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[Cainhurst Crow]

I know, all I gotta do is change some of the dialouge, react to naleena's stuff, and the rest can stay the same. Got the whole thing copy/pasted and ready to go.

[Cainhurst Crow]

BACK IN BUSINESS AND BAKC ON TRACK!!! XD

No more brakes on this train.

[Kel Riever]

Okay, ugh, now I feel I can't write what I was going to.

 

If anybody feels their character is unduly compromised in what I am printing, I'll be happy to edit later.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Temper tantrum deleted.

[Kel Riever]

Okay, I don't quite know what to say here.....

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

I've got an idea.... Jen and I delete our posts, and all four of us coordinate this escape. I'm deleting mine now.

[Cainhurst Crow]

Let's all just move forward, no hurt feelings from anyone? I'm sorry if I ended up stepping on anyones toes here, if that helps.

EDIT: I like SJ's plan better.

[Kel Riever]

I have to stop writing for now.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

I'm gone for the next 90 minutes.

[Redbelle]

Guys.... Samacen doesn't haaaave to die if you can think of a way of talking our way out. He's asked for an explanation and a giant door has closed behind the group so we have time if anyone wants to go a more dialouge orientated route. Samacen will be around later then so folks can have their wicked way with him.

 

For stuff after that, I put it in the co-ordination thread.

[Cknarf]

And I'll just be here, stalking the forum, endlessly refreshing the page until something shows up... I need help.

[Redbelle]

What do you need help with?

[Cknarf]

I need help getting a life lol.  

RP wise, I'm fine.  Just hanging out, looking forward to the next posts. 

[Cainhurst Crow]

Neat. it might take a bit but we'll get something up at some point and it'll be cool.

 

Glad you're enjoying your time here so far.

[favoritehookeronthecitadel]

Adding a character. Haven't started reading this but am going to tomorrow when I get off work. 

 

Edit- reading the first part of it now.

[Redbelle]

Hey FHC

 

It's been 36 pages of collector hunting madness thus far and we've come across the future of them on the planet Duellos. We're currently in get the hell out of there mode as it's currently a Western/Zombie apocalypse going on right now.

[Cainhurst Crow]

Adding a character. Haven't started reading this but am going to tomorrow when I get off work. 

 

Edit- reading the first part of it now.

 

Welcome to the group. Happy to have you.

 

What do you go by anyway? favoritehookeronthecitadel is a mouthful to type.

[Kel Riever]

Hi, FH, jump on in. (and @Jen, like I shorten your name, I call favoritehookeronthecitadel a host of names, FH, favoritehooker, favoriteH...

 

So for Chasing Spectres, I'd like to write but really feel it is smarter for me to let it go until the scene with the Drowned Aspire compound is done.  Go ahead, and if you want to write Morgan, have him do whatever you need to in character.

[Redbelle]

Okay, If the Zenon Vayne post goes ahead we'll move on from there. A victim of the DA confronting a face of her oppressor seems like something that should happen. For all the talk of the DA they do have something to answer for, and as of yet the group doesn't really know about indoctrination so as far as we know, it's all on the DA.

[Cainhurst Crow]

Sounds good to me. I'm going to rework some of the dialogue though, to make it seem more logical and stuff as a chain of events.

 

The changes I make will be pm'd to you guys before I post it, so you can make whatever changes you'd like to make made and we can get this done all in one go.

[Redbelle]

So I'm back at work again for the week but I'll be looking through and adding to what we have.

 

I'd like to set this up so that Irina can have her confrontation with Samacen. He's not really that important a character other than being a face man for the DA. Since the DA have revealed their colours at this point having a face man isn't neccessary for the rest of Duellos. It's now a force of nature that'll sweep the planet. Also, these guy's will be making other appearences around the galaxy.

 

The things Shepard lets slip eh?

 

"Council! I have saved the galaxy from imminent invasion, postponed until a time I really couldn't say. Destroyed the advance force of the Reapers..... Because they totally exist...... you know this..... And  generally been a boss. Go on... Start apoligising. Now, let's talk about my inauguration.....".

 

"Shaddup Shepard. The galaxies been eaten alive by new collector's! How can you not know about this"?!?

 

"....... I leave you people alone for one minute.......".

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Just let me know what you think of what's in the coordination PM. Samacen doesn't have to die, but it's up to you. I've got the feeling he's now the face of the DA, but doesn't really know all of what's going on like Jeb did. He was their head of security, and Jeb's number 2, and now would have been in charge of everything, but Jeb unleashed the horde.

 

I still feel weird about what happened.

[Cainhurst Crow]

Don't worry about it SJ, this stuff happens to the best of us. Trust me on that one.

[Redbelle]

Currently pulling together what we have got and adding my bits in. Will post it in the PM section when done.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

I added the final bits, and am posting now. I made one tiny correction.