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Fanfiction: With tasty angst! (02/21: Afterglow, new fic, Ch3/4 up!)


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flyingjudes

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After lurking the forums I thought I would post some of my own fanfiction since I really enjoy a lot of the fiction / art being posted on here. I'm a member of the Swooping community on LJ and I'm hanging out in the IRC all the time. I was part of some fandoms a long time ago, but I'm surprised at how warm and welcoming the Dragon Age community is, so I was inspired to write fic.

For some reason Dragon Age inspires me to write all sorts of tragic and depressing fic so that I can make myself and others miserable. But now I have one piece of Zev/fem!Amell fluff!

A Cold Comfort (complete): It is no simple matter, safeguarding ordinary men from mages, and mages from themselves.
- About what happens in the Tower after Amell leaves and the consequences of mages consorting with demons.
- Original Mage/Templar.
- Mage Origin, Broken Circle and slight endgame spoilers.

Elegy (complete): I was once Cousland and then a Grey Warden. I have known all sorts of betrayal. Now my body becomes a pyre, fuel for my vengeance. This is a metamorphosis, of sorts.
- Some part of me really dislikes Cousland/Alistair happily ever after or Cousland/Alistair smut/fluff (there are a handful of exceptions). So I'm not sure why my response to this is to write a dark Cousland fic in order to add to the roster of Cousland/Alistair fics, go figure.
- Human noble and endgame spoilers.

Linger (companion piece to Tremble): You would learn from him how to mask what you felt, and to keep on smiling. But one close brush with death, and you crumble.
- Zev / fem!Amell fluff
- Zev romance spoilers

Tremble (companion piece to Linger): Once you left the tower and promised you would not return. Now here you are.
- Zev / fem!Surana dark fic
- M, dark themes (no explicit description, but warning: mention of underage, non-con, violence, sex)

Hush: She was Andruil, Goddess of the Hunt, and Zevran pledged himself to her completely, body and soul.
- Zev / fem!Cousland angst (but this is a love story, really)
- T, slight description of sex

Afterglow: What rises in the hour of deepening twilight.
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AU. When presented with the immense task of gathering the army to face the coming horde, the Grey Warden says no.
- My take on what will happen when a willful and furious fem!Cousland disregards the concern of the Blight and decides to forge her own path.
- M , violence and sex.

I'm always happy to hear from people and their thoughts on my writing even if it's to tell me it didn't work for them. So, nice to meet you all!

Modifié par flyingjudes, 22 février 2010 - 04:51 .


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Tasmen

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I absolutely love these. Angst cookies are the best cookies in the whole world!

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Miliat

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I have literal cold chills from Elegy. I cannot wait to read more.

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flyingjudes

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Tas: Angst cookies are delicious indeed.



Miliat: Thanks for reading!



Elegy has been updated. It will be complete soon. I felt so drained last night after I finished writing it.

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It was, wow. I'll be honest, I like reading all the fluff bits, but your take on that relationship in Elegy was amazing. It is definitely one of the best fanfics I have ever read for its emotional power.

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Elegy is awesome. That last description of what it is to kill a god...

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Jaulen

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Loved Elegy........the ending was great. And goosebumpy.

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flyingjudes

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Thanks for reading everyone!



I always wondered if Alistair would feel some sort of resentment at the PC for doing all of these things that he didn't want to do, and I always thought that the break up scene was very...unemotional and bland considering what they went through to get this far. So that was another part of my inspiration.

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I just read Elegy and of course loved it. Different perspective and very well written. You put a lot of emotion into such a short piece--nice work :)

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I love your writing style, your story flows so well, almost sings! Elegy is absolutely beautiful and powerful emotion-wise.

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MarcusDeVarro

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what does angst mean?

im to lazy to dictionary.com it

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Tasmen

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MarcusDeVarro wrote...

what does angst mean?
im to lazy to dictionary.com it


Sweet sweet, grrrrraaaaaaargh. 

Consider angst kind of 'woe is me' with a genuine sadness tossed in. 

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MarcusDeVarro

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aaaahhh

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Emma-Lath

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Just finished reading Elegy Image IPB, it's so good but so sad at the same time, but I think that's what makes your story so great! I feel so moved after reading it, I think you captured the mood that the DA writers were trying to create. I love how you made the ending so bittersweet too Image IPB.

Anyways brillent work of fiction, I plan to start reading your other story soon.

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flyingjudes

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Thanks for reading everyone!

It's always nice to hear some supportive comments. They make me happy.

I think the game inspires me because of the atmosphere. There's a lot of "human" behavior involved, like friends turning on friends or people betraying each other, but there's also some happiness as well.

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So, so great. I devour angst. There's something wonderfully satisfying about having your heart ripped out of your chest and being able to stand there... and the feeling of it being gone.



Of course having such a huge need for angst, I still haven't been able to bring myself to do Ultimate Sacrifice.



Thanks for writing and posting Elegy. It was a terrific read!

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Arlana Tabris

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Wow. Both pieces are very intense. Great job.

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Thanks MsSouthpaw and Arlana Tabris for your comments!



Updates as of 02/14/10, two Zevran pieces!



http://www.fanfictio...744180/1/Linger (fluff)

http://www.fanfictio...46477/1/Tremble (dark)

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Wow elegy was fantastic. For some reason I'm only ever to play my characters out as optimists....driven optimists...but still optimists. (I'm also an Alistair fangirl) This was really beautiful.



Can't wait for more!

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I can't gush enough about the Zev pieces. I love my gift so much. :) I'm so happy that little Antivan is starting to stick on you.

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Thanks for reading, Jules8445! I think there are is so much potential in the game to play either as optimists or as realists, and I think there are many roads you can take.

And <3 Tas!

I updated today with more fic. This time it's a Zev/fem!Cousland love story, which is sort of a strange pairing to me with all kinds of potential.

http://www.fanfictio.../5750564/1/Hush

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AdorableAnarchist

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Oh wow... Hush is... Wow. Loved it. Your descriptions are very lush.

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Thanks, AA! I'm trying to write in the way that the game speaks to me, which is mostly about the characters and how they develop, so this was my way of attempting to describe that.

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I have another piece up, this time something longer I'm hoping, set in an alternate universe but still playing with DA:O rules.

Afterglow (you can read it here on ffnet, it's also on LJ @ dragonage_fic)
- This is about a furious fem!Cousland who is used to getting her way, who decides to turn her back on the Blight and do what she believes is the best for her country.
- M, violence and sex.

Once again, I appreciate all comments / critiques / suggestions. Please tell me what works for you and what doesn't!

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Another update!

Chapter 3 / 4 are up.



The link is in the post above.