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tallon1982 wrote...

Freckles...you made me think of this as your story theme for some reason ;)
Across the Stars


I love that piece of music. I went to a wedding last fall that had it playing suring the ceremony.

And yes, more. I think I said it already today, but more more more. lol

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I love this tale, and am looking forward to more. Keep it coming as you can :) Fiona's just such a piece of work, I'm excited to see where this will take us.

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i cannot wait to see where you take this. i'm so in love with this story!

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Thank you for the kind words, everyone. I'm glad you're all enjoying this. :)

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Part 16

When Bryn awoke again and shifted in bed, she was relieved to discover the debilitating weakness had disappeared. She was by no means back to normal, but she no longer felt as though any simple movement would send her tumbling back into sleep. Gritting her teeth, she forced herself from the bed and to the bathing area. By the time she finished, her legs shook and her arms trembled, and she kept upright by willpower alone, but she was relatively clean and felt human once more.

Her steps faltered as she spotted an unfamiliar figure seated beside the bed. She pressed on, though, certain that if she truly stopped, she'd fall to the floor. She refused to show that much weakness to anyone. The man glowered, the lines marking his age deepening with his scowl. A soft fuzz of grey covered his skull, a strange contrast to the rough planes of his face. His eyes seemed nearly white at first, but Bryn quickly realized they were simply the palest ice blue. He wore a full suit of armor, his black breastplate adorned with the golden griffon of the Grey Wardens. She opened her senses to him to confirm her suspicions--yes, he was a Warden. She could feel the taint coursing through him, like a river about to crest its banks. He was on the cusp of his Calling.

"I'm not entirely sure how to address you," he admitted as she approached the bed. He crossed his arms, the movement sending a scraping noise reverberating throughout the room. "Usually I would simply call you by your given name, but you haven't relinquished your claim to other titles as most of us do."

Bryn blinked. That was…not the greeting she expected. "Bryn will do," she said. She tried not to show her relief at resuming her place in bed.

"Very well. I am Jorn, Commander-in-Chief of the Grey Wardens."

Bryn nodded, unwilling to be more courteous than that.

Humor flared in the man's glacial eyes. "Not one to stand on pretense, I see. I can appreciate that. Let us get right to the point, then." He levelled that intense stare on Bryn, but she refused to let herself be affected by it. "We must know how you survived."

She shrugged, settling into bed. "Luck."

"That is not the answer."

"It's the only one you're going to get," she snapped. "You've kidnapped me. Kept me drugged. And you expect me to cooperate with you?" She narrowed her eyes.

"Not really, no." He waved a hand to someone at the door. Bryn followed his gaze to see Fiona and another mage enter the room. She frowned--the taint was present in the human male, easily detected by her Grey Warden senses, but not in Fiona. Was Fiona not a Warden? If not, why was she at Weisshaupt?

"You've met Fiona," Jorn said. "And this is Yanic."

Fiona's eyes darted from Bryn's to Jorn's, and she stepped forward. "Commander--"

Jorn held up a hand and the elf subsided, her eyes flashing. "Yanic is quite adept at discovering secrets, Bryn. It will be less painful for everyone--particularly yourself--if you stop treating us like the enemy."

Bryn's heart rate increased as Yanic withdrew a small knife from his belt and held it over his palm. The tiniest grin graced his lips. Blood magic. Dear Maker--Jorn was going to resort to using a blood mage to comb through her thoughts? She had no doubt this mage could do it--she'd seen evidence of the destruction that could be wrought on a person's mind and soul by a blood mage when she'd encountered the tortured templar, Cullen, at the mages' tower so long ago.

Once he had access to her thoughts--he would not only learn the truth, he could control her. She would become a danger, a liability, to both Ferelden and Alistair. Andraste's ashes. But if she revealed what she knew voluntarily--they could seek out Morrigan. Harm her, perhaps. Kill the child--Alistair's child. As uncertain as she was about the babe, that was a fate she could not visit upon her friend nor the child. And what would they do to Alistair?

Bryn steeled herself. She would not give up her secrets willingly.

"You are the enemy," she said softly. "You've proven it more than once, now."

