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The only thing stopping me from posting the first chapter of my OT3 story now, is the need to re-read/edit it one more time and make sure I didn't miss something.

 

And to try and polish down the Iron Bull/ Lavellan sex scene just a bit because WHERE DID THIS THING COME FROM AND WHY IS IT SO LONG AND FILTHY?


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The only thing stopping me from posting the first chapter of my OT3 story now, is the need to re-read/edit it one more time and make sure I didn't miss something.

 

And to try and polish down the Iron Bull/ Lavellan sex scene just a bit because WHERE DID THIS THING COME FROM AND WHY IS IT SO LONG AND FILTHY?

I am not liking a reduction in smut  :P

 

Go ahead and PM me the unedited smut please  :ph34r:  :lol:


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Oh guys guys!! I am writing now the best part of my fic!! Phhheeeeew!! So many sensations while wriitng the paragraph.....Oh all this sudden increase in temperature...!!!! :wub:  I am even getting jealous cause its me who would like to be in that scene!!!! 

 

Is this normal while writing hot stuff?  :ph34r:


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#11629
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Oh guys guys!! I am writing now the best part of my fic!! Phhheeeeew!! So many sensations while wriitng the paragraph.....Oh all this sudden increase in temperature...!!!! :wub:  I am even getting jealous cause its me who would like to be in that scene!!!! 

 

Is this normal while writing hot stuff?  :ph34r:

Once upon a time I may have had that problem, but at this point I write so much goddamn smut I think I've become desensitized while I'm writing it. Sometimes when I read it over later I think "Damn, that was pretty hot!" but...not when I'm writing it. xD Too focused on whether I used the same word too many times in one paragraph and ****.

 

Don't worry Eggplant, it shouldn't be butchered too badly. Just getting rid of some rambling here and there so it all flows smoothly. ♥

 

Edit: Now it's titles and summaries, ugghhhh.


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#11630
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That moment when you go through your drafts and find a little smutty gem you should finish...  :whistle:


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That moment when you go through your drafts and find a little smutty gem you should finish...  :whistle:


Oh my god, this is me.

So much unfinished porn. Nowhere to post. :(
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#11632
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sdfg;kdksdaklf;sdalfjksdf;lkj.

ITS DONE.

http://archiveofouro...g/works/4010737 <- Click for glorious Iron Bull x Male Lavellan x Dorian totally already NSFW even though the story has barely begun.

 

FINALLY, FINALLY DONE. PRAISE THE MAKER FOR HE HAS RETURNED.

Now to go write the other three chapters because it's totally not done until those are done too. ._.

 

(If there was a place to post unfinished porn, I'd have a loooot of stuff to throw at it.)


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sdfg;kdksdaklf;sdalfjksdf;lkj.

ITS DONE.

http://archiveofouro...g/works/4010737 <- Click for glorious Iron Bull x Male Lavellan x Dorian totally already NSFW even though the story has barely begun.

 

FINALLY, FINALLY DONE. PRAISE THE MAKER FOR HE HAS RETURNED.

Now to go write the other three chapters because it's totally not done until those are done too. ._.

 

(If there was a place to post unfinished porn, I'd have a loooot of stuff to throw at it.)

 

Oh Suiiii, you dirty-minded  :wub:  :wub: haha. So messy content between Lavellan and Bull  :devil:. it´s amazing man...Be sure to take your time with the other chapters  ^_^. Congratulations :D.

 

Pd:

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#11634
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I've been gone for far too long my fellow Riders!!! How have y'all been?


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#11635
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All this lovely smut! 

I started "reviewing" one of the smutty gems I found...a few sentences turned into three pages...and their clothes are still on  :blink:


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#11636
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Hey Elu!!! It's been forever since you stopped by!
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#11637
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Oh Suiiii, you dirty-minded :wub: :wub: haha. So messy content between Lavellan and Bull :devil:. it´s amazing man...Be sure to take your time with the other chapters ^_^. Congratulations :D.

Pd:

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Yeeeaaaaahhh at some point i stopped being shy and proper about the smut and just started just rolling with it, haha. No shame here!

