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CHAPTER ONE: 9:37




I didin't take that pic, found it on google =)

This story gets you into the deep politics of humanity, between pepole and nations, and the adventures will take you to a lot of nations around Thedas, it is the first propered story I write so take it easy on me, btw, I am not a native english speaker so again take it easy on me
A bit Edits: Somtimes I write from Iphone so I may have more spelling mistakes I am sorry about it. The Chapter one title was "9:47" but it meant 9:37 sorry about the confusion. 
Welcome to the story "Chess" for all of you that have not finished DAI Da2 or DAO there are major spoilers from all of the games another notice this story is not about the Inquisitor but about other pepole and other stories enjoy and I hope you will like it :-) . Another notice as long as there is not "to be continue" it means l havent finished the chapter and will edit it later.
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Val Royaux is a shining glory to the Empire of Orlais, under the rule of Celene we tend to keep a strong Empire yet welcoming of other races our Empire is the strongest Human nation in all of Thedas, and our house is a glorious example of how the noble houses should treat elves, remember becouse one day you will be the ruler of our glorious example. With the news from Kirkwall we should all be wary of our subjects and our allies, a war is coming, the question is when. I knew then I knew I need to be a good example of the cost, I will be the lady of this house and maybe of my future husband, but that is nothing to worry on the moment my friend Marie will come with me to visit Serult I hear it is lovely, and our house have always welcomed it even after their shame, but my brother a brute who is so unwillingly in following my example have ran away to the templars, such a fool. It is midnight now, I should go to sleep if I don't want mother to think I am here with Phillipe. "Good morning darling!" Mother's voice was happy, to happiy, my eyes have opened slowly and I have seen her blone hair with red lipstik on her mouth, and of course her lovely blue dress with a golden necklace "My Dear you should wake up, it is 10 already!" I woke up out of bed, and then the maiden came into my room, an elven woman with red hair and brown skin including brown eyes, her name is Lithna never understood her, she never speak, her clothes are filthy, and her dress have 3 holes in a size of a candle. Well she desrave it, she is the stink of Orlais, a knife ear she need to be in jaul after what they did to Orlais! Alas, she is here, who else would clean the kitchen, the floor and every litle thing. "You should preapare daughter, a busy day is upon us all" my mother said "Isnt is always?" I said sarcastingly. After the servants have put my yellow spring dress I have left the room then I heared shouts coming out from my father's office "What do you mean by mercanaries?" "I mean they are here to take you, becouse how you treat your servants" "How dare they say it to ME" "Oh my lord dont worry about it I'll take care of it you rest, you have great fever" "Of course Markus, and be harry I have no time for FOOLS" I ran into my father's office with a little smile on my face hearing he have fever and hoping it is finaly last days. "Father are you allright?!" I have said so "worringly" Of course I wasent worry. "I am okay my litlle girl its just fever" "It is not!" I faked a cry. "It is, now go to your duties with your mother immideatliy!" I ran away from the room to my mother who was already ready to go out. We are the ruling family here after all. My mother and I walked into the market, my mother talked about a friend of hers, she said she is lovely, but she have such a weird name. we walked to the market seeing a shop keeper and his food, and the friend appeared she had red hair and her hair wasent so long, her accent is orliesan I said to her "Hello I am Lady Monic" "It is so lovely to finally meet you, such a fine day isnt it?" "Yes, is it true that your name is" "Nightingale?" to be continue

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                                                                               CHAPTER 2: THE BAR 

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"Hey you sodding son of a ****** wake up now!" I woke up but baerly after that sodding wound I am weak now, but hey, at least the beer is good. I went out of the bed heading into the bar, where already there were there tons of pepole, "Bernard there is an order of antivan beer and Orlisean cheese hmm intrensting I hear its taste of despair why would somone want that?" I laughed so hard I couldnt breath anymore "Bernard are you okay?" Maggie said quickly when she freaked out "I am fine" I said. After my work I went out, you know see the common world, there is somthing better than the commoner quarters in Orzammar? Especially with the dire news out of Kirkwall? When I was in the street, I have seen the great championship in the proving, a nice area really, I went there no went runned there! Before there wont be any sodding tickets! As I ran I finally head to the gates, seeing the two guards smiling and whispering between themselves "You know Linda is going to win the Provings" "Linda?! Gorim will do it! Ya know the king's champion" "All of this for the ancestors of course, I wonder how that Celene lady will cry and say oh my lipstick hahaha" I went inside, seeing all the pepole in fron of the proviong master, and waited in line, and finally I went there and asked the proving master for a ticked, he didint say anything probobly sick or somthing.. He coughed and gave me the ticket.   "Welcome to the Grand Provings, hold to the ancestors and a quest that have arrived into Orzammar Empress Celene!" I clapped slowly when she sat near him with her mask. "We all need to be united after the dire and unfourtunate situation in Kirkwall, that is why I visit you here, in speaking to your king, Human Dwarf or elf, that dosent matter know that the Empire of Orlais will stand with you on some matters" she said it with her fanciful speech bah I hate that woman wehether she want to help us or not. "First champion Endarlong the Quick Blood!" Endarlog came there with his shiny armor, I have thoght it as the new armour for the real champions. "And the second! Linda!" pepole clapped so hard the empresses whispers were not heared. to be continue

