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This is an idea for a new character in ME Universe.

 

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"You don't know me, I don't even know myself, Literally."

 

Illa also known as "The Black Rose of Omega" is an unknown female race for most people. She masters the art of Stealth and Assassination. She also joins a few mercenary groups in Omega such as Eclipse and Blue Suns. The mercenary group she joins to see her as a great asset in the team, with her talent and skills she can complete missions alone, not needing of anyone's help.

 

Name: Illa

Job: Assassin

Race: n/a

Gender: Female

Voice Actor: Jennifer Hale (yes!)

 

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(Saw this picture over the internet, normal looking asari but whitish.

Seeing her without helmet on is rare, people cannot even see her skin with full armor on.)

 

1st Act Summary:

Illa hides herself in a suit of black armor specializes in stealth missions. She makes sure no one knows she's an Asari and is rarely let people know she is unless you are very close to her. Everyone knows Biotics is natural to the Asari race. Illa on the other hand have an unknown Asari disease, she is the only one and the first Asari that is not capable of using any Biotics, and is probably the reason why she has bluish-white skin. Although she cannot use Biotics to attack people and defend herself. Living and surviving alone in the dark depths of Omega is enough training for her to do so, and she’s been doing this for decades. May it be killing heartless mercenaries for food or just simply killing people that threaten her, she became an emotionless insensitive individual over the course of years. She then joins a couple of mercenary groups such as Eclipse and Blue Suns. After some time of tagging along with the group she realizes she's not much of a team player and eventually leaves them and work as a lone wolf mercenary, but she refuse to burn bridges with them as she may be needing them in the future. In 2186 CE, Aria acknowledges her efforts of helping to reclaim Omega back from Oleg Petrovsky and Cerberus. This allows her to be close with Aria, who is personally choose her to kill off her enemies and people who oppose her.

 

Illa doesn’t have memory of the past even before her crash landing into Omega docks. She wants to learn what happen to her as she has no known past, even her family, and her last name is unknown. As someone who doesn’t have any capability to use Biotics, she relies solely on information, articles and documents. Being a master of stealth, joining in a mercenary group and having Aria on her side is a great advantage on gathering intelligence.

 

Decades of searching for herself and the help of her contacts, leads her to one Asari Doctor in Nos Astra that holds all the answer to her past. She later learned that her mother is Tela Vasir and she originally is an Ardat-Yakshi. Tela ever wanted is to have her daughter free, as Illa did not deserve to be in prison for the crimes she didn't commit.

 

The Doctor told Illa that Tela Vasir has been hunting Shadow Broker in years. Tela as a Spectre never give up and found out where the Shadow Broker Lair is and she is ready to infiltrate and arrest whoever he or she is. But the Shadow Broker has one more move to play; he offers information about the cure for Ardat-Yakshi as he has known that her daughter is suffering one. Tela Vasir loves her daughter so much so she decided leave the Shadow Broker alone and took her chances with the cure. She then accepted the offer and learned that there are Salarian Scientists that found a way to cure the disease somewhere in Horsehead Nebula in the Pax system. Yes, they found a way, and that is to give up harnessing dark energy, Biotics. She knows that if ever the Council finds out about the deal she made from the Shadow Broker, it will cause it her Spectre position and she will be mark as traitor in the galaxy instead of a hero. At the same time Illa will be in grave danger, she will be hunt and killed by the Asari Justicars if they have known that there is one Ardat-Yakshi that leaves the monastery or worst not yet in the monastery, they live by their code and they wouldn't stop unless they finish what they started.

 

The treatment is a success, Illa loses all her Biotics capability and she is now free from Ardat-Yakshi but to the expense of losing all her past memories even her mother's. Tela Vasir never knew it would cause her everything, she was devastated. The Salarian Scientists thinks it’s a complete failure and drops the project of curing Ardat-Yakshi immediately.

 

Tela Vasir tried to explain to Illa what happened, but she wouldn't listen. Illa run off to the laboratory going to the docks but before she can go even further, Tela stop her by using Lift. She wants to cripple her so she could not run, but the moment she saw tears in her daughter’s eye, she put her down slowly and let her go, because that’s what she ever wanted for her daughter, To be free. Even though she will never know she has a mother. Tela Vasir continued to be a Spectre and watched over her until the day she was not able to anymore.