All the kink negotiation when Dorian gets involved is going to be funnnn.

Haiii Elu~
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Yeeeaaaaahhh at some point i stopped being shy and proper about the smut and just started just rolling with it, haha. No shame here!

All the kink negotiation when Dorian gets involved is going to be funnnn.

Haiii Elu~

Yep! Just let the smut roll  :D

 

EDITED: Randomness I'm loving on Tumblr right now- discussions about Iron Bull meeting the Dragonborn. If IB met my Dragonborn, Ryal, it would be too much to handle. I can just imagine the first time he sees her devour a dragon's soul and then fus ro dah a dragon out of the sky to ride it!!! OMG so much BAness...



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lmao I posted that reaver comment on tumblr and it fuckin exp lodED??! WHERE DID ALL THESE THIRSTY BULLRIDERS COME FROM.
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#11640
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Makes me wanna mod the horses in Darksiders to Iron Bull lol.


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#11641
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Hmmmm. Speaking of smut; has anyone named one of their stories "Safe Harbor from the Storm outside" yet?


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Posted a new fic, Road Trip to Nowhere.

I forgot I started the draft on AO3 and it was due to be deleted in a few days so I got moving on the short first chapter. Other chapters will be longer. No smut or angst, a little fluffy later on though.

It's a modern AU fic inspired by the Tumblr meme I posted some time ago (Modern DA- Iron Bull).


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#11643
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Motorcycle road trip with Iron Bull sounds like one of those things that should be on literally everyone's bucket list. Hot damn! :wub:
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#11644
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Motorcycle road trip with Iron Bull sounds like one of those things that should be on literally everyone's bucket list. Hot damn! :wub:

I know!!!  :wub:



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My lovely friend Tryxal drew my Lavellan again, this time showing off his assets. OHhhh lawdy lawdy. ♥♥ Iron Bull is directly responsible for the things that he and his friends get up to. He created this monster. <3

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Preview spoiler'd for size. http://suicausa.tumb...elves-in-lace-3 This is the full thing. Decidedly NSFW, you have been warnedddd. x3


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#11646
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Yeah I just saw it come across my Tumblr feed....it is so yummy  <3  :devil:


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#11647
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And the first thing I noticed was the bruise on Lav's neck in that pic! 

 

You are terrible inspiration for smut Sui!!! And by terrible I mean wonderful  :wub:


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#11648
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Yeah me and my friend have discussed this scene in detail before, and at some point I'm going to have to write it out. xD But it's kind of in the future after the Inquisition type story. Buuuutttt yeah, pretty much maximum smut. <3 Three elves drawn together by their similar affections for their qunari men, giving each other horrible, horrible ideas and basically just being the biggest little shits ever.

 

Iron Bull patiently teaching the other qunari the point system he keeps Lavellan under control with, because oh god do they need some kind of method to keep them from getting out of hand. /snicker

 

At some point, I imagine Dorian's father coming to visit for reasons. Plot ones of course, because somewhere in there I have to work in some plot. And Dorian looking his father straight in the eye and being like "I'm just one of many in the Inquisitor's harem." with a totally straight face, while Lavellan chokes on whatever he's drinking at the time and tries not to keel over. One of his friends being like "PSSST, what's a harem?" and Iron Bull just shaking his head because how is it people still fear the Inquisitor?

 

JUST...terrible, terrible ideas.


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#11649
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Oh the harem!!! If Halward wasn't clear about Dorian's affections for men before...

I want you to write all of this- background for the wonderful drawing, Halward visiting and pissing his pants that Dorian's in a loving triad...ALL OF IT  :kissing:


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#11650
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It's on the list, somedayyyy. xD I can only do one at a time, so for now it's OT3! Though I do have a oneshot I might write for Iron Bull and Lavellan in between, that would of course be very...dirty. Iron Bull and Dorian playing a chess match, Dorian unaware that Lavellan is under the table.

 

I'll go now, I'm a terrible person and I feel bad. :whistle:


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