No, you actually haven't, and you're still not giving reasons.
"Why does she look manly?"
"She just does" is not a reason.
One also cannot "look" transgender. You may as well be saying that someone "looks" like a Republican, or that someone "looks" like they're gay.
Before I begin, I just want to say there is nothing wrong with being transgender, but when a man puts on make up and takes hormones, he, I mean she, must still deal with the bone issue. Of course with plastic surgery, this can be remedied. By bone issue I mean transgender still has male bones under the facial skin that are visible.
Cassandra looks transgender in the way where she ALMOST looks female, she just needs minor work. That is what my adjusted picture does, it gives her a complete set of female facial proportions.
I took the data from multiple artists and normalized the information, compared it to Cass's face and made subtle changes.
The only thing I need to do is make her look older. I can do that by taking her face into Zbrush, sub dividing then adding wrinkles and a slight droop near the jawline, aka the upside triangle. I'd have to merge the normal maps I think which is kind of dirty. Anyways.
Now, REGARDING TWISTER SISTER
That first attempt at making Cass blonde was okay, but you guys were right, looked like twisted sister. I made a mistake. Unlike Bioware, I can admit that I made a mistake lol.