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[Dennis Carpenter]

I think my weakest is Cassandra just can't seem to get it right but still working on her.    http://social.biowar...5428/5428.png   I tried to just put the pics in this post but haven't figured out how to do that yet. Any comments or criticism is appreciated.

[Fulgrim88]

For a direct image just copy the graphic link and put it into [.img]Link[/img] Link tags, save for the dot

Modifié par Fulgrim88, 14 octobre 2009 - 11:50 .

[JEBesh]

Sardenspar is my favorite of yours. Maybe I'm a bit biased, as a dwarf.

[Dennis Carpenter]

I screwed up the link for sure cause you only get one pic so disregard that and just go to my profile and you can see them all. Meanwhile I will try to do that graphic link thing but will probably toast that as well

[Dennis Carpenter]

hope everyone is able to get to look at all of them

[Linarc]

I liked Brockmor, probably that expression of his was a part of it



liked sardenspar as well

[Saurel]

ok from those I like most to least



1.) Bradigan- I'm guessing you feel this way also. None of his facial geometry seems off. And the weary eyes/eyebrows offset the kind of gruff structure. So he seems experienced and wise. I could potentially see him without the tats, but ITT I would need to see how it looks close up.



2)Lhydia - something seems off either in the nose/bridge depth or the chin. But she has an interesting quality that I like. (it was a bit hard to decide who would go in second)



3)Felspar- I really like her alot, and the fact that she has no flaws that I can see (by flaws I mean features that seem ajar). She has a sweet quality to her - not sure if thats what you were going for. And that tat combined with is a nice combo.



4.)Brockmor - who doesn't like a mage with a handle-bar mustache?



5)Sardenspar - for some reason the color combo doesn't work as well (for me) as it does on Felspar. Other than that I think he is solid. And looks cool. Just the orange and very tan bugs me in this instance.



6)Cassandra - Like Lydhia she has character, but there does seem something off here. And Lydhia is more interesting to me . I think cutting down on the blush & or changing complexions might help.



7)Maehdros - for some reason I don't like the color combo again. I could see him benefiting from a larger nose because his jaw/mouth draw alot of attention.



8)Lhynda - it might be the forehead and the eyes , but she kinda creeps me out a bit O_o

[Fulgrim88]

The funny thing is, that's where i appear to fail. How can i look at your characters via the profile?

To be honest i can't even find my own, i'm always accessing them via the CC directlink...

[JEBesh]

Fulgrim88 wrote...

The funny thing is, that's where i appear to fail. How can i look at your characters via the profile?<br />
To be honest i can't even find my own, i'm always accessing them via the CC directlink...

Click on the "Games" tab in his profile, and then Dragon Age Origins - PC.

[Saurel]

Fulgrim88 wrote...

The funny thing is, that's where i appear to fail. How can i look at your characters via the profile?<br />
To be honest i can't even find my own, i'm always accessing them via the CC directlink...

Click on his name>then the games tab> then on Dragon Age Pc

edit: JEB beat me to it

Modifié par Saurel, 15 octobre 2009 - 12:07 .

[Fulgrim88]

Thx



For me its

1) Bradigan: Everything fits on that one

2) Brockmor: A close second. I defenitily dig the beard and the expression

3) Maehdros: Good job on the tatoo and the elvish features

4) Sardenspar: It's a dwarf, nuff said. Don't like dark skin for underground dwellers though, but thats just me

5) Felspar: Same reasons, could as well be #4

6) Lhydia: Looks okay

7) Cassandra: A bit too much on the tight lipped-serious side for my liking. Looks like she's eaten something sour Maybe widen her lips and chin a bit

8) Lhynda: Proportions seem quite off

[Dennis Carpenter]

definitely liking the criticism thank you I will take evrything and see if I can make the necessary adjustments to each as for bradigan i was looking for the tired vet who has seen to much already an knows exactly how much more is to come.

Modifié par Dennis Carpenter, 15 octobre 2009 - 12:19 .

[AClockworkMelon]

1.) Brockmor

I can't resist the 'stache. His expression fits his face, too.

