Just chiming in and trying to say this delicately...my boyfriend actually described for me...in detail (he has a very scientific approach to things) what things feel like to a guy (I asked to him for writing purposes a long time ago). It was actually pretty fascinating and not at all what I imagined (being a women). So...in my attempts at writing smut from a male's POV...I use his descriptions for...ummm...things.
I plan to post the smut chapters in my DAO fic at some point and I am so nervous about the comments....eek! Maybe I should scratch it...
Mine was using medical terms while describing that & that detached expression... I felt like he was the science teacher teaching me in health class...
I understand the Mage/ Templar idea, just seems like most of them are female elf with him.
I am already working on it now
Hope to have chapter one up in a day or so. She is a Warrior/Templar with a very tormented and rough past. She is definitely a woman who has been brutalized both mentally and physically and needs a man like Cullen to show her there is love. A lot of women have Demons in there past and I wanted a woman who kept fighting even when most wouldn't for so long.
I have posted my links for the first 2 with my Elf and him, so will post this one when I get it up
Do it ![]()
I'd love to read it anyway. I always write Mage/Templar (Dalish mage... or once Trevelyan mage) dynamic since it's my canon world state with my character, I already got all the base set. But it's really great to see other class' story.
And well, this is the reason everything went wrong in DA2...






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