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[N7 Shadow 90]

Hi, all! I have put together a trailer for DAI, and would like to share it with you all.

 

I have probably put more time into making this trailer than I should have, so it would be wonderful to get some feedback if any of you feel so inclined!

 

 

Enjoy!

[Heidirs]

It's clear you worked hard on this. And you said you wanted feedback, so I'll get nitpicky for you.

 

I like your music choices. They felt very appropriate to the scenes you choose.

 

I'm not sure about the Sera clip at :09. That, for me, is one of the prettier scenes. And it doesn't quite fit with the darker images of Leliana before it and Dorian after.

 

I'm wondering maybe show Corypheus somewhere in :22? Not sure. We hear the threat but we don't see, and I'd kind of like to see him. It also ties in with the next few images where Casandra is talking and mentions you being "the creature's" rival. 

 

1.25, it's really hard to see what is happening there. Maybe we don't need to see it. But I'd kind of like to have something that was more clear.

 

Is that Cullen at 1:29? Does he wear a helmet in that scene or is that mod?... It'd be nice to see his face if possible. It lets the viewer connect more.

 

 

 

That's all I have. Anyway, I really like it, and I think you did a great job! Really nice pacing and  clip choices to along with the music and voice overs.

[N7 Shadow 90]

Thank you so much for the feedback! Great to know that you enjoyed it. It's invaluable information, so thank you again.

 

And yes, that is indeed Cullen, as he appeared in some of the official trailers. If I recall correctly, he doesn't actually wear the helmet in-game.