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[Sui Causa]

You ******* better not change anything! I have alot to catch up on as it is when it comes to fanfiction & I do not need you making it worse (unless it is more new material for you, especially smut, I like the smut).

I don't think I'd change the substance so much as just fix the editing issues and that kind of thing to make it flow better. I, use, too, many, commas, and, I, want, to, remedy, that.

 

<.<

 

On a different note related to my writing, after mulling over the ideas I've had, I think I will actually go through with writing some Dorian into the mixture in a future story, gauge people's reaction to it and then go from there. I explored writing Dorian just a tiny bit in the next chapter of Requisitioned, and after dreaming on it I came up with a good way to keep all three of them in character but still willing to hump each other.

 

Rather, Lavellan and Iron Bull willing to push Dorian's buttons and see what happens, at least. >.>

[ZerioctheTank]

I don't think I'd change the substance so much as just fix the editing issues and that kind of thing to make it flow better. I, use, too, many, commas, and, I, want, to, remedy, that.

<.<

On a different note related to my writing, after mulling over the ideas I've had, I think I will actually go through with writing some Dorian into the mixture in a future story, gauge people's reaction to it and then go from there. I explored writing Dorian just a tiny bit in the next chapter of Requisitioned, and after dreaming on it I came up with a good way to keep all three of them in character but still willing to hump each other.

Rather, Lavellan and Iron Bull willing to push Dorian's buttons and see what happens, at least. >.>

Is Bull going to send Lavellan over to Dorian to tease him while he watches from a far. I can totally see the big guy just sitting back to watch for a while before indulging in on the fun himself.

[Sui Causa]

Is Bull going to send Lavellan over to Dorian to tease him while he watches from a far. I can totally see the big guy just sitting back to watch for a while before indulging in on the fun himself.

I could also totally see that happening. Keheheh. I have a headcannon of Dorian and Lavellan flirting shamelessly non stop because they're both using pretty masks to hide their hurts and a lot of psych stuff that Iron Bull just loves figuring out but I'll avoid tl;dring about that. Iron Bull watches and instead of being jealous like most people expect him to be, he's filing it away for f@p material later. >.>

 

I have an awkward conversation planned where Dorian tries to confront Bull and get some answers about just what exactly it is that he and Lavellan do. Bull basically tells him to ask Lavellan, not knowing that Lavellan basically told Dorian to ask Bull so Dorian at this point is ready to start swearing at both of them.

 

Setting up their dynamic will be a lot of fun so I went from looking at this with wariness to ...this could be great fun haha.

 

To make up for my ramblings, have some Iron Bull.

http://kickingshoes....e-to-have-a-few

 

http://fossatomo.tum...-followers-just

[Sui Causa]

Annnd some more screenshots after browsing through some of my more recent ones.

Iron Bull happy

Iron Bull happy...

Iron Bull having a lot more trust in his footing then I would ever trust my own.

I love this one, but I really wish I had taken it when I had my Iron Bull 24/7 tattoos mod installed. ;w;

And one more of him smiling because I just love seeing this guy happy.

[EggplantRed]

Excuse the crappy phone pic quality but I love getting to see his tattoos while we're out and about...just wanted to show a little Bull love 

 

[mordy_was_here]

I'm just gonna leave this here... http://www.nexusmods...tion/mods/427/?

 

I made a mod that gives bull nipple piercings and replaces his standard nude model with the tattooed nude texture you get during the romance scenes. Piercings optional Enjoy, Bullriders

[snackrat]

Is anyone else having trouble with Demands of the Qun? I'm supposed to be able to talk to him back at Skyhold (where he either mourns, or is attacked, depending) but I can't trigger it. Trying to talk with him just opens the convo wheel (in which I've exhausted all options).

 

Tried leaving Skyhold and returning, tried loading before the quest and doing it over again.

[Tvorceskiy]

Is anyone else having trouble with Demands of the Qun? I'm supposed to be able to talk to him back at Skyhold (where he either mourns, or is attacked, depending) but I can't trigger it. Trying to talk with him just opens the convo wheel (in which I've exhausted all options).

