They needed more private moments with Shepard without the dreams possibly losing composure, but there weren't any fail missions other than Thessia. We were kicking ass. And if you played multi-player you had an all blue map "We are holding steady and winning in key sectors." The game was way too much of a power trip for the story.
In all fairness, some of the dialogue lines were pretty bad, too. Like at the missiles - "We can do this." It sounds like doubt. You've been kicking ass throughout the entire section. Why should that change? Where the hell was your support anyway? Anderson's brilliant plan. "I'm sending you up the middle where the resistance is the heaviest. You have to get to that beam." Yeah, I know it was the videogamey part. But come up with a better line that doesn't sound like doubt.
That pre-battle speech. I'd liked to have skipped it altogether. I know it was for bullsh*t cinematics because we all need a rousing speech before heading into hell, but if they didn't know what was at stake by that time, nothing was going to help them. I skipped it for the Suicide Mission.
Besides the best speech I've heard in a movie is this one:
I think Kiefer Sutherland would have been a great Shepard, but he was tied up with 24 at the time.