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#51
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posted the rest of chapter 1, likely filled with spelling errors & typos, and it seems I'm blind to them at the moment. but, enjoy.

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was I trying to be too slick with the opening paragraph? it doesn't feel right changing it, even if it's unfair to the reader, but I'd like to hear your opinion.

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Will soon (next week) post my one short story/translated by yours truly!!

 

 

Keep the thread alive!! :)



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Would any of you read a story about Dayved chasing a two-year old Morrigan back to Flemeth's hut about 16 or 17 years before the fifth blight? I want to put Dayved as one of the smart ones that heeded Flemeth's advice. 



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Would any of you read a story about Dayved chasing a two-year old Morrigan back to Flemeth's hut about 16 or 17 years before the fifth blight? I want to put Dayved as one of the smart ones that heeded Flemeth's advice.


That's entirely up to you. It's how a story is told that draws attention, and keeps readers interested.

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Would any of you read a story about Dayved chasing a two-year old Morrigan back to Flemeth's hut about 16 or 17 years before the fifth blight? I want to put Dayved as one of the smart ones that heeded Flemeth's advice. 

If it is the story you want to tell, please tell it. :)  I've been hungry for story to fill my mind with while actually getting to the meat of DAI again.  It takes so long to pick up on storytelling. 



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Okay I will start it today

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She walks down the street, directed towards a small group of individuals, and we suddenly hear a roar of terror from around her.  People are obviously upset.  This woman is screaming and blood is pouring from the sides of people's heads.  She obviously has an unique power and you're glad that you're out of earshot for once.



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...as she slinks backwards to the wall, she steadies herself for another attack behind the soldier for greater effect...



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...she pounces and....well we need a better backstory.  Shena Herstory, or Heshe History as Booooware is calling our transgendered hero/heroin for DA:4



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Another company turns it's ugly head away from it's base....and we get where we are.  Another tragic disconnect from it's consumers....oh well.  That should be a warning sign towards any company.  Why do they do it?  Maybe they falsely believe in the product's so-called merit's? 



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I'm NOT really "writing" here...but should I?  I can.  I will doodle here....my words/thoughts are free....



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Our antagonist is looking at all of these events, as he/she is meeting up with the witch that screamed.   She seems to be out of breath for a moment and she likes your manner....maybe you've meet before?



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Finally put my Samsung SyncMaster CRT out to pasture.

 

The replacement is a 27" 2K PLS monitor 5ms, with HDMI, DVI plus DisplayPort.  My setup  right now is DP=PC, HDMI=TV box (on hold at the moment) . Basically I am going for a 3xmonitor setup just to play Elite Dangerous and Star Citizen (coming end of 2015).

 

Thanks to LunaFancy for pointing out some ED noob starter videos. Setup is working great for me. The combat training tutorials reminds me of Wing Commander!... my very first Space combat shooter.

 

My spanking new HOTAS controller is the Thrustmaster T-Flight X, which works flawlessly with Microsoft's FSX and with ED.

 

DA2 also works well with my Radeon HD 7770 card. I can play it at 1920x1080 and at 2560x1440 with everything set on max.

 

 

 

 

 

 



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Finally put my Samsung SyncMaster CRT out to pasture.

 

The replacement is a 27" 2K PLS monitor 5ms, with HDMI, DVI plus DisplayPort.  My setup  right now is DP=PC, HDMI=TV box (on hold at the moment) . Basically I am going for a 3xmonitor setup just to play Elite Dangerous and Star Citizen (coming end of 2015).

 

Thanks to LunaFancy for pointing out some ED noob starter videos. Setup is working great for me. The combat training tutorials reminds me of Wing Commander!... my very first Space combat shooter.

 

My spanking new HOTAS controller is the Thrustmaster T-Flight X, which works flawlessly with Microsoft's FSX and with ED.

 

DA2 also works well with my Radeon HD 7770 card. I can play it at 1920x1080 and at 2560x1440 with everything set on max.

