MuadDiB]

Character Name: Arrin’Uda Nar Rayya

 

Species: Quarian

 

Sex: Male

 

Age: 25

 

Occupation: (Infiltrator) Engineer and Tech expert doing pilgrimage

 

Biotic: no

 

Biotic Powers: none

 

Tech Powers: AI Hacking, Decription, Overload, Combat Drone

 

Combat Powers: Pistol, Sniper Rifles

 

Weapons Carried: M -77 Paladin, M-4 Shuriken*

 

Weapons Owned: M -77 Paladin, M-4 Shuriken*

 

The Shuriken he got it while RPing...

 

Ammunition Type: Disruptor ammo

 

Class: Infiltrator

 

Basic Appearance: Light blue skin, a green led like glowing eyes, around 6” kind of slim even for a quarian. His environmental suit his black grey and dark blue with Geometric motives

 

Personality: Really extroversive and social, enjoys meeting individuals from different alien cultures. Open minded, kind of childish sometimes, enjoys playing and having fun. Procrastination is a real problem to him, sometimes is hard to have him concentrated in a task. Can be quite a jerk and his sence of humor is a bit harsh, have a lot of egocentrism (not that liked in Quarian’s society), is hard to make him angry, but when he does get angry, he enters in kind of a blind rage. He doesn’t like dangerous situations and would avoid direct combat has much has possible, but would run straight into it to for a friend.

 

Brief History: Arrin was born in the Rayya Ship of the Migrant Fleet, in a family quite far from a position of power. His parents really priced technical skill and education and pushed him since his childhood to study cybernetic mathematics, Computer engineering, mechanics, etc, partly wishing that in the future he could improve his social position though his prowess and be a part of the Admiralty Board. Though he loved technology, he also loved to play and was always a bit mischief, granting him not much respect from the other Quarians in the ship. Always dreaming with stuff and having ever changing hobbies most of the crew saw him always has and under achiever.

 

By the time of starting pilgrimage, he was gifted with the paladin gun of his father, at that point his tech skills where already above average but still in development, and he was totally excited and happy to go out on the galaxy and being able to see and experience what else is out there… After 7 years in pilgrimage he hadn’t decide yet to come back, cause he feels like there is still so much to see and do out there. He has sold his perfectly good comeback gifts quite sometimes already (mostly to keep traveling, or buying himself new equipment and well, partying). Currently in

 

Kils: 0

 

Military training: Just basic training by his father. Good shooter even though never had profesional traning

 

Other Notes:

Good Hacker.

Bad at concentrating in critical moments

Doesn’t need much sleep

Sucks in meele combat

Bad at frontal combat

Good long distance shooter

Good making ambushes

Can create pretty useful drones from scraps

 

Is the first time I do RP in a forum but i loooooove mass effect… So tell me if I have to improve anything in the character and sorry about my English being not perfect... but is not my first language... trying my best

[Cainhurst Crow]

Made a few changes to my character. Nothing major, just a few detailings of his armors capabilities.

[Terca]

Alright Gabi, your Quarian looks OK to me but I have a couple of questions...

 

You have him listed as an infiltrator but he doesn't have tactical cloak as one of his powers... Is that intentional or did you forget it? He doesn't need to have tac cloak, just a question. Secondly the arc projector seems an odd primary weapon... I mean, it's not an M20 Cain but it is still a pretty beefy gun. You might want to explain how he got such an impressive piece of tech.

 

If you have trouble with your english, one of us might ask you to clarify something we don't understand. We won't do it to be rude, just because wording can sometimes be difficult to get around since Eng isn't the most user-friendly language Welcome to the RP!

[Gabi_MuadDiB]

Alright Gabi, your Quarian looks OK to me but I have a couple of questions...

 

You have him listed as an infiltrator but he doesn't have tactical cloak as one of his powers... Is that intentional or did you forget it? He doesn't need to have tac cloak, just a question. Secondly the arc projector seems an odd primary weapon... I mean, it's not an M20 Cain but it is still a pretty beefy gun. You might want to explain how he got such an impressive piece of tech.