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                                                                                                     CHAPTER 3: THE PROVINGS 

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Everyone's claps got softened when Linda lost the cause, and whats his name that frigging lord's champion have won the Grand Provings it wasent as good as the provings 7 years ago, when the hero of fereldan fought it, bah. I will never understand this dwarven bullshit, yes, we are Dwarves but that dosent mean our ancestors live in the stone, or that we should honor tradition so much, that is why I will leave to the surface that is why I want to become an actual person and some beared stoney tradinon Dwarf, who dont give a **** about where he get he's food. that Lady Monic is better be worth paying good coin, bah sod it, I don't want to thin about what this orlesian will do already give me a cheese of despair? Who cares, as long as it gets me away from Orzammar then I'm happy. But I'll miss the stinky commons and the provings. And of course the roasted nugs. No one will ever get me a roasted nugs in the surface "Would you like a nug?" a dwarven nug seller for the provings have asked me, I have said "Yes of course give me this sodding nug" She gave me the nug, it tasted like a nug, nothing special of course, but still, it was a nug, I got up from the sodding stone that looks a little like a chair and left the provings, went out to the commons, got into my room, and fall asleep. When I woke up I have been happy, finaly the day to leave this hole, litrelly it is a hole in the ground, when I got out of Orzammar I saw the outer market filled with pepole, there was my journal master, an old dwarf reading a book with his one eyed glass on, "There you are Bernard!" "I have been waiting here all the morning what went wrong?" he said with his grumpy face and then I told him "Well, what? Whats the hour?" "WHATS THE HOUR?! IT IS 3 IN THE NOON ALREADY!" one thing was wrong, there was so much blue thing up, and you cant see the top of it what is it? "Before we argue any longer what is this sodding thing?" I asked worring I would fall into it, then he smiled and said with his teaching voice "This is sky, we dont really know whats after it but it is facinating, ah the memories of me being afraifd from it it is a remarkble thing to learn that is why I went to tevinter last summer, it was a wonderful trip!" I was more intrested in the black robed human with raid hair near one of the shops, went to her and asked here where she is from and she answered "Me? I am no stranger to Orzammar's warring politics I am from Orlais, though my mother was Fereldan" "Orlais? How is it like there?" "Oh Orlais is beutifull in this time of the year you should be there somtime" "Will you be able to help us? Help us get to Orlais?" "What will I get from it?" "I dont know? Maybe we are heading to the same direction?" "Hmmm maybe we are, do you go to Marjian?" "Yes this is actually where I need to go, along with that scholar over there" "Fine, I will accompany you there I need to be there too" "Thank you so much, but how may I call you?" "You may call me Nightingale" to be continue

