So, watching this on repeat...does that look like Sera pointing an arrow at the Inquisitor to anyone else?
I think it COULD be her. The scenery isn't that far off from where she is in Inquisitor and Companions.
So, yeah. Probably recruitment.
So, watching this on repeat...does that look like Sera pointing an arrow at the Inquisitor to anyone else?
I think it COULD be her. The scenery isn't that far off from where she is in Inquisitor and Companions.
So, yeah. Probably recruitment.
Oh God..Imagine if we could have body tattooes like thse.......*infinity droole* I never stop making Amazon Qunari
ugh... that qunari inquisitor looks so coool! ![]()
Tbh, a crime was commited in this video: they gave Sera daggers.
Glad I wasn't the only one who thought this.
Although saying that, Sera in that light armor...
It's making her look big

Ooh hello Sera, do you even know how good you look in that?
Kinda makes you want your Inquisy to peel her out of it, carefully, wouldn't you agree gang?
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DW Sera is pretty aggressive xd
Haha lol yeah, she seemed to enjoy it an awful lot, pretty deadly up close with blades. ![]()
Hmm. I'm wondering...
Cat, you write a helluva lot longer than I do (well, at least on FF.net... but the stuff I wrote years ago is better off left buried), is it common to have many views, but very (VERY) few reviews?
I keep wondering ever since I posted up the first two chapters of MFM, if it's a regular thing, or if people just hate the story so much they don't review at all.
Any feedback is pretty rare to me (though, I admit, there was this one person who gave me about 6 PMs worth of it... and for that I'm endlessly grateful, even if I'm not sure if I really managed to heed the suggestions given... I hope I did.)
She does look terribly lovely in those outfits. I like the "base" ragged dress, leggings and... slippers?
Perfect for Skyhold conversations and romance scenes....
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...Sorry, was I saying something just then? Got distracted...
Oh God..Imagine if we could have body tattooes like thse.......*infinity droole* I never stop making Amazon Qunari
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I had the idea of a qunari Inquisitrix with interestingly tattooed arms... but that's a neg for everyone, sadly.
Hmm. I'm wondering...
Cat, you write a helluva lot longer than I do (well, at least on FF.net... but the stuff I wrote years ago is better off left buried), is it common to have many views, but very (VERY) few reviews?
I keep wondering ever since I posted up the first two chapters of MFM, if it's a regular thing, or if people just hate the story so much they don't review at all.
Any feedback is pretty rare to me (though, I admit, there was this one person who gave me about 6 PMs worth of it... and for that I'm endlessly grateful, even if I'm not sure if I really managed to heed the suggestions given... I hope I did.)
Peoples tend to go advertise their fanfics . If you dont do that and wait for them..to search the subject you are writing about...then there is a chance you will wait forever .
I recommand if you are not good at saying 'Hey I wrote this...plz review and comment!' . Then stick it in your profile/signature whenever you can . Here , on YN..Facenuke,.....and what not . ![]()
I had some reviews, likes and follows added to my recent DAI fics and I've no idea where those came from; BSNers or random finds.
Hmm. I'm wondering...
Cat, you write a helluva lot longer than I do (well, at least on FF.net... but the stuff I wrote years ago is better off left buried), is it common to have many views, but very (VERY) few reviews?
I keep wondering ever since I posted up the first two chapters of MFM, if it's a regular thing, or if people just hate the story so much they don't review at all.
Any feedback is pretty rare to me (though, I admit, there was this one person who gave me about 6 PMs worth of it... and for that I'm endlessly grateful, even if I'm not sure if I really managed to heed the suggestions given... I hope I did.)
Yep! The thing with reviews is that there is a snowball effect. People often look at the number of reviews to decide if a story is worth reading, so basically, the more reviews you have, the more you'll get, if that makes sense. People see a story with zero reviews and think: oh it can't be that good and they pass it over. They see a story with a ton of reviews and they think: it must be great!
Some of my longer stories have very few reviews for the first chapters, but the later ones have more reviews. People are funny like that. Tip: write in chapters and update weekly. That will keep your story in the 'new' section longer and increase your traffic. The system works! ![]()
Yeah, the thing is, I'm not really lacking people viewing the story. But right now, there's about 125:1 ratio of views to reviews, which sort of... worries me?
LMAO that scene was hilarious, poor guys got roflstomped hard! xD
All I could think of was this watching it!
LMAO that scene was hilarious, poor guys got roflstomped hard! xD
All I could think of was this watching it!
Yeah, twas funny.
"Shall we?"
"You know what's gonna happen, right?"
"Yup!"
SPLAT!! SPLAT!! SPLAT!!
".....ouch"
Yep! The thing with reviews is that there is a snowball effect. People often look at the number of reviews to decide if a story is worth reading, so basically, the more reviews you have, the more you'll get, if that makes sense. People see a story with zero reviews and think: oh it can't be that good and they pass it over. They see a story with a ton of reviews and they think: it must be great!
