Not off topic and total valid feels, falon
I hope drosophila is up for some serious beta business when this is done.
oooohh dorosophila is such a good beta.
I kinda wanna kidnap her a shove her in a room with all my writing like "MAKE ME A GOOD WRITER"
ehehehe a beta slave ... perfect 
Writing: You know you're in too deep when you're writing a new chapter on your phone during a car ride AND the other three people in the car are helping you write it. Two of them are relatives who have no idea what Dragon Age is
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No car sickness? I could never believe it when I saw people reading in the car, I would get sick just going on a 10 minute drive as a child.
Not off topic and total valid feels, falon
I hope drosophila is up for some serious beta business when this is done.
oooohh dorosophila is such a good beta.
I kinda wanna kidnap her a shove her in a room with all my writing like "MAKE ME A GOOD WRITER"
ehehehe a beta slave ... perfect
It wasn't difficult, since it was a really good read. When it comes out, I highly recommend it, folks 
but I love to help
Thanks
I would never submit to slavery
*whispers* I might be about to post it right now
And thanks!! You were super helpful. It's ten times better now, imo. I added a lot
I am
And by the way, some of it was very hot, you're worrying too much
No car sickness? I could never believe it when I saw people reading in the car, I would get sick just going on a 10 minute drive as a child.
So what did I look(?) like?
I am sad she can't give specifics -- I was so curious how spot on her headspace is. xD
The result was... interesting. Wish I'd taken a picture of it.
I don't think I could do that here. All the baristas are total nerds and would know the subject too well to make it fun.
Case in point: The highlight of my trip today.
Opened tumblr in the middle of a bat mitzvah while being surrounded by children. Realized it's Saturday and closed it asap. Gladly, no one noticed, I think.
I didn't get this at first. I thought.. like what? There's no phones allowed in a bat mitzvah? Then I remembered. I grinned xxx core.
"Wow, this is actually really hard."
Solas can relate.
It may help you shake some things out.
Maybe literally.
Solas can probably also relate.
I am
And by the way, some of it was very hot, you're worrying too much
DROSO I HEAR YOU'RE GOOD AT GIVING FEEDBACK. What's a girl gotta do to get some?
I am sad she can't give specifics -- I was so curious how spot on her headspace is. xD
I don't think I could do that here. All the baristas are total nerds and would know the subject too well to make it fun.
I didn't get this at first. I thought.. like what? There's no phones allowed in a bat mitzvah? Then I remembered. I grinned xxx core.
Solas can relate.
Solas can probably also relate.
DROSO I HEAR YOU'RE GOOD AT GIVING FEEDBACK. What's a girl gotta do to get some?
This was like reading a highlight news broadcast covering recent thread events.
I do try.
-sips her tea-
About his nose though
just freaking
Spoiler
look at
Spoiler
it
Spoiler
it's f*cking glorious
(I like it too much)
I really do like his nose.
I am also in need of a beta reader. Chapter 11 just wrapped up and I need a new set of eyes to find any lingering typos, spelling errors or past present mistakes. I even made a Goggle Doc, yay just signed up and learned something new!
Just posed first chapter of my fic
http://archiveofouro...apters/11613073
My heart is beating so fast ugh I'm so nervous
I would love to hear anyone's thoughts!
I am also in need of a beta reader. Chapter 11 just wrapped up and I need a new set of eyes to find any lingering typos, spelling errors or past present mistakes. I even made a Goggle Doc, yay just signed up and learned something new!
Busy right now, also writing my next chapter, but I should have some time tomorrow
Just posed first chapter of my fic
http://archiveofouro...apters/11613073
My heart is beating so fast ugh I'm so nervous
I would love to hear anyone's thoughts!
Busy right now, also writing my next chapter, but I should have some time tomorrow
No problem I sent the link if you have time, off to read your first chapter.
*slides quietly into blanket fort, holding pumpkin spice latte slightly behind back*
I am sad she can't give specifics -- I was so curious how spot on her headspace is. xD
Well I only know what about two of you look like and the barest details for a couple of others. Like hair colors or eye colors. So it makes sense that it was all impressions, I guess. Though interacting with all your fuzzy representations was an interesting experience. It gave me some thought in term of how to write Fade visits with Cole, at least. 
Oh Tumblr, Saturday has brought images of people using no clothes mods on Solavellan scenes.
I'm also willing to help some stuff if it's relatively short and you don't update very, very often. (I'm not really into complicated AUs or detailed smut, so those are not in my area of expertise and if you need smut guidance, I can't really do that. )
There's always the writing group as well. Especially if you're unsure about a particular thing and want a mini workshop on a particular scene or dilemma.
I'm also willing to help some stuff if it's relatively short and you don't update very, very often. (I'm not really into complicated AUs or detailed smut, so those are not in my area of expertise and if you need smut guidance, I can't really do that.
There's always the writing group as well. Especially if you're unsure about a particular thing and want a mini workshop on a particular scene or dilemma.
I will send you a PM if that's cool? I realized I never asked for an invite to AO3 so I'm out in the cold, haha.
I'm also willing to help some stuff if it's relatively short and you don't update very, very often. (I'm not really into complicated AUs or detailed smut, so those are not in my area of expertise and if you need smut guidance, I can't really do that.
There's always the writing group as well. Especially if you're unsure about a particular thing and want a mini workshop on a particular scene or dilemma.
.......I don't think the writing group wants to hear full details of the dilemma's I'm dealing with.
Sable I much prefer your AU to other modern interpretations.
The relative lack of angst makes it easier to write than, say, canon Solavellan.
.......I don't think the writing group wants to hear full details of the dilemma's I'm dealing with.
I've written turian threesomes for the kmeme. Try me if you like via PM
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