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Chaoter 4: The Fifth Blight. It have been four days since I have been to Denerim, me, Phillipe Marsuar de Sarfuar, the dirt here is horrible the fereldan turnip is disgusting more than anything else I have eaten for my life. That is why Mare have sent me here, the Market district is horrible, and the pepole oh the pepole! The dog lords are so fools, they have zero amount of brain, the silks here are very expensive more than my Marie's necklace they will never understand me. The fereldan nobles that have greet me, bah I am late to my meeting with Arl Eamon, I hope this disturbing news of a blight in the siuthern part of this barbaric country is all lies or rumours, I went into Eamon's estate the manor is of fereldan architecture (Barabarism) and Eamon greet me with a fake smile in his face. "Phillipe! It is so wonderful to meet you here! I have waited for almost a month for your visit" Eamon's smile started to fade off when a black hooded courier came into the Sstate's courtyard, he deliverd a letter to Eamon this should be intrensting. They have whisperd some whispers, but the whispers became talk, I stepped in and my face was very angry! "Eamon I understand I am no important to you am I?" I said it almost shouting. Edit: The continue. Eamon looked nerveous, hmm maybe somthing of the rumours are true? I hope this so called blight will stay in Fereldan, and then the glory of Orlais will defeat the darkspawn and take return Ferelden to its rightful rulers, Eamon then sighed, his eybrows got much more angrier, and I have been Eamon looked with a face of not knowing what to talk to me. Eamon then said it he said what made me furious "I am so sorry Phillipe but I must go away to my lands, I will pay for your travel back to Orlais" Eamon looked very nervus that his skin started to become red. And when the courrier left the courtyard I left as well with my grampy face. When I got into Orlais I was so relifed that I left Fereldan, and I ran north into the town of Serult, where my scholarship is being funded by the Marquie of Serult. I have been studying Lyrium and ancient dwarven thaigs, and I found facisnating things, I, Phillipe, am the best scholar in the all of the Empire. to be coninue 

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Chapter 5: The Stars. "I have wondered southern Thedas, The southern mages are fools of the fools and those who are not fools end up DEAD we need to do somthing about it, stop the Templars and kill then all" Lord Maximillius was one of the most toughest mages I have ever met, he have the most skilled slaves I have EVER known, the most delicious meals I have EVER eaten. "So what? What you want ME to do? the Magestirum lack superiorty such as myself" Maximillius looked serious. And now with rumors of a Blight in the south, he looked even more. "Me, Sisilius the fifth of house Sisiliuth, have been the first of my house to visit the south, not as a slaver of course but as a scholar, I am the head of my house and I will do whatever it takes to get my house closer to the Archos throne, and remember Maximillius if you will break our little alliance I will see your house at a much more weakend state than it already IS after the Lirunus incident, you are WEAK, and my house however is at much more powerful state than yours. And of course we know all about what you do in your celler at friday nights and who you sacrafice, do NOT play games with me!" "It is almost autmn time and the Tevinter forces will be sent to Seheron woll you send your forces this time at year? Becouse if not it is one more secret to add to the pile" My voice was angry but expirient and polite Maximillus looked at me with worried face abd then after a moment of silence he finally answered. "It is funny that you threaten ME, I know what you have done to your wife, in your early twennies I also know about a specific thing you have found in your journeys into Arlathan....humm what was the name... Solas Elvhen, am I correct old friend? An amulent you named The Pride Of Solas". I was worried, my secret was finally out, by HIM, I can't believe it, how did he know about it? From where?! And about my wife? How?! I answered with a worried voice "Whe-Where did you find it?" He looked at me "We all have our litle secrets don't we? A deal, you will not tell my secret and I will not tell yours" I didn't have any choice I had to agree and then I answerd "Very well I accept". I left his manor, with my two slaves carrying me into my carriage, my silk robe had three diamonds, but, last year one was lost mysteriously and the carriage started to finally ride, and I fell asleep. We have finally arrived to my manor, my master slave went to the gates with a sad and worried face. Before I could say anything a knife out of nowhere have flown into his back, his blood was spilled on me, my bodyguard have drawn his sword, and I have drown my staff, I have looked to the balcony and it was as I feared... To be continue.