2.) Felspar

Let me just say that I don't typically like dark-skinned dwarves because it doesn't make sense, seeing as they've lived underground for milennia. But Felspar looks nice.

3.) Lhydia

She looks pretty good. A lot of people seem to be having trouble making a decent-looking chick.

4.) Sardenspar

If it's one thing DA could use more of, it's beard.

5.) Maehdros

The problem I'm having with a lot of the males is they all sort of look the same to me. I'm not saying he looks bad, but I just have the feeling that I've seen him a dozen times before.

6.) Bradigan

Bradigan's sortof 'meh' to me.

7.) Lhynda

I'm not a fan of her very narrow face.

8.) Cassandra

I'm not a fan of her really narrow nose. I could go without the blush, too. But that's just personal preference, I know other people like it.

[Dennis Carpenter]

well I have lightened up the dwarvesw and adjusted cassandra and Lhynda but still havente seen the upgrade for Lhynda yet. uploaded it several times think it finally went through so just waiting for that one to come in let me know how you like the changes. i am really having a good time with this.

[Dennis Carpenter]

finally got Lhynda's portrait updated well let me know what you think of the upgrades

[Linarc]

ohh, posted this unintencionally before...
if it can be deleted, would be better...

Modifié par Linarc, 15 octobre 2009 - 02:57 .

[Seagloom]

I seriously need to be more prolific. Eight characters... wow. =O

Anyways in order from best to worst...



1 - Brockmor

I have to agree with AClockworkMelon. That mustache sells it. Especially how it links with the rest of his hair. That's a hard look to pull off well.



2 - Bradigan

Looks a bit older, which I dig. Somewhat dejected too, but it suits his overall look in my opinion. I like it.



3 - Lhydia

Of the women I like her the most. Her face has a nice symmetrical look to it and the color choices match up well.



4 - Sardenspar

Looks alright. There's something about his eyes that grab me, but I'm not sure what. It's a weird gaze. Something between very tired or shocked. >.<



5 - Cassandra

Not great, but fairly unique. I like how she's chubby instead of a perfectly chiseled beauty queen. I agree something needs to be done with her lips and chin. Mostly her lips though.



6 - Felspar

Not bad at all. She's mainly sixth by virtue of preferring the others over hers.



7 - Maehdros

Fittingly for a seventh pick, I'm indifferent to this one. It isn't bad by any means, but nothing about him leaps out at me.



8 - Lhynda

Same problem as with her elven cousin at seventh. Although, I'm not sure I like her nose, which is why she's eighth place on my list.



My apologies if this wasn't very helpful. I'm not the best judge of faces really.

[Linarc]

ah, ok, let me see, in order

1) Bradigan: he looks like he is passing through a lot of pain, sad guy :/ but a different guy as well, so it's interesting
2) Cassandra: didn't like the cheeks, maybe wider lips, but overall it's ok
3) Lhynda: ok, nothing to add, maybe bigger eyes...
4) Brockmor: I liked him before, like him now
5) Lhydia: nice arrogant face, seems capable of a lot of elven prejudice, poor elves
6) Maehdros: just not my type of guy, probably the tatoo, but it's a matter of taste
7) Seldenspar: seldenspar is cool
8) Felspar: bigger eyes maybe, maybe it's just me who put big eyes in my characters and think everybody seems better with it, but she is a pretty dwarf

EDIT: not my personal taste order, your order, mine would be like this:
Brockmor; Seldenspar; Bradigan; Lhydia; Felspar; Lhynda; Maehdros and Cassandra

Modifié par Linarc, 15 octobre 2009 - 03:01 .

[Saurel]

So looked over the edited ones. Lhynda definitely is looking better. Cassandra's skin tone looks more natural than it did before, but yeah the cheeks are a bit too puffy.

[Fulgrim88]

Lhynda did really improve, so did (when it comes to my personal taste) the dwarves.

Cassandra has gone through a heavy change, though i think she looks okay. A bit puffy, not the model most girls around here represent, but natural enough