@the writers: I oppose any separation from the thread, at least in the form of closed groups. I didn't bring it up to not be able to profit from the results then. No, that's ridiculous. I want to see your co-op fiction!
Abelas x Lavellan smut that we as a group took over. I can't remember who wrote what. There were 7 people writing.
More importantly, if you found good smut - you must share it. It's a rule.
I read it. I especially liked the stringent use of anaphora in the first half of the text, amplifying the repetitive character of sex in contemporary Western civilizations. This, further intensified by a high density of short, seemingly inept fragments of sentences, depicts the fragility and arbitrariness of human interaction even more strongly than I have seen in literature in recent years. More even, later paragraphs appear to pick subjects haphazardly, dismantling the notion of an emotional bond between lovers, reducing physical intercourse to the raw act and showing the exchangeability of individuals, which thus degrade to mere representatives of their kind. At the end of the piece - pure devastation. Even the spirits, obviously a metaphor for the Riders of the Apocalypse, leave the garden (Eden), bare any emotion.
I would like to share fanfic porn with you any day, but I don't think I may since he didn't publish it himself (only the gods know why). And it's not DAI.