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[veramis]

In the distance, deepstalker sounds loom,

like a stolen kiss in my mind.

And DLC promised, but not delivered in kind,

like a flower that refuses to bloom.

 

In their words, there is no meaning,

wherein dreams are shattered outright.

And people look, but towards a dying light,

where new life is just beginning.

 

In the damp chateau, few still are grinding,

yet Bioware tells us to just sit tight.

And we've no choice, but will we be able to find,

yet any left when the flower finally blooms?

 

Poetry reading

[Hex of Hell]

Lovely, veramis. 

[BadgerladDK]

Hmmm, I'm sort of torn between being impressed and going full on grammar cop, but the cop is winning. I'd let it slide in a regular forum post, but in poetry... DLC's? Pluralization is not done through the random insertion of unwanted apostrophes, even less so for a word like "content" which can be used as a countable and uncountable noun in the first place. "DLC" would have sufficed.

 

Right, now that's out of the way: Nice work, if a bit on the gloomy side :-)

[Beerfish]

Roses are red

Violets are blue

Disconnected again

BioWare, F... You

[veramis]

Thanks, Larg. I fixed it.

[Robbiesan]

Nicely done Veramis.

 

got one:

 

Dreams of DAI DLCs in my mind revolve

Until such time I'll play some Evolve

[JAMiAM]

A black screen again.

Why is loading difficult?

Forever, I wait.

[JRandall0308]

Drums. Drums in the deep.

[veramis]

While making some videos for valentines yesterday I decided to also do two tries at reading out this I </3 bioware poem. I mixed it with some nice divinity song and uploaded both of them. Which is better for putting in the original post? right now I am leaning towards the first even though its kinda mechanical   . If neither are good I'll do a few more tries when I return home tomorrow.