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Chapter six: the hunt. We are aware of your inolvmemt in the blood of ordering your miners to dig in the Liranus mine, we are also aware that your miners have mistakenly freed darkspawn from the area, though we suspect it was not a mistake, that it was intentional we have sent 4 wardens to clear the darkspawn out of the mine, we have talked and informed the authorties of your intentions and they will do a further investagion in the matter. Warden Commander Of Fereldan Duncan, 9:27. It was a letter that made me laugh, Grey Wardens? Will tell ME what to do? I have studied things beyind their imagination, I have created things they couldn't even think of! NO ONE will tell me what to do. Alas it seems I need to yet find the Staff of Ksilirus, that have been created on pre blight time, hmm the Orb of Ksillirus failed to find it's location, according to what I have discovered the Orb is the key, the key to my research, to my life. With the help of clan Lirthus I will be able to find it, their keeper Revas have recently contacted me, in argue of blood sacrafices, I wonder what do the Dalish have against such magic? It is an art of perfection, an art that will get us through the fade with enough lyrium, and discover new spiecies of creatures. It will be amazing! Maybe we will even get coin in the process. But enough with follish imagination, there are letters on my desk and I need to read them the first one: To Liranthus, it is me Lieutant Clara, we have problem, my men will not follow a blood mage, they don't care you payed us. Well what a group of fools, not that I have payed them, I freed them out of prison... But no. I heared knocking on the door, the door have skowly opened and a templar with black hair looked at me. He drew his swird, and ran towards me, luckily I have learned shape shifting and I became a bird and flew away. I have flown into the Fort of Litanthiar and my friends have been there. Kilna: It is so good to sed you my lord, I have indeed wondered where you have been this week, did you find the orb? Kilna looked at me like all Qunari look at humans, especially Tevinter ones. Me: So yes I have found the orb. Kilna: give it to me quickly now! The Ben Hassrath demand it. Me: no. Kilna: Come brothers and sisters, let us kill this fool. Kilna took her sword quicky, I have fade stepped to the left, and fire blast her, she burned and screamed and slowly died, the others drew their dwords but they were to late, the Kurath have eaten them with its l teeth. The creature screamed with its pridefuk wings a roar for the blood, a sacrafice for the power. I will be the most powerful being in the world it self! I will be a god! But enough with this foolish thoughts, the ritual need to begin NOW. Knghit Commander Gregoir: Irving I have no time for this foolishness. Irving: What foolishness, that spiders have taken over the celler? I will not risk mages for this, why do we have templars? To protect us. Gregoir: Very well Irving I will see to it. Gregoir left the room and came to me, slowly with a grumpy face. Gergoir: Recruit, there is problem in the celler of the circle, spiders have taken over the area, I want you Lyn and Leonard to go into the celler. Really? He sends me to the celler for fighting against spiders? Gregoir: And...becareful there. There are a lot of old and powerful relics that must not be touched, I send you there becouse it is an important matter more than you can imagine. I have looked at Gregoir and said: Very well Knghit Commander! I will go to the celler immidieatly. I have taken Lyn and went into the celler. As we went down there have been no spiders in the area, so we kept looking till we found a room with ancient relics, perhaps the ones Gregoir mentioned. Lyn: Well there are no bloody spiders here. But ancient relics, look at this orb, wow... Lyn got closer to it but instead was more intrested in a strange statue. Lyn: Look what art have been in the ancient times. Strange statue: Welcome Templars I greet you. Lyn quickly ran behind me, I got closer and touched it. Strange Statue: A fate, a terrible fate waits you. Before I could say anything that strange started to glow in a strange purpule light, a staff near it glowed as well with the same light. We ran away into the commander's office. I looked at the commander and he looked at me, then he said: Well? Have you taken care of the problem? Then I said: No there were not spiders at all, but we must secure the are immidieatly! He looked at me and said: Why what have you done fools?! I said to him: An..Orb and a staff are glowing!!! Gregoir: Maker's breath you two fools, set the alarm!!! The alarm have been set , Templars have barricaded the celler door and and the mages ran into their quarters. We ran after the commander. Gregoir: Everyone to the celler! Preapare for demons, Irving have your mages activate the Sentinals! NOW! Irving: Why? What happened? Gregoir: The fools have activated the Orb of Durrana! Irving: Maker's breath! Templars stood in front of the door while others have protected the mages, we heared whispers. Whispering voice: Hahahaha! Finally I am free, Gregoir, your fool templars couldnt stop me, and I will retake the Circle to my own, prepare for you have stepped into your worst nightmare, ever. A bird have flown over my head and spawned into a woman. Strage birdy woman: So finally my master is free, (laughs) you are fools, and freed by templars? The irony. Oh Gregoir it is so good to see you again. And today I will succed killing you. Gregoir looked at her like he was going to explode from anger. Gregoir: Marina you will die, Templars! Kill her!!! The templars rushed to her, I stood and ate a sandwich... The fight was long till she killed 7 templars with blood magic. And she fade stepped to the tower's entrance there the REAL explosions began screams from this area, oh the screams! I was so afaird but I kept eating my sandwich what can I say it was tasty. Gregoir drew his sword and stabbed this ****** in the heart, she died and blood have been spliied. The celler door broke, and the staff and orb have floated through the window and flown away. Gregoir:I want the celler secured, I want a raiding templar team to search for that orb and staff no matter the cost, I want the apprentices to be transformed to the mage quarters and I want it guarded, no one leavs this tower without MY premission, no one enters the apprentice quarters without MY premission, Irving I want you mages cast barriers on the mage quarter doors NOW! Gregoir:,I will not allow this circle to fall. All have happened as he commanded, he looked at me and at Lyn and said: And you two, what will I do with you, you were told this relics are dangerous yet you touched them, you will be in the apprentice quarters fixing what you did! Wynne: What is it apprentice? Is everything allright? Are you okay? I suppouse you are scared it have been a terrible fight down there. To be continue