 

If you have trouble with your english, one of us might ask you to clarify something we don't understand. We won't do it to be rude, just because wording can sometimes be difficult to get around since Eng isn't the most user-friendly language Welcome to the RP!

 

Hi Zeph, ok, I had spend sometime today reading and now I think I understand better the whole system and story already... I'll edit the the gun stuff... I think I'll stick with the Paladin Gun, that is a family gift and with personal value (Loved that gun in the game)... And maybe then later I can get the Arc Projector, by RPing...

 

About not having the tac cloak, well, actually I don't want him to learn it, at least not yet... I want to developt the character (already thinking about training marksmanship and tac cloak  skills with Kanae ) I just think he never though about being a fighter... But the story will drive him to it... think I want him to need support of stronger characters, but to be clever and capable of making traps and tricks rather than straight fighting... so yeah, can live without Tac Cloak... for now and No worries,  I will not get offended if you ask me to clarify anything that is wrong  written or not clear enough to understand.

[siphernin]

About not having the tac cloak, well, actually I don't want him to learn it, at least not yet... I want to developt the character (already thinking about training marksmanship and tac cloak  skills with Kanae )

if you're training anything with Kanae, you may need that emergency induction port quarians carry with them.

[Gabi_MuadDiB]

if you're training anything with Kanae, you may need that emergency induction port quarians carry with them.

 

Yup bro, got it covered! Can´t travel the Galaxy without it... I think I should make it an addon to my enviro suit ... have some spare ones if you ever need some I guess you´ll bring the triple filtered Turian Brandy?... Or maybe we "borrow" some from Deidrus? hehehe

[Kel Riever]

Character Name: Morgan Severn

 

 

Species: Human

Sex: Male

Age: 37

Occupation: Soldier/Mercenary, Shadow Broker Operative

Biotic: No

Biotic Powers: None

Tech Powers: Tech Armor

Combat Powers: Overkill (like in Mass Effect, really a combination of Adrenaline Rush and Marksman), Immunity¹

Weapons Carried:  Kovalyov Assault Rifle,  M-27 Scimitar Shotgun, M-5 Phalanx with laser sight

Weapons Owned: The above

Ammunition Type:  Phasic Rounds

Basic Appearance:  See below

Personality:  Cynical and bitter, though he aspires to something better.  He spends what he makes as soon as he gets it, loves bars and games of chance, which he picked up his affinity for in the Alliance military.

Brief History:  See below

Other Notes:  A proficient gambler and drinker.  Prefers cards and a good scotch.

Alias/Codename:  Cards (from his Alliance days)

Height: 5'9"

Weight: 165 lbs.

Physical Appearance:  Morgan typically wears Heavy Predator Armor in an urban camo pattern, with a Kuwashii Visor.  Once handsome, his face is now scarred and rugged, having seen some hard times.  He has black hair, dark brown eyes, tanned skin and a strong jaw line.  While of average height, Morgan is broad shouldered and muscular.

Physical Profile:  Healthy, fit and strong, though a number of battle scars leave him with some minor difficulties and discomfort.  Nothing he won’t push his way through, though, if needed.

Personal Biography:  Morgan‘s lifespan encompasses humanity’s introduction to the greater galaxy.  When he was one, the Charon Relay was discovered.  At age 9, his father was killed in action fighting the turians in The First Contact War.  The loss of his father at a young age led to problems with his family and Morgan looked to the stars for his escape. 

 

At eighteen, Morgan enlisted in the Alliance military, becoming a marine, but his experience was far from ideal. Twelve years doing dirty work, fighting Batarians and being overlooked for premier deployments left Morgan with the rank of sergeant and a bitter man. 

 

Unfortunately, more difficulties lay ahead.  Though distant from his family, his mother reached out to him to let him know his sister had begun suffering from a chronic degenerative nerve disorder.  The medication she needed to get by far too expensive for the Severns.  Morgan could not turn his back and began searching for alternatives.  It was then that he was contacted by an agent of The Shadow Broker, who offered to provide payments to the family in exchange for military secrets.

