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I believe you can post documents if that fails tag it and I'm sure we can help come up with a ending

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I cant figure out how to post a document so spoiler tags it is. Ok, guys, be nice. It is my first time writing Sera and femslash. It is a Lavellan/Sera fic where Lavellan wanted to wait to have sex when initiating romance. Then got tired of waiting. I cant figure out how to end it...Also need to figure out a title. NSFW

 

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Wut.

 

I dunno, I use it as a way of saying hi. I do it to the cass thread too.

 

bsn humour Based off "ya'll need Jesus" to explain one's uncomfortablity or dislike of X topic.

 

Seriosuly? I always thought it a religious tongue-in-cheek greeting. Well, looks like I got that so very wrong!



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I cant figure out how to post a document so spoiler tags it is. Ok, guys, be nice. It is my first time writing Sera and femslash. It is a Lavellan/Sera fic where Lavellan wanted to wait to have sex when initiating romance. Then got tired of waiting. I cant figure out how to end it...Also need to figure out a title. NSFW

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*blood explode from mouth and nose* awesome work best I've read in month. I don't have any suggestions. Cept I want more. :)
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*blood explode from mouth and nose* awesome work best I've read in month. I don't have any suggestions. Cept I want more. :)

Thanks. I was a little nervous about posting it, so I'm glad you liked it. I had this idea in my brain for a week and had to write it.



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I dunno, I use it as a way of saying hi. I do it to the cass thread too.


Seriosuly? I always thought it a religious tongue-in-cheek greeting. Well, looks like I got that so very wrong!

it partly is but often used as a "soft" insult to other opinion it's multipurpos. Spend as much as I do on the forums and hangout in the seedier "rougher" parts of the bsn you fInd the dual meaning here. :P
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Thanks. I was a little nervous about posting it, so I'm glad you liked it. I had this idea in my brain for a week and had to write it.

I know the feeling just got over my writers block Thursday now I just need ink ribbons

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Here's a screenshot of my Lavellan warrior (the one I wrote the fic about)
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Here's a screenshot of my Lavellan warrior (the one I wrote the fic about)

She's pretty.

On your fic: you could stand to drop the adverbs in favour of more descriptive sentences.

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Granted any advice from me should be taken with a grain of salt since I've only ever done crack fics.

Just my two cents.

I dunno, I use it as a way of saying hi. I do it to the cass thread too.


I've seen enough posts from you to know you're alright.
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She's pretty.

On your fic: you could stand to drop the adverbs in favour of more descriptive sentences.

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Granted any advice from me should be taken with a grain of salt since I've only ever done crack fics.

Just my two cents.

Thanks for the feedback. I'll make sure to keep that in mind when I decide to finish and post it.



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Well

 

I cant figure out how to post a document so spoiler tags it is. Ok, guys, be nice. It is my first time writing Sera and femslash. It is a Lavellan/Sera fic where Lavellan wanted to wait to have sex when initiating romance. Then got tired of waiting. I cant figure out how to end it...Also need to figure out a title. NSFW

 

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gosh

 

It can be nerve-wracking posting a new fic... especially so with one that's this heated!

 

 

Sadly, your Lavellan picture doesn't work for me - I can't see it!



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It can be nerve-wracking posting a new fic... especially so with one that's this heated!

 

Sadly, your Lavellan picture doesn't work for me - I can't see it!

https://account.xbox...e5-41bc3a3a6568

 

Here's the link to the image. Let me know if you still can't see it. Do you have any thoughts on how to end my fic? It still feels like its missing something. Like some cute flirty dialogue to wrap it up.



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I cant figure out how to post a document so spoiler tags it is. Ok, guys, be nice. It is my first time writing Sera and femslash. It is a Lavellan/Sera fic where Lavellan wanted to wait to have sex when initiating romance. Then got tired of waiting. I cant figure out how to end it...Also need to figure out a title. NSFW

 

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lewd



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lewd

Ummm...Is that a bad thing? Like is it too smutty?



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Ummm...Is that a bad thing? Like is it too smutty?

