Ah! Speaking of breakup scene, I'm almost there. I'm about to start the Temple of Mythas and I'm aware it happens some point after that, but when exactly? I'd like to get a save file ready so I can go over it again later (you know, when I fancy torturing myself). x)
But that aside, that's my gripe with a lot of fanfics.
I suppose it's not technically wrong (I think it translates to "my heart" whereas vhenan alone is "heart", but it is inconsistant with what he does say, and it makes me grind my teeth in a weird way. x)
It's right after--as soon as you speak to Solas after getting back to Skyhold, the last romance scene will play out.
Elven is kind of a weird language; I think "vhenan" can be "my heart" as well as just "heart" because it's not meant to be a language you can necessarily translate word-for-word.
I agree - it's not my writing as an FYI. It does make my brain go "huh" for a second but otherwise I don't get too bent out of shape over it. But to add to your complaint: Request to FF writers everywhere - can he not call he "vhenan" all the time? I mean she has a name. Feel free to use it. Or not. It's not necessary to put an endearment at the end of every dam sentence. WE GET IT. THEY LOVE EACH OTHER. Christ.
ANYWHO - yeah. I thought ma stood for "you". And it looks like @Addai clarified - I think it's just BW hasn't really set down the rules to the language yet. It's still kind of...all over the place. It doesn't irk me so much to the point I can't enjoy an otherwise lovely fic - there are other things like unironically using hahren/da'len - eww. When I
see that I'm like "BYE!!!" and close the program.
Oh, I know it's not yours, it's just a pet peeve of mine so I used it as a launching point to complain a little I guess, haha. Sorry.
"Ma" can mean "you" and "my/mine;" in that way, "ma vhenan" is technically not incorrect as a rule, but for Solas it's wrong. It bothers me because it's just not what he says, which means I start doubting how much attention the author has paid to Solas, and then I get extra nitpicky about characterization and it ruins it for me. :S The "hahren"/"da'len" stuff does the same thing--Lavellan and Solas address each other like that once and never do it again in-game. Some fics use it as the only form of address other than "vhenan" and it gets weird.
It's not a mistake- Merrill says this if Hawke falls in battle, and allegedly Solas does, too, though I've never heard it so can't verify.
Merrill says it, sure, but Solas never once does. If someone's writing a fic about Merrill and she calls someone "ma vhenan" I wouldn't mind, but Solas only ever uses "vhenan."





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