So, what would you like to see changed to make it work for you?
I think that for a male Quizzy, her romance works well. But for me, first I would like her to be a little more observant when being flirted with. Most of the romance is flirting and Josie not getting that she's being pursued, and then BAM, "oh I get it and I like you too!". Ugh.
I know when I'm being flirted with, it's unmistakable, and the whole "not getting it" thing just sort of makes her look rather childish and overly naive, especially for someone who is portrayed as a very intelligent, well traveled, and a master at politics.
I really don't know what I would change the second half of her romance to, I just know I can't quite connect with what we have been offered. Maybe if it had some personal crisis that involved The Game, or was taken hostage by some outside faction, or something other than forced betrothal to some douche bag noble dude nobody ever heard of. Would have been much better if another female lover from her past suddenly enters the picture and starts causing issues, jealousy, ect.