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Guess it doesn't. But it was you who said you're writing porn in the first place :P

Actually, I did not. I said I could not write porn without plot. Not that I was writing porn. That is an important distinction. Which is amusing because fine distinctions are a main theme in my story. *I love to tease!*



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I finished my AadarXSera story!

 

Here it is: Lucky Break (very much NSFW)

 

I also have a new Josie fic, if you're interested: The Penmanship Lesson

 

That was really good. More of it please! :D


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Have to say you have an obvious talent for writing, Cat.

 

I'm almost jelly (and toast).


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Actually, I did not. I said I could not write porn without plot. Not that I was writing porn. That is an important distinction. Which is amusing because fine distinctions are a main theme in my story. *I love to tease!*

 

Alriiiiight.

I believe the correct term is Mea Culpa.


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So very awesome once again Cat! Eager for more  :D


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Can't dispute it. Cat has talent.

 

May I add a couple of proofreader-ish remarks about the Sera story?

 

"They seem to have back and forth quite a bit." seems to be missing a word. and I think you meant "peak" not "peek" there at the end...


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Can't dispute it. Cat has talent.

 

May I add a couple of proofreader-ish remarks about the Sera story?

 

"They seem to have back and forth quite a bit." seems to be missing a word. and I think you meant "peak" not "peek" there at the end...

Arrg, I missed that. I tend to go cross eyed after a while. I'll go correct that soon. Thanks for pointing it out!



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*pants and wheezes*

*coughs*

...finally...caught up...with everything...argh....

*coughs some more*

Hello, Sera thread, long time no see! :D   Missed me? ...no? Oh well. I did miss this thread though.


Before watching the new stream I thought that I couldn't be more in love with Sera that I already was. I was so very wrong. :wub:
Dem outfits, dem cute slippers. :wub: :wub: :wub:

Dat cute undershirt that will be ripped off asap. :ph34r:

And while I vastly prefer her with a bow, she doesn't look half bad when fighting with daggers.


This week the Bioware gods have been very generous towards us. :D

Oh, yes, and Scout Harding...crushing on her badly. Freckles, cute smile and Ali Hills' voice? Omg. :wub:
 

Oh dear. I'm afraid I've had a stroke of... inspiration. Would anyone be interested in a BDSM fic with Sera and Ragequisitor? I would...


Yes please. :wub:

 

Actually, you might be quite surprised by this story. I'm almost done with the first chapter (of 5). I cannot write porn without plot to save my life. There has to be character development, and humor, and logic. I'm boring like that. ;)


It's not boring, that's the best kind of porn, actually. Imho, of course.


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*pants and wheezes*...

 

If only I had thumbs... +1 (or even +100) :)


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OXM interview from yesterday:

 

http://www.totalxbox...hat-comes-next/



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*pants and wheezes*

*coughs*

...finally...caught up...with everything...argh....

*coughs some more*

Hello, Sera thread, long time no see! :D   Missed me? ...no? Oh well. I did miss this thread though.

Snip


Miss a day on this thread is tough, we did miss you.

All the Sera info has me bubbling with excitement. :wub:

Scout Harding, what can I say but :wub:

BC's stories 'wow' looking forward to the next with great anticipation.

(there's a limit on emoticons in a post I didn't know that)
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*crawls in exhausted* Here it is! The first chapter! Oh man, that took forever!

 

My Little Toy

 

This is only the first chapter of five and it is pretty tame compared to what is to come, but I am quite happy with it. I hope you enjoy! Please leave a comment if you read, constructive criticism is always welcome.

 

Enjoy!


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If only I had thumbs... +1 (or even +100) :)

Why, thank you! :D

 

Miss a day on this thread is tough, we did miss you.

All the Sera info has me bubbling with excitement. :wub:

Scout Harding, what can I say but :wub:

BC's stories 'wow' looking forward to the next with great anticipation.

(there's a limit on emoticons in a post I didn't know that)

Aw, thank you. ^_^

Edit: yeah, missing a whole day on the thread means 100 pages to read when you come back. :lol:

You and me both. :wub:

Scout Harding will make it hard (see what I did there) for me to focus on missions while she's around, that's for sure. :wub:

I have the popcorns ready for the upcoming stories.

(yep, there's a limit that also counts the ones in the posts you have quoted, if any)



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Arrg, I missed that. I tend to go cross eyed after a while. I'll go correct that soon. Thanks for pointing it out!

I'm always going back and editing my own posts for errors even here, so it's more than excusable to miss stuff in something that long!

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I'm always going back and editing my own posts for errors even here, so it's more than excusable to miss stuff in something that long!

Well, my latest brain child is almost 5000 words long (just for chapter 1/5, sigh) I did a thorough proof reading, but I might still have missed something. I appreciate it when people point these out. Typos annoy me when I read and I try not to inflict the same torment on my readers. :D



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*crawls in exhausted* Here it is! The first chapter! Oh man, that took forever!
 
My Little Toy
 
This is only the first chapter of five and it is pretty tame compared to what is to come, but I am quite happy with it. I hope you enjoy! Please leave a comment if you read, constructive criticism is always welcome.
 
Enjoy!


Well I woke up with only a couple of likes and they are gone, I enjoyed chapter 1 and am looking forward to chapter 2. :)
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*crawls in exhausted* Here it is! The first chapter! Oh man, that took forever!

 

My Little Toy

 

This is only the first chapter of five and it is pretty tame compared to what is to come, but I am quite happy with it. I hope you enjoy! Please leave a comment if you read, constructive criticism is always welcome.

 

Enjoy!

 

Cat, you are so very evil.

Your mind is so dirty it really lives in the basement.

 

And mine is no better, because I liked that story.


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*crawls in exhausted* Here it is! The first chapter! Oh man, that took forever!

 

My Little Toy

 

This is only the first chapter of five and it is pretty tame compared to what is to come, but I am quite happy with it. I hope you enjoy! Please leave a comment if you read, constructive criticism is always welcome.

 

Enjoy!


Whelp. I'll just take a long cold shower.

Nicely done, BC.


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I think I'm going to have start avoiding tumblr more, people keep indiscriminately posting spoilers, I know too much now lol  :blink:



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I think I'm going to have start avoiding tumblr more, people keep indiscriminately posting spoilers, I know too much now lol  :blink:

It's Tumblr. Totally normal for unmarked spoilers to be posted about.



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It's Tumblr. Totally normal for unmarked spoilers to be posted about.

 

indeed. 



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I think I'm going to have start avoiding tumblr more, people keep indiscriminately posting spoilers, I know too much now lol  :blink:

 

I accidentally read a bad spoiler and I saw one drawing... I'm repressing everything =]

 

.... *twitches*



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I accidentally read a bad spoiler and I saw one drawing... I'm repressing everything =]

 

.... *twitches*

 

I think i've got that twitch as well lol



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Yeah tumblr really isn't a good place for people that wish to avoid any kind of spoiler



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*crawls in exhausted* Here it is! The first chapter! Oh man, that took forever!

 

My Little Toy

 

This is only the first chapter of five and it is pretty tame compared to what is to come, but I am quite happy with it. I hope you enjoy! Please leave a comment if you read, constructive criticism is always welcome.

 

Enjoy!

 

....whoa.


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