"Bryn, Bryn."

She gritted her teeth at the condescending tone in Jorn's voice, regretting her acquiescence to him using her given name. The man rose from the chair beside the bed and strode calmly across the room to gaze out of the window.

"You gave us no choice, don't you see?" he said over his shoulder. "You know something that could save future Wardens. The destruction of an archdemon without destroying a Warden's soul--isn't that worth sharing?"

Bryn crossed her arms. "No."

"No?" Jorn turned, his brows drawn into a deep vee. "That's rather a selfish stance, don't you think?"

"You might as well kill me." Bryn jutted out her chin and glared at the older Warden. "I won't tell you anything."

Jorn sighed. "Yes, I'm afraid you will. Yanic?"

"Commander," Fiona barked. "A word." Something passed between the elven mage and the Commander-in-Chief. His eyes narrowed, but he and the blood mage followed when she strode into the hall.

Her heart thudding in her breast, Bryn thanked the Maker for the reprieve. She cast about in her memories for any defense against blood magic and came up with little. She remembered a few lines from the Litany of Adralla, but would it even work without Wynne being with her? She repeated those snippets she recalled, praying they would be enough. She had to resist. She would resist.

Her gaze snapped up as she heard movement at the door, but it was just Fiona. Alone.

"Please, child. Tell him what he wants to know." She sat on the edge of the bed, her gaze intense.

Bryn shook her head.

"He will not subsist for long. He's given me a day, no more, to convince you to tell me what you know, without the use of blood magic. After that…" Her hands clenched, the knuckles turning white. "Please. I don't want to hurt him like that."

"Hurt who? Jorn?" But that made no sense. Why would her silence hurt the Commander-in-Chief?

"No, not Jorn. Damn it." She launched herself up from the bed and began pacing. "I did not support this plan. Jorn acted without my input. Typical male hard-headedness. He wouldn't see that the way to learn what he wanted to know was through gaining your trust. We're not evil, Bryn. I swear to you."

Bryn looked down at the covers draped over her legs. "I know. Wardens do what they must."

"His Calling compels him to act. He wants to leave a legacy, you see." Fiona paused. "You've sensed the taint in him."

"In him, yes." Bryn regarded the elf for a moment. "Not in you."

"No. I no longer carry the taint…but that is a tale for another time."

Bryn forced herself to pay attention to the rest of Fiona's words, though the reason Morrigan had bade her to seek out the elven mage now was clear. No longer tainted. So it was possible--somehow--to have the taint lifted? Maker. Ruthlessly, Bryn quashed the hope that lifted her heart. It could not be so simple. Nothing ever was.

"Weisshaupt learned of the Blight in Ferelden too late to act. Jorn had wanted to be the one to destroy the archdemon, like Garahel. But then word came that the Blight was ended and the Warden who dealt the killing blow yet lived--and his obsession with discovering how grew." Fiona crossed her arms. "He won't relent. Please, for the love of the Maker, tell him."

The plea in Fiona's voice was heart-wrenching to hear. Seeing the elf with the Commander-in-Chief, Bryn would never have guessed her feelings ran so deeply. "I'm sorry," she whispered. "I--I can't."

"You're protecting him, aren't you? Alistair?" Her voice softened as she spoke his name.

Bryn's heart skipped, but she held the other Warden's gaze. "No."

For a long moment, Fiona did nothing. Then she nodded slowly. "I see. No…you're right. You have no reason to trust me. No reason to believe that I am not consumed with this quest like Jorn." She bit her lip and stared at the floor, bouncing on the balls of her feet. Finally, she retrieved something from beneath her tunic and marched to the bed.

Bryn frowned as Fiona dropped the item into her hands. An amulet, much like the one she'd rescued from Eamon's desk nearly a year ago, the only reminder Alistair had of his dead mother. This one, in fact--could be its twin.

"Alistair has one like it," Fiona stated.

Bryn turned her confused gaze back to the elf. "How do you know that?"

