So, first of all, it's good, not great, but good. Transitions could use some work between each segment (Arl of Redcliffe, Mage thing... etc.). This is especially noticeable when the music abruptly stops after DAO, going into DA2.
Also, just a suggestion, but I'd love if another Dragon Age story teller could voice this (allowing for a choice of two). Leliana, I'm not a huge fan of Varric as it is, and I used to love the VA of Leliana especially during the storytelling segments. While it would probably be at big cost, I got to admit, I'd vastly prefer it, it has been proved that she didn't die if you killed her afterall.
The ISS also resets (as I'm sure you know), the Warden, his or her romance and every single new choice (Zevran also has an issue being dead). The problem also extends to the tapestry, as I found that the Warden would get changed in the story, and it would be changed in the tapestry. Also, Morrigan often gets reset to have a human child and trying to change it causes a dead Warden who killed the archdemon to be considered invalid. It asks (for me) to solve to Loghain killing the archdemon and the Warden being alive. It's troubling because the human child thing should only be possible (actually, it should be forced), if you are male and had a romance with Morrigan. The choice is inevitable.
Also, some choices that are invalid are allowed until one hits the ISS (most obvious is Connor being possessed, only possible if you are a mage). When one plays the ISS, the Warden gets changed, for example, but it doesn't popup the autosolver first. It seems to allow it UNTIL you hit the ISS. I've reported all of this in the Beta Feedback Tool.
We also need a pause button, and I'm in chrome and cannot edit choices.
Hey guys!
We're working on making the Warden/Hawke's more representative across the DA Keep. What we reeeally want to do is create a fun little 2D avatar creator so your Warden and Hawke are exactly how you'd like them to show up, however we still have lots to do to get ready for DA:I shipping so for now we're looking at a few easier options.
Hate to be a bit forward, but if we can't have something like that to atleast change skin colour, I'd ask if we could just not see the warden at all (maybe have an Aeducan sigil pic for noble), Hawke also having something like that would be preferable too. Right now, it feels like white is default and that doesn't sit right to me, not a little bit.
There are a couple of mistakes:
-Arl Eamon wasn't ill because of a demon possesing his son, it was poisoned by Jowan, an apostate
-Aveline was no "old friend" of the family. They actually met at leaving Lothering
A couple of ideas that could help:
-Button for full screen.
-Something to control the volume
As for Eamon, I believe it says that Connor made a deal to save Eamon, only it didn't cure him so that's correct. Jowan doesn't get a mention at all however (his name is nowhere in the Keep).
By the time this story is retold to us, it's after the fact, by which time... Aveline IS an old friend.