*coughs*
teaser snippet

Aw to be home and in my chair for the next 48 hours. Bliss.
Aww.. you're not a loser. Emotions are good.. means you're alive!!
It's fucked, innit?
LOL quick edit.
I HATE EMOTIONS! Seriously.
smut? SMUT!!!! geez a link
I don't know if what Donk writes is considered smut...
Sigh my poor Inquisitor is going to be famous for featuring in a Donk short story at this rate, bahaha
*points to self* At least it was just one of your Inquisitors and not you. And yeah, famous.
Ugh, I'm still OOL. This forum's a ******. I spent all my likes here, so many posts. Means, I need more likes. As a member of the Master Thread I deserve more likes!
Ahem... besides, I'm a little panicking. I never played JoH, I completely missed out on The Descent and now THE special someone suggests, that I have a lot of questions. I need them answered immediately. Well... after I robbed all my stuff back from him and smacked his head with the beautiful staff he stole from me.
But to fulfil my plan, I need to play the DLCs. Whole gaming experience and ****.
"I suspect you have questions."
Inquisitor runs over and takes his staff
"No. I just wanted this back, you dolt!"
Inquisitor then proceeds to whack Solas over the head with the staff and walks off into the sunset.
Ugh, Rivaini! Don't make me go into another Hell spiral like I did last weekend....
Really wish i could write tbh, no idea if it a lack of vocabulary or what, but yeah im god awful
I'm a terrible writer.
That's just it. I've had tonnes of sci-fi ideas.. but there are things you have to know, it seems. Things I can't even try to explain lol. Wormholes, ship engines, etc.
Fantasy is the much easier genre to go with, and judging by the local bookstore here it's more popular.
Either way its good philosphical sci fi is still kinda my schtick and I know a lot of people, enough people, who would buy it if I could write it successfully where I could be fat and happy. But reaching the most people and stuff.
I'm a terrible writer.
I know a little lynroy written fic concerning cheese and Alistair that proves this statement wrong.
cheese and Alistair in the same line??

You are also a brilliant writer
well done.. that was really good.
You may have a few grammar errors.. just with how you structure paragraphs. But *shrugs* no biggy, doesn't mean squat. ![]()
I don't know if what Donk writes is considered smut...
My latest work is. ![]()
I also am beginning to wonder if I can't write strong male protagonists.
My female protags in RPGs I just end up liking a lot more and think they are much stronger, wholesome, characters with great back stories.
You are also a brilliant writer
well done.. that was really good.
You may have a few grammar errors.. just with how you structure paragraphs. But *shrugs* no biggy, doesn't mean squat.
Pfft, i am not good. I just ramble. My sentence/paragraph structure leaves a lot to be desired and I know it. I almost failed English classes in highschool.
I also am beginning to wonder if I can't write strong male protagonists.
My female protags in RPGs I just end up liking a lot more and think they are much stronger, wholesome, characters with great back stories.
I find it's the appeal of showing that you can kick some major arse, even as a woman.
I know a little lynroy written fic concerning cheese and Alistair that proves this statement wrong.
Barely passable. Fluke.
cheese and Alistair in the same line?? ohhh my
Mmmmm cheese and Alistair. A favorite combo of mine.
Pfft, i am not good. I just ramble. My sentence/paragraph structure leaves a lot to be desired and I know it. I almost failed English classes in highschool.
Well **** school. It doesn't mean squat. Hell.. I'm good at English, and I just about failed. Cause I was a shithead.. and they kept teaching us boring crap like Romeo and Juliet, but that's another story ![]()
I can see some talent there.. and I'm being dead serious. Don't let wanker teachers from the past tell you otherwise.
Well that depends.. how do you feel about Kyrrah (the exquisite lass in Ashaantha's avatar) and Sera, girl on girl?
Y'know, if Sera wasn't already taken, I'd totally be game to see that.
Mmmmm cheese and Alistair. A favorite combo of mine.
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god am hungry lol
Y'know, if Sera wasn't already taken, I'd totally be game to see that.

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Y'know, if Sera wasn't already taken, I'd totally be game to see that.
It appears she has many girlfriends.
My work can be viewed in the writer's pit of our group, if you're curious.
*sigh* shameless advertising.
Can I get a cheese sculpture of Alistair?
So I just realised I have a pic of Kyrrah kissing 3 different LI's now. *snorts* I created a bit of a player here...
I find it's the appeal of showing that you can kick some major arse, even as a woman.
Cute. It was always a bit...uh...of a sore spot with me that my Dad and Uncle and everyone else used to tease me and think it odd that I would play female game characters.
So I just realised I have a pic of Kyrrah kissing 3 different LI's now. *snorts* I created a bit of a player here...
I did that with Abigail in ME 2 I would run through all of her flirt lines with the companions and then re load the game. Headcanoned her as bieng quite a player as a result. But not really romantically involved with anyone.
Cute. It was always a bit...uh...of a sore spot with me that my Dad and Uncle and everyone else used to tease me and think it odd that I would play female game characters.
Ah don't listen to anyone else. Most gaming guys I personally know often play female characters in any game that lets you create the character, or choose gender.
What was the phrase.. "it's better to watch a gal's butt for hours on end then a guy's"
ooh, i know what happened to my paragraphs in that snippet. I use a different program to write in and copy+pasted to post it. should have scattered it out a little more for the forum's size.
Ah don't listen to anyone else. Most gaming guys I personally know often play female characters in any game that lets you create the character, or choose gender.
What was the phrase.. "it's better to watch a gal's butt for hours on end then a guy's"
Especially the way they go 'swish swish swish...all the way home'
You kno that reminds me I was playing the Witcher earlier and...well Ciri has a very similar walk to Hawk/ the Femquisitor. So Geralt is watching her through the past and he goes 'that's Ciri! I know it!' and Yen goes 'How can you tell?' 'She moves like a Witcher' Geralt says.
ANd I was thinking "SO YOU TAUGHT HER TO WALK LIKE THAT."
Yup. *drink*
Ah don't listen to anyone else. Most gaming guys I personally know often play female characters in any game that lets you create the character, or choose gender.
What was the phrase.. "it's better to watch a gal's butt for hours on end then a guy's"
I remember that!
"If I'm gonna stare at an ass for 90 plus hours.. lesbians all the way." ![]()
ooh, i know what happened to my paragraphs in that snippet. I use a different program to write in and copy+pasted to post it. should have scattered it out a little more for the forum's size.
I had this problem when I posted the final chapter of Roy's friendfic. It was actually painful copying yours.. I did it one paragraph at a time. ![]()