Just a drop...so a wee blister. Didn't melt any bones or anything!
And yes, I have a baaaaad cruel streak when it comes to writing. The Alistair/Roland/Cousland love triangle I was obsessed with for a while started to get really dark...so i took a break...go back to it now and again and wonder who the hell I was so angry at...
Well, at least it's not Fluoridric Acid (that famous HF)... Or your bone will melt... Ugh... I can write a horror story about that, got a case in my lab last year when a girl get this acid splased on her hand... A week in the hospital.
ANd about that fanfic of yours, I wannaaaa! Alistair/Roland/Cousland is adorable triangle! Oh sweet Rory...
Did anyone get the sense that they rushed through this whole lyrium thing? I mean we've been speculating on what would happen to him for years if he got off the blue stuff, so maybe that's why it feels so rushed. But it's like they give us a couple cut scenes and then we just assume it's resolved and he's super okay? Like so many things in the game, it just seemed to lack consequence and follow-up. Another example would be the decision regarding Bull's Chargers in his (Bull's) personal quest. It's like you make the decision and then... nothing.
Just more disappointing with Cullen because I loves him so. Could've been such a moving story.
It's still a moving story for me. Still, a Magic/Lyrium/Fade DLC with lots of Cullen content might be good. You know, seeing how he's doing post-Perseverance...
Well... I think listening to Mahler's Funeral March while reading this was a bad idea... 
Well written, though
And the emotion of the scene is very well conveyed. Grammar needs a little work, but you're doing well 
Thanks 
Need English Grammar Revision... Oups 