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Modifié par EtteStarz, 25 septembre 2010 - 03:51 .


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It's hard to read right now, you might want to fix the formatting.

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Like Sia said, way to hard to read right now. Need to go back and edit it.

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Good start! Interesting demon concept.

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Modifié par EtteStarz, 25 septembre 2010 - 03:51 .


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Excellent story

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Modifié par EtteStarz, 25 septembre 2010 - 03:52 .


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Modifié par EtteStarz, 24 septembre 2010 - 03:07 .


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Excellent

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Modifié par EtteStarz, 25 septembre 2010 - 03:52 .


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Modifié par EtteStarz, 24 septembre 2010 - 03:07 .


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I love those illustrations. Darn me and my big sodding mouth! : (

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Modifié par EtteStarz, 24 septembre 2010 - 03:07 .


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*blushes* Used to drive my boyfriend in High School crazy, the multi-tasking thing.

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Modifié par EtteStarz, 24 septembre 2010 - 03:07 .


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LOL, went over my tired little, not so chaste head. : D

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Modifié par EtteStarz, 24 septembre 2010 - 03:07 .


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Oh I love the chapter, and the new illustration!

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Modifié par EtteStarz, 25 septembre 2010 - 03:52 .


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All your chapters are great! Really enjoying the story Ette! : )

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Hey there Ette,

Well as promised I am finally getting to read ur fan fic. Let me tell you that I am very much interested in Marcus and what lays instore for him and the young Warden Cousland. (Not thrilled on the name Marcus eh.. but u get that in the big city.)



I am enjoying the story thus far and will keep returning until I finally finish. I think that it is good that you have put a different spin on things from the game and well in true Dragon Age form your characters are true to themselves... well I know what I mean.. :P



Keep the writing going and I will look forward to first, finishing this story and then reading the next story that your pen graces a page with.



Have fun

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Modifié par EtteStarz, 24 septembre 2010 - 03:08 .


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ROFL! I too can't wait to see what happens for Marcus, I find him intriguing. And hot.



Check is in the mail... you tickle me pink.