Tried leaving Skyhold and returning, tried loading before the quest and doing it over again.

Have you tried going and doing a mission or two?

[ZerioctheTank]

I'm just gonna leave this here... http://www.nexusmods...tion/mods/427/?

I made a mod that gives bull nipple piercings and replaces his standard nude model with the tattooed nude texture you get during the romance scenes. Piercings optional Enjoy, Bullriders

I'll pass on the piercings but hell yes on the tattoos!

Also I posted this already but this song for us bull riders!

Nine Inch Nails - Closer (Director's Cut):

[Rekkampum]

I'm just gonna leave this here... http://www.nexusmods...tion/mods/427/?

 

I made a mod that gives bull nipple piercings and replaces his standard nude model with the tattooed nude texture you get during the romance scenes. Piercings optional Enjoy, Bullriders

 

They have one that removes the patch covering his eye also.

[snackrat]

Have you tried going and doing a mission or two?

 

Yes.That's what I did when I left Skyhold, I finished off a guy in the Emerald Graves for Cullen.

 

My other saves have been able to talk to him right away, dunno what changed. Going to try deleting the patch and repairing the game through Origin to see if that works.

 

EDIT: It didn't.

I also noted that the quest appears to be auto-completing - the quest log thinks I have already talked to Bull.

My other saves were fine. I reeeeally hope I'm not needing to start a new one because I intend to do his romance content with the save, and finishing Demands of the Qun properly is a requirement for that.

[Hellion Rex]

I'm just gonna leave this here... http://www.nexusmods...tion/mods/427/?

 

I made a mod that gives bull nipple piercings and replaces his standard nude model with the tattooed nude texture you get during the romance scenes. Piercings optional Enjoy, Bullriders

Hmmm, I wish they were nipple rings lol.

[Rekkampum]

Has anyone else gotten the "Katoh" speech from Cole while traveling with a romanced Bull yet?

[Sui Causa]

Yesssss. I take Cole everywhere haha.

[Rekkampum]

Yesssss. I take Cole everywhere haha.

 

The bit about making out on the War Table had me dying laughing. I'd heard about the banter, but to hear it for myself... That wasn't as rich as hearing Cassandra advise Bull to keep his bedroom door locked. 

[Sui Causa]

But the contents of the room are so much more interesting than the locks on the door!

 

I pretty much love everything anyone says to Bull about the romance haha. My favorite is still when Cole does the Katoh thing, if you say "Bull and I are consenting adults..." You get the war table bit. But if you have Solas in the group and choose the Mortified. option, you get

 

"If a rift opened up and swallowed me right now, I'd be okay with that."

 

And then f*cking Solas chimes in. "Provided it tied you down first, one assumes."

 

I just lost it, laughed so hard. My Dalish Inquisitor will no doubt be thrilled to find out that Fen'Harel, one of his gods, makes jokes to tease him about his very kinky sex life.

[EggplantRed]

I'm still waiting for Cole's banter...maybe now that Bull and Cole have warmed up to each other I'll hear it at some point.
I've only had Sera mention them before.

[vertigomez]

And then f*cking Solas chimes in. "Provided it tied you down first, one assumes."
 
I just lost it, laughed so hard. My Dalish Inquisitor will no doubt be thrilled to find out that Fen'Harel, one of his gods, makes jokes to tease him about his very kinky sex life.

Well, Solas does adore "power, intrigue, danger and sex".

[Joe25]

So was I the only one that made a red headed Inquisitor just to keep Bull from eying other girls/guys?  

[JessicaThrasher]

But the contents of the room are so much more interesting than the locks on the door!

 

I pretty much love everything anyone says to Bull about the romance haha. My favorite is still when Cole does the Katoh thing, if you say "Bull and I are consenting adults..." You get the war table bit. But if you have Solas in the group and choose the Mortified. option, you get

 

"If a rift opened up and swallowed me right now, I'd be okay with that."

