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[Kel Riever]

Okay, I'll get back into this.  Likely writing tonight or tomorrow.  

 

My compliments on the whole piece where the three of you (Jensaarai, Shotgun Julia and RedBelle) worked together.

[favoritehookeronthecitadel]

Ok, well, my character's almost finished. Do you have any suggestions on how you'd like him to be implemented in the current story? I'm going to read it, but that still doesn't mean I know where they should go lol.

[Redbelle]

If you haven't already can you post your character in the character thread? I can have a look and see where a good place to add him in will be. We're coming upto the return to the port town where some serious shenanigan's will occur. We can look towards adding you before, during or after depending on who your character is.

[Kel Riever]

Can we add Frank Eli, by the way?  That might involve some switching things around but I bet he's ready to go.

[Redbelle]

Beans? Yep, he's in already. He was snagged by Eteon. He's waiting on the Audron. He's ready to go as soon as we all get aboard.

 

Oh, Beans might be hearing some whisper's about robbing a train btw. Just throwing that out there.

 

I'm going to wait a little to see if FH put's his character in and if we can get him involved at some point. If that doens't happen soon I'll progress us to the town where the Sheriff will be waiting.

 

Currently developing the Sheriff atm. Being a hanar he's not the twirly mustache kind of villain

[favoritehookeronthecitadel]

I've been working bit by bit on the character for a few days. It's only half way done and I wanted it to be complete before you guys saw it. But, Redbelle, I will go ahead and post it before heading to work. It will be incomplete but the general concept is there. 

[Redbelle]

General concept's good. Last thing I want to do is introduce a priest of the good church in the wretched hive of lust and debauchery with a woman on each arm.

 

Okay I wasn't going to do that.... but you get the idea.

[Kel Riever]

Yeah!  FH's character is average height!

 

Brofist.

 

Serious question:  Shall we move onto Sheriff shenanigans, (ifn we do, I have some nonsense to plug in there) and then robbing a train?  Which I presume involves the Audron?  Or is there something else someone wants to see in the cards?

 

Oh, and Irina, fix your bike

[Cknarf]

Frank would love to explore the Audron, but Androkan seems to be taking his time.  I doubt that guard will just let him run around, and I can't picture a guy Frank's size choking-out a Turian with an assault rifle... I don't suppose someone can let him out of that room? lol.

[favoritehookeronthecitadel]

Added incomplete application. And yes Kel I loved your character after reading the application. I was worried at first because he seemed similar but I think they could become bros if 2 killers for hire do that sorta thing haha.

[Kel Riever]

@Frank.  You might get run of the ship if you write in a brief questioning.  I'd imagine Deidrus gives Eteon's advice some heavy consideration and after some background checking, you might start getting some positive response from the Turians.   Especially if something needs to be tweaked in engineering.  Because you know, something always needs to be tweaked.

 

Especially since there was a cooling leak a while ago

 

@FH, yeah I see only good things.  Besides, I can see the difference in personality, even if we have had more similar career paths than say people of different professions.

[Cknarf]

Maybe Frank can annoy the guard enough to call someone down?

"Eteon, come back and get this human before I shoot him..."

Then he could find some task to complete.  What do you guys think?

[Kel Riever]

I say do it!

[Kel Riever]

So, to the rest of the group coming back, what do you want to see happen next?

[Cainhurst Crow]

Sorry i've been gone today. This week is finals for me, which didn't realize, and I was super busy.

[favoritehookeronthecitadel]

Yeah, just let me know how you want to integrate my character. I'm going to spend tonight finishing the application and tonight and tomorrow binge reading the story thus far. If not read 36 pages, at least read the beginning chunk and ending chunk and then finish it later.

 

Meanwhile if you want to include my character in a post, that's fine. Just try to keep him in character. Or you can wait for me to introduce him, either way.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

So, to the rest of the group coming back, what do you want to see happen next?

 

 

Shootout with the Sheriff's posse! And a gunfight between Capt'n Stone and the Sheriff.

[Redbelle]

Okay, my last post.

 

I've put Eteon back in play to find another crewmember. She's going to the same bar the crew was at the day before.

 

Bean's shuttle will be recovered so folks will have something to RP once we leave the planet.

 

And the Port Authority has disovered that the Audron has been intercepting comuniques intended form them. They can't exactly run aboard a military ship and expect no resistance...... So guess whose being sent to interecept the Mecha-Steed riding Scooby Gang? There's the reason for the Hanar sheriff meeting the group. And he's a sadistic trigger happy sort too.

 

FH. We've RP'd the bar earlier. Eteon's heading over that way. If you want to introduce your character in that place feel free. It's D&D 101.

 

'So your in a bar.... There's a bar with bottles stacked on the wooden shelves and a bartender whose washing a glass behind the counter. Meanwhile a musician tinkle's the ivories in a corner as people's voices fight for dominance as working girls on the upper floor look for a good mark. You have a beer in front of you that's nearly dry and you consider another one when a Female Turian in armour arrives through the door. She ignore's the stares but notice she walks indirectly towards the bar. Keeping those some might consider dangerous on the side where her side arm sits in full view and she arrives, order's a drink, and goes to sit in a corner booth. Meanwhile a group of rowdy card player's erupt and one stands only to be struck in the face by another and he goes flying in the direction of the Turian. The group at the table laugh and the one near the Turian get's up on all fours with an angry expression, his chips gone into a pot that is now being collected leaving his space with nothing but an empty seat in the game. What do you do?'

[Cknarf]

Alright! Frank won't be homeless anymore lol.

[Kel Riever]

Shootout with the Sheriff's posse! And a gunfight between Capt'n Stone and the Sheriff.

 

So it doesn't look like the ride back to town takes two days instead of two hours, I'll wait for you to post something up about this before doing a Morgan entry.

[Redbelle]

Okay, works done so I can actually focus on what I'm doing again.

 

Anyway. I'll be developing that bit up above into a pickmeup for FH's character to play against.

 

SGJ has the sheriff part wrapped up I believe so I'm free to focus on Eteon.

 

Aaaand now I have to go back and re-read what we wrote about the bar. Hold your noses! I'm going into 37 pages of awesomesness!

[Kel Riever]

I think you should PM FH before you get to work on the next piece with him.

[Redbelle]

oki doki

[Redbelle]

@SGJ. Niiice. I think folks are going to be writing reaction scenes soon that Kel's sets up nicely. I've asked him to forward that over so that we don't get to far ahead of the game.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Okay gang see the coordination thread for the shootout.