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Chapter Seven: The Pure Mind Of A Thought: Lyranthis Lilanus: So Irving, I have studied this orb of yours, the orb is from elven origin and it is, quite remarkable pure magic makes this process avalible this is the perfect solution, may I have your word that I will go alone to the Free Marches I have met there a clan of Dalish elves. Its name is Clan Lavellan, their keeper is friendly and I have wanted to study their magic, and she will be able to translate this writings. Irving: So you wish to get into the Free Marches, to a clan of Dalish Elves, to translate this writings to continue your search. First tell me what you have learned. Me: Ar lasa mala revas. Irving: What? Me: I have told you the word I need to translate. Irving looked at me and nodded and left. I went to Gwaren, where the Harbour is there. Harbour Master: Hello how can I help you? Me: I need a ticket to the Free Marches. HM: Very well here you go. Me: So thank you... I went to a ship that looked new and shiny. After 2 weeks we got into the harbour of the city state of Kirkwall, from there I took a caravan and went to the city of Wycome, and there I hired a room in an inn named The Rabit Dog there I stayed for three days. I went to my room in the very cheap inn, the room looked..well enough, but it dosent look as good as the circle rooms. I woke up in the middle of the night, a knock on the door starteld me. I heared a strange voice...Strange Voice: She....Will......Come..... I quickly got out of the bed, went to the door, and opened it, nothing was behind the door, so I went back to sleep. ME: Can you please tell me what is the hour my good lady? Marlinda: Oh, pardon my poor manners, but my daughter is doing troubles in the kitchen. Marlinda have always been kind to me, she had her daughter that I think is in her teens, her daughter would always complain how her dresses made her look like a commoner, this inn is special, there is Marlinda and there is somthing... Good about this place. A storm is rising, lightings and tons of rain, suddenly the inn's door have opened, and with it all of the candels have turned off, a hooded man looked at us, he had 2 daggers, he drew them immideiatly and I was frightened, becouse he have thrown his dagger and it hit Marlinda's daughter's chest Marlinda then screamed with tears on her face, when she looked at me, 2 guards came there, and grabbed him, I was frozen. I stood there doing nothing at all, breathing heavily, one of the guards came to me, and walked to the corpse of the young woman, but he stopped near me, and whispered into my ear, "She will come" I looked at him, and he looked at the corpse, and I looked at Marlinda, and then looked at the corpse again, and  only the corpse have been there. Who was he? I heared a scream from outside, in the Market district of Wycome, and went there, a woman stood there and screamed "You will all burn under the wraith of her! Listen to me! You all need to protect your selves, the Maker have abondouded us we need to fight, we must survive to live a good and quiet life, you will all--" Before she finished her grambling, a huge explosion occured in Wycome's high town, fire and screams have been in there. We all heared whispers... "She...Will....Come..." Guards ran to the burning Hightown, I looked at it with an open mouth, pepole screamed children cried, a worried commoner woman came near me crying and saying- Commoner Woman: "Have you seen my daughter--she is here somwhere, please p-please tell me you have seen her, small, age 6 brown hair, (cries) please sir please tell me!" ME: "Where was she during this explosion?" Commoner Woman: "She- she was in... Hightown (cries) No! She can't die, please Maker tell me she lives!" Me: "I will look for your daughter" CW: "Really? Please hurry!" I ran to the road that leads to Hightown but it was blocked, 2 guards looked at me, and said- Guard: "Citizen you may not enter this area, it is to dangerous for civillians to enter here now" Me: "Please I must enter there I must.. I must help this woman, she have a child in there and-" Guard: "Then leave it to the guards, get away from here now!"  I walked away from them slowly, and walked like nothing have happened, went out of the main gates, many screams and cries, got on my horse, and started to ride, but I stopped, looked at the city like it was a huge rage demon, and suddenly, another explosion have occured, a huge one, in the palace ditsrict, I turned my back and rallied my horse.