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[correctamundo]

More of a dungeon I think.  Chamber sounds too... cute.  Dungeons are where they keep the things which are dangerous or unpleasant.  

 

Yes, dungeon is good.

 

 

What, this part?

"Kara went to Cullen's chambers, stripped off her clothing, spread her legs to him and said,"Take me big boy. Do me in the arse, Cully-wully."

 

[Al Foley]

Another hard part of writing sometimes is trying to make sure you are talking about period specific language.  Talking about electric currents now.  

[Al Foley]

There.  

 

Spoiler

Several hours later found her body pressed in the folds of Cullen’s strong arms. Face leaning around to nuzzle into his left breast. Her eyes closed as she let the contentment she felt wash over her. Safe and secure, for the moment, in his grip. Away fom the cares of the world.
But, the thought brought a renewed sense of unease. For she would have to get back to the world at some point.
“You’re tense. You are wound up like a drumhead.” Cullen breathed in her ear.
Her body shivered from the breath, and she rolled over to face him, his eyes far close then she would have thought.
“I’m sorry.” She murmured, her head drooping ever so slightly. “Its just, this whole mess. We defeat Corypheus, only to be pecked to death…by hens?”
“But we did defeat Corypheus. And despite the situation, how bad it is, no enemy has marched forth to confront us. Maybe they don’t have the resources, or maybe this is all just a bunch of unconnected evil all in an attempt to hurt us, but no mass conspiracy involved?”
“Maybe,” Kara frowned, “but I feel like…something is coming. And its not going to be pleasant when it finally gets here.”
It was Cullen’s turn to shiver at her words. She felt his arms rub her back reflexively, in protection, and trying to work the stress out. Once more her eyes closed, luxuriating in the sensations running down her back like an electric current. Even through the thin fabric of her navy blue casual wear.
She brought up a smirk, and nuzzled his cheek with her nose. “Come on, just because something is coming doesen’t mean it will get here right now. I’ve missed you.”
Taking the hint his hands instantly became inflamed. As e started to rub and kneed her, his hand went to her shoulder, and slowly started pulling on the fabric.
Hers went to her chest as she worked on the buttons. As they slowly worked her out of the cumbersome casual wear…

 

Al Foley...such a bastard. 

[Donk]

"As Cullen ploughed Kara's rectal chamber deeper and deeper, she felt ecstatic electric currents travel through her spine and through her body. As he reached places deeper and unknown, she felt herself orgasm. He pulled out, and the sight before her reminded of a chocolate coated ice cream. He had not come yet, so she decided to finish him off, working him just like those ice cream cones she loved years ago."

[Al Foley]

...I prefer my romance  to be subtle and I doubt Thedas has been introduced to the ice cream cone. 

[Rel Fexive]

Oh good grief.

[Lynroy: Final Edition]

Why do I even--

[Al Foley]

Oh good grief.

 

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*grouses* How does he have 127 revies and I have....nine?!

[MzChaos]

[correctamundo]

There.  

 

Spoiler

Several hours later found her body pressed in the folds of Cullen’s strong arms. Face leaning around to nuzzle into his left breast. Her eyes closed as she let the contentment she felt wash over her. Safe and secure, for the moment, in his grip. Away fom the cares of the world.
But, the thought brought a renewed sense of unease. For she would have to get back to the world at some point.
“You’re tense. You are wound up like a drumhead.” Cullen breathed in her ear.
Her body shivered from the breath, and she rolled over to face him, his eyes far close then she would have thought.
“I’m sorry.” She murmured, her head drooping ever so slightly. “Its just, this whole mess. We defeat Corypheus, only to be pecked to death…by hens?”
“But we did defeat Corypheus. And despite the situation, how bad it is, no enemy has marched forth to confront us. Maybe they don’t have the resources, or maybe this is all just a bunch of unconnected evil all in an attempt to hurt us, but no mass conspiracy involved?”
“Maybe,” Kara frowned, “but I feel like…something is coming. And its not going to be pleasant when it finally gets here.”
It was Cullen’s turn to shiver at her words. She felt his arms rub her back reflexively, in protection, and trying to work the stress out. Once more her eyes closed, luxuriating in the sensations running down her back like an electric current. Even through the thin fabric of her navy blue casual wear.
She brought up a smirk, and nuzzled his cheek with her nose. “Come on, just because something is coming doesen’t mean it will get here right now. I’ve missed you.”
Taking the hint his hands instantly became inflamed. As e started to rub and kneed her, his hand went to her shoulder, and slowly started pulling on the fabric.
Hers went to her chest as she worked on the buttons. As they slowly worked her out of the cumbersome casual wear…

 

Al Foley...such a bastard. 

 

Hey! Where the heck did the casual wear come from! They were clearly nekkid up until that point!

[Al Foley]

Hey! Where the heck did the casual wear come from! They were clearly nekkid up until that point!

They were not.  *ahem* I hope.  Clearly it needs editing.  *scratches face* 

[Ashaantha]

[Donk]

It feel poor written

[Al Foley]

Well Donk has her vote down. *starts to feel moody* 

[Rel Fexive]

I guess that's what happens when someone makes a joke out of something you worked hard on.

[Tragedienne of Heavens]

When you expose something to other people, specially on the internet, it will be inevitably judged, often negatively. If you're not ready for that, don't do it.

[Al Foley]

Oh wasn't that hard.  not yet anyways.  Page is not that hard to write really. 

[Al Foley]

When you expose something to other people, specially on the internet, it will be inevitably judged, often negatively. If you're not ready for that, don't do it.

Oh I'm ready.  Just because I have an initial negative reaction to something doesn't mean I can't take constructive crticism. 

[Lynroy: Final Edition]

Wait for me! I have drinks!

[Ashaantha]

Wait for me! I have drinks!

 

*carefully re-opens door, grabs lynroy by the collar and drags her out too*

[Addictress]

Is this truly an anarchy thread?

For some reason my sleeping schedule is all jacked up. I go to bed at 4am, get up between 10a-12p :0

I can't sleep. Halp

[Lynroy: Final Edition]

*carefully re-opens door, grabs lynroy by the collar and drags her out too*

[yerch] Watch the plaideweave!

[MzChaos]

Is this truly an anarchy thread?

For some reason my sleeping schedule is all jacked up. I go to bed at 4am, get up between 10a-12p :0

I can't sleep. Halp

Here ya go...

 

[Rel Fexive]

Is this truly an anarchy thread?

For some reason my sleeping schedule is all jacked up. I go to bed at 4am, get up between 10a-12p :0

I can't sleep. Halp

 

Plenty of time to catch up, then.  Start at page one and read until-

 

No, no, kidding.

 

Unless you're serious.

 

Are you cereal?

[Donk]

Well Donk has her vote down. *starts to feel moody*

It was a joke. A parody of a thread that a certain eff head made here. It was a popular topic for quite a while so I thought it would be pretty obvious.

I didn't even read it. It was tl;dr.