 

Morgan capitulated, unable to obtain the necessary medication through any legal means.  For two more years, he worked selling secrets, before he was caught prying into classified files.  The Alliance could never figure out what Morgan had been looking for or why he was in the files, but he was demoted, reassigned, and discharged after the completion of his term.

 

Thirty-four years old and without a future in front of him, Morgan was desperate.  But while the Alliance had no place for him, The Shadow Broker had continued their payments to the Severns in anticipation of Morgan’s discharge.  The Shadow Broker offered Morgan a position as an operative, going on assignment where needed, doing what had to be done and always gathering information wherever he went.  As far as Morgan was concerned, there wasn’t even a choice to be made.

 

Now Morgan is thirty-seven.  He has no love for his master, but somehow, Morgan keeps his dream of a brighter future alive.  Experience has left him battered and cynical, but adept in combat and dealing with all types.  Morgan’s gear is varied and worn, but effective, much like him.  He wears an old, urban camouflaged suit of Predator armor enhanced with hard light emitters.  For his armaments, he owns everything from a state of the art Phalanx heavy pistol, to a standard issue Katana, and even a venerable Kovalyov assault rifle that he personally modified to use modern ammunition, but still works on the weapon heat-generation system of an earlier era, much like the Lancer.

 

Psychological Profile: Cynical and bitter, but ethical and with a strong desire to live a better life.

Ren/Par percentage: 50/50

Previous and Current Affiliations:  Former Alliance Military, currently working for The Shadow Broker

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Non Military-

Family: Mother, younger brother and younger sister.

Economical Stature: Hand to mouth

Experience before Military Career:  Standard education, though he is relatively smart.  No particular areas of expertise until the military.

Family Service Record:  Father, also a sergeant.  Killed in action in The First Contact War.

Lifestyle:  Rough and tumble, everything he owns is ‘on his back’

Religion: Athiest

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Military-

Class: Soldier

Secondary Class(es) if applicable: None

Special Commendations: The equivalent of a bronze star for his action against the Batarians

Service Record: 16 years as a marine, discharged 3 years ago

Rank: Corporal (demoted from Sergeant)

Kill Count: Nineteen confirmed.  An indeterminate amount of others

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Combat-

Weapon selection(Add all that apply to class restrictions)

Assault:  Kovalyov

Sniper: None currently

Pistol:  Phalanx

SMG:  None currently

Shotgun:  Katana

Armor Proficiencies: (all Light, Medium, Heavy)

Melee:  Omni-blade. 

Combat abilities:  As described above.  For weapon proficiencies, he is familiar with all classes, though not necessarily an expert with all types.

Technical Knowledge Level: Moderate with common tech, mostly inexperienced with advanced tech and not proficient with extremely difficult tasks

Combat Mastery Level:  Well-rounded and effective.  A veteran warrior

Racial Passive Abilities:  Not racial, but high level of fitness

Racial Active Abilities: None

¹Immunity was acquired somewhere after Morgan recovered from his near death experience with Iyana and during the rescue of his family on Earth.

 

Morgan with Predator armor and a Kovalyov assault rifle:

 

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Nice, Kel.

[Redbelle]

V.Nice ^^

 

Looks like another addition to the Audon. Which Jess should be joining soon.

 

By the way, Since Jess is coming aboard, she might have access to some exotic weaponry is folks can meet her price or trade her something good.

[Terca]

Sorry I haven't been around much today, school's been long.

 

As for the char, looks good as the others have said. If Morgan is still working for the Shadow Broker you might be able to come up with your own reason for why he'd want a member of his security being involved with the Audron... For which I have an idea but as it's your character it's up to you how you want to fannagle that.

[Kel Riever]

I'll send a friend request so we can PM about Shadow Broker stuff.  Always open to ideas and collaboration.