Some of my longer stories have very few reviews for the first chapters, but the later ones have more reviews. People are funny like that. Tip: write in chapters and update weekly. That will keep your story in the 'new' section longer and increase your traffic. The system works!
Thanks Cat!
Unfortunately, thanks to my own laziness and college (Gotta say, whenever I get past the laziness, I usually have to write some paper now... Ugh! I won't deny being lazy has nothing to do with my updates being far from each other though.) I don't really update that often. I guess if writing was the only thing I do...
I need to stop playing games until DAI comes out, I think.
Thanks Cat!
Unfortunately, thanks to my own laziness and college (Gotta say, whenever I get past the laziness, I usually have to write some paper now... Ugh! I won't deny being lazy has nothing to do with my updates being far from each other though.) I don't really update that often. I guess if writing was the only thing I do...
I need to stop playing games until DAI comes out, I think.
Why dont you just write for the pleasure of writing ? IF you are lazy *like meh*.....worrying about review is just stress...
Why dont you just write for the pleasure of writing ? IF you are lazy *like meh*.....worrying about review is just stress...
I don't know... it's fun...
And the reviews are there, because I take extra pleasure in knowing I did stuff right and someone likes my effort.
I don't really want many, but I want enough to stop me from doubting the whole endeavor.
I don't know... it's fun...
And the reviews are there, because I take extra pleasure in knowing I did stuff right and someone likes my effort.
I don't really want many, but I want enough to stop me from doubting the whole endeavor.
I know the feeling! It's nice to feel appreciated. For me getting reviews cheers me up because it means people like what I write and it makes me feel like I'm not so strange after all. I got called a freak a lot in school. It's nice to see there are other freaks in the world. ![]()
That underwear/pajamas she's wearing looks like it was made for easy ripping judging by the front... ![]()
I don't know... it's fun...
And the reviews are there, because I take extra pleasure in knowing I did stuff right and someone likes my effort.
I don't really want many, but I want enough to stop me from doubting the whole endeavor.
Hum..thats why I said write for the sake of writing lol if you need review to prove anything....
well I guess to each it own , just don't lose hair over it ![]()
What do you write about anyway ?
I have to say Bioware has been VERY good to us Sera fans this week lol
I know the feeling! It's nice to feel appreciated. For me getting reviews cheers me up because it means people like what I write and it makes me feel like I'm not so strange after all. I got called a freak a lot in school. It's nice to see there are other freaks in the world.
Yup. I was also considered weird in high school.
Hey, we've something in common! ![]()
Hum..thats why I said write for the sake of writing lol if you need review to prove anything....
well I guess to each it own , just don't lose hair over it
What do you write about anyway ?
Oh, it's from Mass Effect's universe. I was thinking about tackling some Dragon Age, but if I start another fic, I just know I won't juggle the time between two very well.
That, and I lack good ideas. I thought about venturing into the First Blight, but naaaw.
The one I'm writing though, is Quarian Marines. We know so precious little about the Migrant Fleet! And they're my favorite race.
It is Special Forces, though, because I just can't do much unless I invent a group that gets to leave the fleet every now and then.
I'd compare them to Alliance's N7, Asari Huntresses, the STG and Turian Blackwatch... but I try to keep it more or less believable, so no mad crazy run and gunning ala CoD. Saving those bits until the Reaper war, and trying to just keep stuff more... planned and prepared.
Yup. I was also considered weird in high school.
Hey, we've something in common!
Oh, it's from Mass Effect's universe. I was thinking about tackling some Dragon Age, but if I start another fic, I just know I won't juggle the time between two very well.
That, and I lack good ideas. I thought about venturing into the First Blight, but naaaw.
The one I'm writing though, is Quarian Marines. We know so precious little about the Migrant Fleet! And they're my favorite race.
It is Special Forces, though, because I just can't do much unless I invent a group that gets to leave the fleet every now and then.
I'd compare them to Alliance's N7, Asari Huntresses, the STG and Turian Blackwatch... but I try to keep it more or less believable, so no mad crazy run and gunning ala CoD. Saving those bits until the Reaper war, and trying to just keep stuff more... planned and prepared.
Hum...no shep in there ? sound like you are writing about a Multiplayer playtrough
These outfits, just, man I love em, Bioware srsly
-snips-
Thanks for a great Sera week!
In the one without any armor, she has hipster leggings. or pants... or whatever you want to call 'em. ![]()
I know the feeling! It's nice to feel appreciated. For me getting reviews cheers me up because it means people like what I write and it makes me feel like I'm not so strange after all. I got called a freak a lot in school. It's nice to see there are other freaks in the world.
Your small fics and other things are always a reason to visit this thread!