 

And then f*cking Solas chimes in. "Provided it tied you down first, one assumes."

 

I just lost it, laughed so hard. My Dalish Inquisitor will no doubt be thrilled to find out that Fen'Harel, one of his gods, makes jokes to tease him about his very kinky sex life.

This is the most beautiful thing I've read in awhile.

[EggplantRed]

I just said yesterday that Alcina hadn't heard Cole remark on her and Bull's relationship and of course I got it tonight!

 

Al ended up saying they were consenting adults...Cole mentioned the war room table...Dorian just laughed and so did I 

[Sui Causa]

I put a little snippet of the next chapter I'm working on for Requisitioned up on my Tumblr, just to get some feedback on the Dorian related things I've been working on. (And totally take a bit of a break since I've done nothing but write in my free time for ages now haha.) It's kind of setting the groundwork for how the three of them will start. Dorian making moon eyes at a Bullriding Lavellan, Iron Bull totally noticing and mulling it over unsure what to do with that info yet, and Lavellan completely unaware because of course he has no idea.

 

Also... ♥

[EggplantRed]

Read your snippet Sui. I'm really intrigued by it. I'm trying to imagine how Bull would introduce the idea to Lav. Would it be more of a Bull inviting Dorian up one night and surprising Lav, sitting Lav down and broaching the idea with him first, or a talk amongst the three of them in a safe place away from bed and/or drinking first? Or leaving secret notes for Dorian and Lav and they happen to arrive at Bull's room at the same time like WTH is going on?

I'm ready to see where you go with it....

[Sui Causa]

Read your snippet Sui. I'm really intrigued by it. I'm trying to imagine how Bull would introduce the idea to Lav. Would it be more of a Bull inviting Dorian up one night and surprising Lav, sitting Lav down and broaching the idea with him first, or a talk amongst the three of them in a safe place away from bed and/or drinking first? Or leaving secret notes for Dorian and Lav and they happen to arrive at Bull's room at the same time like WTH is going on?

I'm ready to see where you go with it....

I'm thinking that at some point Dorian is going to confront Bull with a question along the lines of 'Just what do you do exactly?' Dorian sees how Lavellan has changed because of Bull, how he's not guarded and he's not using masks anymore because he's just...comfortable with himself. And part of Dorian really wants to be comfortable with himself too. So they have the sexy attraction stuff going for them, but there's a lot more to it then that because of how similar the ways Dorian and Lavellan deal with their insecurities are.

 

Bull will bring it up with Lavellan after sex. Iron Bull being all thoughtful working things out in his head, Lavellan asks him what he's thinking about, Bull says Dorian and Lavellan is like "....Right now you're thinking about Dorian?" Lolol. But Bull will basically point out things to Lavellan that Lavellan has never really saw because he just see's Dorian's masks. He cares for Dorian a lot, there's the sexy attraction too, but he's going to look at it as what Dorian needs is family, and maybe he's willing to share his family (Iron Bull) if it means he can help him. And then Operation Seduce Dorian commences. Keheheheh...

 

I wish I could write sex without all the head-stuff. Lol. ;_; It'd make it a lot easier. I've been thinking this all up for a while and I really needed to get this little plot out where someone could tell me I'm crazy haha. Depending on how this goes I might make it separate from the series of these two and kind of stand alone. Or I might just incorporate it and roll with it idk. I just like exploring Dorian and I reallllly want to explore him via The Iron Bull. >:3 (I'm sure Lavellan would be okay with that too. ♥)

[EggplantRed]

Oooh I like that angle!
Dorian's curiosity gets the better of him, Bull sees what Dorian needs, gets Lav to see it too...sexy times commence!
Would it be a one off type thing between them? Long term get togethers? Stop once Dorian finds his groove? Evolve into more between all of them? As you can see I'm quite curious and interested...

And no you're not crazy...well maybe a little but I'm crazy too so I love it!!!