If you were to change the templar order how would you do it and why?
Procedurally?
- I'd have the mages and templars eat meals together - intermixed tables, not one table for templars and one for mages.
- I'd have a portion of time wherein the mages and templars were scheduled to do things they had nothing to do with being mages and templars together - art or farming or something.
- I'd have the templars not wear armour in the tower on a regular basis.
- I'd have at least 20% of any group that goes out to hunt blood mages be mages.
- I'd have the seats of power for higher ranked people moved into the towers and deny them their own floor or what have you for their organisation. Having decisions concerning this sort of thing made miles away by someone who may never have been in a tower and is separated from the day to day goings on doesn't seem particularly wise.
- Implement some decent policing metrics. Someone who has a high incidence of blood mages in their area or what have you ought to be getting put under investigation and possibly fired, not congratulated for the use of force necessary to restrain them.
Okay, why?
It seems to me that the towers have a bad effect in that even within them the mages and templars are highly segregated. When your entire life is defined as controlling the mages, and you know nothing about the mages and their lives other than that they're dangerous... what did you think was going to happen?
I suspect that things would be far less abusive if they actually had to get to know one another, had some other source of interest than mutual enmity, and that mages would be far less likely to turn to mischief if they had something to do other than sit around the circle being oppressed.
Immediately?
Well, immediately there'd have to be a fair number of firings. One would have to set up a decent intelligence network to find who wasn't doing their job well and who was. Clean the house, so to speak.
You're not describing slavery or servitude.
You're describing raising a kid.
You don't give a kid the ability to self-determine a lot because kids are stupid and will make dumb decisions. They'll eat horrible food, have the hygiene of a homeless person, and trash their living area worse then a hoarder.
Parents make choices for kids because kids can't make good choices while they'll kid. Come on man, this ain't that hard to figure out.
You can raise a kid in many ways, and some of that requires a certain degree of control. However, crippling their long term ability to make choices about their life, to become their own person as they grow, is abuse.