Really? I saw it coming from miles away
Their texts were becoming too goddamn intense for it to not... ehm, culminate in something. Can't say I wasn't surprised that it happened in THIS chapter, but eventually I figured this would happen at some point.
In any case, I don't mind it 'dragging', if it means a bit more politics, journalism or museum stuff or interactions with other characters - those parts I enjoy. Solas and Ellana obsessively thinking about themselves I can skip. I hope she also won't drag them not meeting in person for too long, it was an interesting hook for quite a while, but now it's getting a bit old.
No, for me the dragging is waaaaaaay too many near misses. It just drags it out. I want more of the politics and the cute things that the fic had a lot more of in the beginning. Yes, their texts were becoming more intense but it didn't 'fit' to me in being just unexpected smut chapter. That is another way to drag things out while still postponing the meeting....AGAIN.
You can only dangle a carrot in front of people for so long.





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