Fiona opened her mouth to speak, then closed it. She took a deep breath, obviously gathering herself. Bryn couldn't make sense of the woman's trepidation. "It was Maric's idea," she said finally, her voice small. "He thought that each of us having one of the amulets would give me a connection to him." The barest of smiles curved her lips. "He was right. It was all in my head, of course, but sometimes I thought I could almost touch him."

"You knew Alistair?"

Fiona shook her head, her smile turning sorrowful. "Knew him? No, not really. I wish I could have, though. He sounds like he's become quite the man. Much like his father."

"Wait. Just…wait." Bryn struggled to piece the information into some kind of pattern that made sense, but the puzzle refused to fit together. "I don't understand. You knew King Maric, and he suggested that you and Alistair have the same amulet…the only thing he has of his moth--" Bryn's eyes widened. "Oh, Maker."

"And that's why you can trust me." Fiona nodded. "I would never do anything to hurt my son."

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I'm squeeing, just so you know.

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Miliat wrote...

I'm squeeing, just so you know.


Oh, good. I know that not everyone thinks that Fiona is Alistair's mother, but it's the route I'm taking for my story. :)

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LOVE IT! How you included the amulet - great. I wished this could be canon.

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klarabella wrote...

LOVE IT! How you included the amulet - great. I wished this could be canon.


Thanks! Well, I figured there had to be some proof, right? Otherwise Bryn would never believe her.

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Freckles04 wrote...

Miliat wrote...

I'm squeeing, just so you know.


Oh, good. I know that not everyone thinks that Fiona is Alistair's mother, but it's the route I'm taking for my story. :)


I'm so glad you are. I absolutely love Fiona, and the idea that she is Alistair's mother.

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DUN DUN DUNNN!!!

Or IS she O_o

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~squees~

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~squees~

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*plants her flag in Camp Fiona is Alistair's Mum* Keep on writing girl. *offers tea and cake with badges to other believers*

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tallon1982 wrote...

*plants her flag in Camp Fiona is Alistair's Mum* Keep on writing girl. *offers tea and cake with badges to other believers*


Sweeeeet badges!

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Wow, a three-squee post! Awesome! :)



::gratefully accepts tea and cake and badges::

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Hm...must figure out a design for said badges...*eyes all those way more artistic than her and waves her hand* You want to make a badge for the camp... Dammit! Wrong genre.

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Plops down for tea and cakes... Oh my word! Now that took me completely by surprise. I am not the type to squee, but if I were, I'd be squeeing :D

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Image IPB



Perhaps his mother's amulet for the badges! (Excuse the roughness)



And yes, your most recent installment Freckles is exceptionally squee worthy.

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*stamps approval on badge* Woot!

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Part 17

Would a campfire ever stop reminding him of Bryn? Alistair stared into the flames, mesmerized by the dance, his thoughts casting back into time. How many nights had they sat at the fire, sharing stories, sharing looks? The first night they’d spent together had been at camp. He’d wanted it to be special, perfect; the camp had been anything but. Despite that, he couldn’t wait any longer. Time had been running out. He’d grabbed her hand as they’d walked up to the tents, halting her beside the fire, and confessed. Tripping over his words, stammering, blushing--it was a wonder she’d even deigned to listen to him. Then she’d laid her hand on his cheek, a smile stretching her lips, and nodded.

Alistair scrubbed a hand over his face, then rose abruptly. He felt his companions’ eyes on him as he marched away from the fire, but he had no urge to reassure them. There was no reassurance to be given. They’d heard nothing these past weeks--their discreet questions had been in vain. No one in the villages they’d passed could recall any processions of any size, nor did a description of Bryn rouse any memories.

It didn’t mean anything. Perhaps the group they travelled in was small. Perhaps they’d disguised Bryn somehow. Perhaps they’d travelled by sea to Weisshaupt instead of over land. Damn it, he just didn’t know.

He didn’t even know if she was still alive.

“Alistair, my friend.” Zevran’s accented voice sounded softly from behind him. “You should get some rest.”

The King grunted, crossing his arms and leaning against a tree. He stared into the darkness, as though it contained the answers he sought if only he could look hard enough.

“She is fine.”