 

No no, it's great. :D

 

 

It's a slang, a way to say hot. Or 'dirty'.

 

Also, pls. The moar smut, the better. :wub:


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No no, it's great. :D

 

 

It's a slang, a way to say hot. Or 'dirty'.

 

Also, pls. The moar smut, the better. :wub:

Just saw the edit. I knew you would like a good smut fic. You would probably be glad to know I have been editing and it is probably even more smutty now. I just need to come up with an ending and I will post it on AO3.


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https://account.xbox...e5-41bc3a3a6568

 

Here's the link to the image. Let me know if you still can't see it. Do you have any thoughts on how to end my fic? It still feels like its missing something. Like some cute flirty dialogue to wrap it up.

 

I can see her now!  Nice.

 

An ending.... hmmm.  I guess... start with Sera complaining about being made to wait so long and just see where it goes from there; sometimes these things write themselves!  I'm not terribly good at endings myself, to be honest.

 

Just saw the edit. I knew you would like a good smut fic. You would probably be glad to know I have been editing and it is probably even more smutty now. I just need to come up with an ending and I will post it on AO3.

 

It's safe to say those of the Seranade persuasion are big fans of such smut.  I remember the days of Cat's stories of horn-based pleasure and BDSM toy-ness.... wowzers.  You'll fit right in, I think!


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I can see her now!  Nice.

 

An ending.... hmmm.  I guess... start with Sera complaining about being made to wait so long and just see where it goes from there; sometimes these things write themselves!  I'm not terribly good at endings myself, to be honest.

 

It's safe to say those of the Seranade persuasion are big fans of such smut.  I remember the days of Cat's stories of horn-based pleasure and BDSM toy-ness.... wowzers.  You'll fit right in, I think!

Wait...Sera and BDSM? I must read these stories. Did she post them somewhere?

 

Also, I think I have figured out an ending for my story. Going to post it soon. Any ideas for a title? I am terrible at them.

 

Would you like a link to the completed version?



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Wait...Sera and BDSM? I must read these stories. Did she post them somewhere?

 

Also, I think I have figured out an ending for my story. Going to post it soon. Any ideas for a title? I am terrible at them.

 

Would you like a link to the completed version?

 

Heh.  I present unto you.... My Little Toy.

 

Title.... "Anticipation" ?  "Worth The Wait" ?  "Jumped By Candlelight" ?  Tricky things, titles.

 

And yes, I would like to read the completed version, as I'm sure everyone else would ;) 


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Heh.  I present unto you.... My Little Toy.

 

Title.... "Anticipation" ?  "Worth The Wait" ?  "Jumped By Candlelight" ?  Tricky things, titles.

 

And yes, I would like to read the completed version, as I'm sure everyone else would ;)

 

 http://archiveofouro...g/works/3959659

This is the completed version. Let me know if you notice any typos or grammar issues so I can fix them. I went with "worth the wait" for the title. Thanks for the help.


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Cute Sera Pic :)


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Out of likes but I wanted to say great job on the fanfic Twilight! Also love the cute Sera pic too :-D
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So this page contains two fanfics as well as references to Twilight and BDSM, and both are better written than 50 Shades of Grey... ;)
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Out of likes but I wanted to say great job on the fanfic Twilight! Also love the cute Sera pic too :-D

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

 

So this page contains two fanfics as well as references to Twilight and BDSM, and both are better written than 50 Shades of Grey... ;)

*Not sure if that is a compliment or not*

 

Also the 'Twilight' bit was probably a reference to my username, not that terrible film/book series that we shall never speak of again.lol.

 

I was planning on writing more Sera fanfiction sometime soon. I already kind of have an idea. I'll let you know right now, that it is pretty kinky, so I hope you guys are ok with that. I am planning on filling a prompt from the kinkmeme.



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*Not sure if that is a compliment or not*

 

Also the 'Twilight' bit was probably a reference to my username, not that terrible film/book series that we shall never speak of again.lol.

Sure it was a compliment. :) Also I know that it wasn't the same Twilight but I couldn't resist the joke. ;)


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