The phrase she used was "you said not all of them had to be military." I assumed Alexius assured her that only the mages with war mage training needed to be military and fight in the legion while the apprentices and those who can barely light a candle become quezars shifting papers around for a tevinter Circle or some other mundane task. Yet once Alexius took over Redcliffe and everyone in the south is alienated against mages, he changed the terms of the indentured servitude to "everyone gets 10 years in the legion" leaving Fiona all

I don't know if this decision was a Fiona decision or if they put it to a vote and the pro-Tevinter alliance people won out. In all the cases I know Fiona, she's always been democratic and forthright about the decisions involving the mages. The mages in redcliffe all have differing opinions on the alliance, some for it, some against it but considering some of them are Tevinter infiltrators who helped the motion go along as well, the popular vote was likely biased.
Well, thats why I included the phrase "If thats true". I didn't notice it during my playthrough but yeah, in Dragon Age if you're only conscripting men, its some kind of sexism (arguably the case in modern society given the nature of modern military). But there's no mention of that with Fiona so we'll scratch that one off.
Yea, I think people are seriously starting to miss use the term Marry Sue to mean something compeltely different.
The 'Mind control' thing, for me came when we met her at redcliff and she didn't know and wondered why we where there. Then Mr. Treventor showed up, and told that she is now in under his command. Then he said he wanted to meet you. Which then said in my mind, did he mind control her to give me a msg to go there.
Well, as one of the quotes I pulled below shows, there are other terms we can use for her. I don't know if she's a Sue at the end of the day but I do know that the list on page three if it were true points to Sueishness. Again, remember professional writers are held to higher standards. It doesn't take as much Sueishness to earn the label if its in a published work.
"Starting"?
I think you give people here too much credit.
Like its exclusive to here.
Its always been a nebulous term but at the end of the day its about someone intruding on canon for the sake of their pet character. Wesley Crusher is another good example and he was created by Gene Roddenberry. Nobody is exempt.
I wouldn't call Fiona a mary sue
Just a special snowflake who's a moron
That would suit me based on what I've heard.
FWIW I saw a survey recently of fannish terms that sci fi authors hated and mary sue was top of the list because people do not understand it and use it indiscriminately.
Authors have blind spots just like normal people do. Thats how Sues and/or author's pets creep into canon.