Alistair glanced behind him at the assassin, his eyes narrowed. “You don’t know that.”

“I believe it.” Zevran shrugged as he stepped up beside Alistair. “They want something from her, yes? Killing her is not the way to get it.” His eyes darted to the King’s before turning back to the gloom. “But, my friend...what secret does she hold that would be worth threatening war with you?”

Alistair closed his eyes and tilted his head to the side, until his temple brushed the bark of the tree. A certainty settled over him. The time for secrets had passed--between him and his friends, at least. They should know of the bargain Ferelden’s Grey Wardens had struck. They should know what their King had done.

“Come.” He pushed away from the tree and walked back to the fire. Oghren and Leliana looked up as he and Zevran approached, their expressions subdued. Odd to see the dwarf so serious, Alistair thought, and sober. That was certainly a change from when they’d first travelled together.

“We should reach Weisshaupt tomorrow. I...have not been forthcoming about the reason why Bryn was taken.”  

“I assumed you did not know,” Leliana said with a frown.

“Oh, I know.” He sighed and sank to the ground, one knee bent with his arm resting atop it. “And you should, as well. You have been trusted friends to both of us, and this is something I probably should have shared long ago.” His eyes drifted from his companions’ faces to the dirt surrounding the fire pit. “Where do I begin,” he muttered.

“The beginning?” Zevran suggested with a crooked grin.

“Very funny.” Alistair sighed and steeled himself. “The night before we began the forced march to Denerim, Riordan asked Bryn and me to meet him to discuss the strategy for slaying the archdemon.”

“There was a strategy?” Zevran subsided at the pointed look Leliana tossed his way. “I’m sorry, Alistair. Continue.”

“What I am about to say...is not something many people know. Bryn and I certainly didn’t.” Alistair took a deep breath, then pressed on. “The reason Grey Wardens are needed to end a Blight is...because...a Grey Warden must be sacrificed to destroy the archdemon’s essence.”

“Sacrificed?” Oghren’s rough voice reverberated above the crackling of the fire.

“The essence of the archdemon is pulled by the taint into the nearest darkspawn should the dragon be slain. The taint in a Grey Warden attracts the essence in much the same way.”

“Holy Maker,” Leliana breathed. “But the Grey Warden has a soul. The essence would not be able to take over, would it?”

“No. It wouldn’t.” He stared at the fire for a moment before continuing, remembering the horror that had clenched in his gut as Riordan delivered his news. “Should a Grey Warden make the killing blow on the archdemon, the essence is immediately transferred to the Grey Warden, and destroyed. Along with the Grey Warden.”

“But Bryn lived.” Oghren frowned, his deep brow drawing low over his eyes.

“Only because of a deal we made with Morrigan.”

Shadows settled in Leliana’s gaze. “Oh, Alistair.”

He held up a hand to halt her words. “Morrigan knew the secret to killing the archdemon. She had been sent by Flemeth specifically to offer us a way out. We took it. I took it.” He stared at the fire, unwilling to meet his friends’ eyes. “She spoke to Bryn first, told her about her plan. Then Bryn came to see me.” He closed his eyes briefly. “Maker, this is harder than I thought.”

“Take your time, Alistair.” Leliana’s voice was soft with understanding, but the King couldn’t help but wonder how long her caring attitude would last.

It just had to be done, like ripping off a bandage stuck to a wound. “Morrigan’s plan was to use a ritual to create a tainted child, a babe who could absorb the essence of the Old God at the heart of the archdemon without being harmed, and thereby spare the Warden who delivered the killing blow.”

Silence greeted his words. Alistair kept his gaze firmly on the ground.

“You...slept with Morrigan?” Zevran said after a few moments. “How was she?”

“Zevran!” Leliana gasped. A slap resounded through the quiet night.

“Ow! Simple curiosity, my dear bard. Such punishment.”

“It’s not about the sex, Zevran,” she scolded.

The Antivan was silent. When he spoke next, his voice was low. “No, it is not.”

“So, lad.” Oghren cleared his throat. “You’re going to be a father.”

