Brilliant! I just went through it with one Shep of mine. Garrus LI line played correctly. Nice echo effect on the voices. Looks like you played it a little safer and decided not to change any music which is probably just as well.
The quarian/geth slide, since I saved them both...green flashlight for the geth? Quarians looked fine though. Maybe I'm remembering the original slide incorrectly or, because all options are still available, was that a slide to cover both a synthesis ending and your ending?
I don't really care actually, I thought it was fantastic. I still don't like the Catalyst but now being the "Intelligence" and the way the dialogue flows I think it's much better. I'm really looking forward to using this mod. Thank you for making this.
Oh, and I know it sounds dorky since I found a lot of the voices but I'm glad you were able to add them and customize them. It really makes that scene feel more like a rescue instead of Shep breathing and being in the middle of nowhere all alone.