Hmm... If the main character isn't relatable or likeable at some level, that could be a problem for me. I'll have to check Goodreads/Amazon for some reviews.
Well ...
There are basically 2 main characters. One of them in the present and one of them in the past.
The one in the present doesn't really seem to have a character. She does stuff but i couldn't really come up with any describing character trait.
The one in the past has some character but not much and seems to have some rather weird opinions.
The side characters are also not well written. There's one character that is described as being very charismatic and funny, yet i still haven't read about him doing anything charismatic or funny.
I will describe another scene to you, which irked me especially. Little Spoilers ahead. The character of the past lives during the 4th blight. There she encounters another character, who writes all sort of letters to use the connections of that person to assemble troops and supplies for the fight against the darkspawn. The past main character then gets upset about that being "politics". This irks me, because people generally don't decry something as "politics" just because it is political, but because something bad is being done and politics get used as a excuse to do it.
This isn't the case here. The other person isn't conscripting peasents or something, she just writes letters to assemble allready existing military.
Not much later the main past character yells at an old grandmother, that she better be ready to pick up a weapon and fight the darkspawn.