Alistair rested his head in his hands. “Of a child I’ll never see. A child that might mean the destruction of Thedas, for all I know. But Maker help me, I wouldn’t choose differently, given the chance. What if none of us had survived to confront the dragon? The ritual meant that anyone could kill it and end the Blight. That’s worth any deal, isn’t it?”

He heard the rustling of leathers, then Leliana settled beside him, her arm embracing his shoulders. She rested her head against his upper arm. “You saved Bryn.”

His breath caught in his throat, at both her acceptance and rising memories. “When Riordan told us, she didn’t hesitate. You should have heard the strength in her voice when she announced she would make the killing blow. Andraste’s ashes.” His voice broke. “We never talked about it,” he said after a moment. “It was like this great yawning chasm between us. That and the heir thing. Maker’s breath. Why couldn’t I have just stayed a nobody?”

“It’s not who you are.”

Alistair glanced at Leliana, her red hair glimmering in the golden light of the flames, a vibrant contrast to the silver of his armor. “No. I suppose it isn’t, not any longer.” He inhaled deeply. “So there you have it. The big, dark secret the Wardens want to know so badly.”

“Why not tell them?” Zevran’s voice was considering.

“What, that all you need to do to survive the death of an archedemon is to father a demon baby on a maleficar? Yes, why didn’t I think of that?” Alistair scowled at the elf before answering his own question. “Because I don’t know anything more about it than that. I don’t know the ritual. I don’t know what the baby will be. And I certainly had no idea how the Wardens would react. Perhaps, in time, we would have shared it with the Wardens who had been helping us in Amaranthine. But they forced me into a course of action I never wanted. Which brings us full circle.”

For the first time since being crowned King, Alistair wished he had the might of the Ferelden army at his back. But marching with a full contingent of his forces would have drawn too much attention as they crossed Nevarra and the Tevinter Imperium. Getting permission from the governments of those countries to enter with his army would have taken time they didn’t have.

Eamon had wanted him to wait, to pursue the diplomatic route. Alistair had refused. Besides taking too much time, he didn’t want to make his conflict with the Wardens official. Not yet. There was still the chance this could be resolved.

A small chance. If Bryn was dead, no chance.

So he’d appointed Eamon regent once more, above the older man’s admonitions to wait and consider and plan. There was only one plan he was interested in, and that was doing whatever it took to get Bryn back.

His gaze travelled over his companions. “Suggestions for tomorrow?”

“I think what we discussed earlier is still the prudent course of action,” Leliana said. “Oghren and I will accompany you into the keep to negotiate, while Zevran sneaks inside to find Bryn.” She bit her lip. “Do you really think they’ll talk?”

Alistair blew out a breath. “I don’t know. Probably. If they have any sense, they won’t strike down the King of Ferelden without first speaking with me.” He hoped. “I just want to say...thank you. For standing with me, even after...” He pushed to his feet. “I appreciate it.”

“I wouldn’t be anywhere else, Alistair.” Leliana’s voice rang with sincerity and caring.

“Aye. If I don't stand beside my sodding King, I wouldn’t be much of a soldier, would I?” Oghren snorted, his bright red mustache fluttering.

“Sneaking into the Wardens’ fortress...now that is far too much fun to pass up, yes?” Zevran walked over to the King and slapped his hand against Alistair’s arm. “We’ll get her back, my friend.”

Alistair stared at his companions, humbled by the devotion in their expressions. Words froze in his throat. “Thank you,” he managed. “I mean it.”

“Now rest, your Majesty.” Leliana’s gaze glinted with humor as she used his title. “Long day tomorrow.”

Yes, he thought. The longest of my life, no doubt.

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Divulging GW secrets, yay! (Don't worry, I'm doing it too.) Go Al!



Can't wait to read about Zev infiltrating the fortress...




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How was she? *slap* :-)

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klarabella wrote...

How was she? *slap* :-)


Hehe...well, you know what's first and foremost on Zevran's mind...

:devil:

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Hi Freckles04,

After this story, you really should write one of Zevran. You capture him so well.

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lol Zevran loving the idea of breaking into the GW fortress. It does sound like something he would love to do ^_^ very awesome!