Well page 12! Time to eat people who caught my attention alive, let's see who made me swallow my words completely or just partly.
First:
Ok you left natural color of eyelashes which is good still I would prefer if people didn't used always same shape of eyelashes but ignoring that little thing,makeup is done well and they don't look like most generic Inquisitor like in here these characters actually look unique and different. Ok you survive the test 
Next:
Makeup is good and she looks real and not generic or alien. And you survived without mods ;)This one is amazing! So yours has more then passed the test.
Next:
Ha you post for reals finally xD So let's start, love that she doesn't look like supermodel but hate her makeup...with that color of eyes you should use darker shade of eyeshadow it is way too off having this red one with intense black eyeliner at least, so don't be afraid of using a darker ones because dark eyeshadow is what will pop the eyes of this Inquisitor even more. Still nice one so far.
Next poor soul:
Ok just to say first one is what made me lose my breath away in here! Because wow! If I didn't read it was an elf I would have mistaken her for dwarf. You first elf is just so unique and is character of her own. Love her
Other characters of your are amazing as well, you used just right amount of makeup on them,you made their eyes normal and they don't look generic. All are good but your first elf is best in here.
Next:
Hahaha best part about her is that she looks exactly like girl I used to go back in school with xD Well except hairstyle and pointy ears part. Still this one made me laugh hard because of this fact so great job xD
Let me collect myself from laughing and next xD:
Qunari is one that caught my eyes. She looks interesting, she doesn't look generic at all. I like the way she looks.
Next:
Qunari is what has caught my eyes again, she looks great. Female human won't lie it is way too much generic looking. But Qunari no complaints and is amazing 
Round 3 done(NOTE: I have not commented characters from page 12 yet, page 12 will be completely commented once there are 16 pages). Once again only females, no any face mods because we are playing fair in here( NOTE: some of modded characters I like how they are done but I won't mention any modded character no matter how much I like it because once again this is "No-mod Challenge"). See you at round 4. Try not to set BNS aflame while I'm away.