Nice!  I used to have a Samsung SyncMaster 20' . That was a lovely display.   You still planning on replacing video card? 



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@Bethegal

 

I guess you must have read David Drake's Belisarius book series.. an alternate history tale.

 

OR

Christopher Nuttall alternate war novels.

 

OR

Flint's Ring-of-Fire series ie: 1632

 

I just love this stuff.



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Nice!  I used to have a Samsung SyncMaster 20' . That was a lovely display.   You still planning on replacing video card? 

Yes, but not until  AMD comes out with new hardware... One thing about this card and my setup.

 

When I plugged both the DP and HDMI from the card to the monitor, Windows decided that I had two monitors. Now, from my monitor setup, I had DP as my input source. So, what happend was that on starting VLC to play my Elite training videos, the player started but did not show up.... Very puzzling, until I figured out it was being sent to my second non-existing monitor via the HDMI output port. So, if I wanted to see both primary and secondory monitors I had to manually  switch my input source from the monitor setup panel.

 

Keeping my DP port also created an issue in that the monitor defaulted to HDMI and the subsequesnt "no displayport signal".

 

Solution for now is to use my HDMI port from the graphics card.  When I have time I will look to see if I can change the DEFAULT input source to DP.



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Yes, but not until  AMD comes out with new hardware... One thing about this card and my setup.

 

When I plugged both the DP and HDMI from the card to the monitor, Windows decided that I had two monitors. Now, from my monitor setup, I had DP as my input source. So, what happend was that on starting VLC to play my Elite training videos, the player started but did not show up.... Very puzzling, until I figured out it was being sent to my second non-existing monitor via the HDMI output port. So, if I wanted to see both primary and secondory monitors I had to manually  switch my input source from the monitor setup panel.

 

Keeping my DP port also created an issue in that the monitor defaulted to HDMI and the subsequesnt "no displayport signal".

 

Solution for now is to use my HDMI port from the graphics card.  When I have time I will look to see if I can change the DEFAULT input source to DP.

strange issue indeed.   You waiting on these? 

 


 http://wccftech.com/.../#ixzz3R1Aapzuo



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I've been thinking about posting the 4 pages I've done for ch2, though I'm not sure I'm happy with it, as I think something is missing. my memory is a bit flaky, or more so as of late.



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I've posted the 5 pages of chapter 2 I finished, I haven't really checked it for errors cause I can't seem to see them. so, I guess proofreading will wait till my mom reads it.

btw, the working title for this series was "Blade on Blade", however, about 4 or so chapters in, I realized there wasn't nearly enough swordplay to continue under that title, so we now have "a tale of twisted cities".

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I've posted the 5 pages of chapter 2 I finished, I haven't really checked it for errors cause I can't seem to see them. so, I guess proofreading will wait till my mom reads it.

btw, the working title for this series was "Blade on Blade", however, about 4 or so chapters in, I realized there wasn't nearly enough swordplay to continue under that title, so we now have "a tale of twisted cities".

Hey, can you repost it with spoiler tag ?  Chapter 1 and 2 together?   :)  I'll read it once I finish tinkering  with the desktop I built.  



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"a Tale of Twisted Cities" all in a single, nice and neat spoiler tag... as requested. i'll add more to chapter 2 at some point, I've just been lazy the last few days.

(why does it always mess with the spacing, every time I post or edit this? it's hard work re-spacing 29 pages of text *sigh*)

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"a Tale of Twisted Cities" all in a single, nice and neat spoiler tag... as requested. i'll add more to chapter 2 at some point, I've just been lazy the last few days.

(why does it always mess with the spacing, every time I post or edit this? it's hard work re-spacing 29 pages of text *sigh*)

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just save the whole thing on google docs.  cut and paste.  :) 



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I keep getting a dns error from google docs, from the main page... is the site down or something?

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I keep getting a dns error from google docs, from the main page... is the site down or something?

 

You can't use it offline?  odd.   It's working. I just checked. 



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I guess the universe is actually out to get me, at least today.