 

For the story I'm at pg 2 so will post when I am caught up

[maffewishigh]

Name:  Jean Andreau 

 

Alias/Codename: N/A

 

Race: Human

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 25

 

Height: 6" 2'

 

Weight: 96 Kg

 

Physical Appearance:  medium length, scruffy brown hair, several scars on his chest. Blue eyes, defined facial structure. No facial hair. Well built. 

 

Physical Profile: Well built, but not too strong. Jean underwent his military Training but never went to the military due to recent events. His strength is well balanced with his upper and lower body. Jean has an above average stamina, and an excellent focus. Has a tough chest as it is mostly metal. 

 

Personal Biography: Jean was born in England with 2 french parents, his father of which was soon shot in battle. Jean went through his life, protecting his younger sister, and aiming to go into the military to honor his father, and do him proud. After a tough life with education, he was accepted onto military training and passed with great difficulty, but was soon captured and taken off for biological experiments.

 

Psychological Profile: Jean has always had a strong mental health, only encountering mild anxiety during his teenage years, as most do. His mental health was left in various states of dilapidation after he and his family were attacked and he was abducted (well, it will be, he hasn't been released yet).

 

Ren/Par percentage: 90/40

 

Previous and Current Affiliations: Previous brief, weak affiliation with the military.

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Non Military-

 

Family: A mother and 1 younger sister.

 

Economical Stature: Currently worth nothing, as he hasn't had the chance to make himself worth a single credit. 

 

Experience before Military Career: Student.

 

Family Service Record: Father received many reward within the first contact war.

 

Lifestyle: Jean is easy and compliant, he merely wishes to keep warm, and comfortable, and be able to get from A to B without being shot in the face by a shotgun. He isn't picky with what he does, but he does often like to buy expensive food, and would like to have a nice expensive ship one day.

 

Religion: Athiest

 

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Military-

 

Class: Engineer

 

Secondary Class(es) if applicable:

 

Special Commendations:  N/A

 

Service Record:N/A

 

Rank: 1 

 

Kill Count: 4

 

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Combat-

 

Weapon selection(Add all that apply to class restrictions)

 

Assault: Gorgon AS

Sniper: Black Widow

Pistol: Harpy Pistol

SMG:

Shotgun:

 

Armor Proficiencies: Medium
 

Melee: Master of Muay Thai, Ninjutsu and Brazilian Jiu Jitsu 

 

Combat abilities: Sabotage, Cryo blast, tech armor.

 

Technical Knowledge Level: master of the technology, like over 9000

 

Combat Mastery Level: Basic knowledge, like, level 4.

 

Racial Passive Abilities: N/A

 

Racial Active Abilities: N/A

 

Note: He has a practically fully metal chest, he has titanium false and true ribs, titanium manubrium and body of the sternum, the xiphoid process of the sternum was replaced by titanium and attached to the body of it, titanium clavicles and mechanized interclavicular ligament, all of these were put into place by the abductors that took jean away for biological experiments. 

[ParkBom]

Sorry for the late response! I just saw your post now. With the name Jean, ALL I can think about is Jean Kirschtein.

 

I need to reevaluate my life.

 

But other than that, nice looking character. I'm guessing his technological skill is equal to like.. Legion. I'd imagine we could give him combat manuals to download or something, haha. (jkjk... unless we could actually do that.) If I were you, I would remove two of the three weapons he has, probably the sniper and the assault rifle. This is just because if he's a captured experiment, he wouldn't have access to so much weaponry or Spectre-reserved gear, at least if we're trying to bust him out. 

 

Anyway, who was the group that captured him, if I may ask? If that's a secret (because i know rpers love our characters' secrets, haha), how are we to recruit him? I mean like, are we going to be given his dossier or...? Idk because he's only had loose ties to the military so I don't think he'd be considered a specialist. The most probable I could see is going through a mission, raiding an enemy base, and finding him at the end there, kinda like how Legion is recruited in ME2. It just happens and isn't planned.

 

If you want, he could be tied to a mission that's happening. For instance, if he could be in the hands of Eclipse, I could have Adelaide bust him out during her raid of the base.