 

Hope you guys like it..  :)

 

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UPDATE 1: 03/03/15

Project: Illa, 1st Act

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UPDATE 2: ??


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if some of you guys are interested.. i posted her story here.. http://forum.bioware...5-project-illa/



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Ooohh. Gotta see this.



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While you did a great job creating this, I just dont think so...

ME4 will not be set during the Shepard's story or with any of the characters.


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Same here. Take out the conection to Shepard trilogy though and you have a great MENext character.



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While you did a great job creating this, I just dont think so...

ME4 will not be set during the Shepard's story or with any of the characters.

Thank you sir.. :)

 

I read somewhere, that the story will be on the same timeline in Mass Effect Trilogy and there's a chance that you will get to see past companions, although it will be set in another galaxy. i just don't know probably a rumor.. But if it's really in another galaxy, It's easy to change the location, I can change the timeline and remove Liara in the story easily and put a different character if ever there's really no connection in the trilogy.. Honestly, am not sure about those things since BioWare hasn't officially tell us where will the NME will take place and the timeline.. :<

 

Same here. Take out the conection to Shepard trilogy though and you have a great MENext character.

Once BioWare give us information about the timeline and place or at least a sypnosis of NME.. I will do that in a heartbeat, It'll be easy to change the timeline, location and removing Liara.. BTW thanks for reading.. :)

 

 

 

UPDATE: This is actually just a mere information about Illa, there's more to her story than this..



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Once BioWare give us information about the timeline and place or at least a sypnosis of NME.. I will do that in a heartbeat, It'll be easy to change the timeline, location and removing Liara.. BTW thanks for reading.. :)

 

 

 

UPDATE: This is actually just a mere information about Illa, there's more to her story than this..

Completely understandable. ;) As before it was a great read, especialy the full version.  :D


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Completely understandable. ;) As before it was a great read, especialy the full version.  :D

wow thank you so much.. glad you like it..

i will continue to write even if i only have one or two readers.. hehehe!  :D



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Its just from all the talk that they have been posting about how they want to make it a separate game, about finishing the Shepard's story, their insistance on calling it Mass Effect Next rather than 4, I took a logic leap and assumed that they would not have any returning characters, or at least it will be set at least a 100-200 years into the future so that most of the characters would be dead...

but still great work. I wish we could have her as a companion.


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Interesting



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Its just from all the talk that they have been posting about how they want to make it a separate game, about finishing the Shepard's story, their insistance on calling it Mass Effect Next rather than 4, I took a logic leap and assumed that they would not have any returning characters, or at least it will be set at least a 100-200 years into the future so that most of the characters would be dead...

but still great work. I wish we could have her as a companion.

if it's gonna be a 100-200 years, some asari's and krogan's that we knew, will most probably be alive.. hopefully..

also.. thank you so much for the kind words.. i agree, we need a new assassin in the team, some sexy badass asari who once again have health issues with a twist. LOL! :D

 

Interesting

glad you do find it interesting..  :)


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Yes - it is interesting - I'd like to see where you plan on taking this character and having her grow.  It should be a great story.



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Yes - it is interesting - I'd like to see where you plan on taking this character and having her grow.  It should be a great story.

already have a bunch of ideas for her, you will definitely see her grow.

I'm even excited to continue her story.. <3

 

 

i'm just glad some people especially my fellow gamers and mass effect fan read it and appreciates it, that enough will make me keep writing..  ;)


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Good!

 

  Now get to it!  

 

(lol)



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Um I dont like the idea of a cure for ardat yakshi being created by non asari. They're the ones most invested in finding one after all.

Let's say the asari managed one and it had the same effects as what you described. I'd imagine most would view it as a preferable alternative to a life spent on the run or in confinement. Make a video beforehand detailing certain things like family, friends, etc and it's not really a big deal.

I like that you gave background and motivation to Tela Vasir and her dealings with the Shadow Broker. Don't like the protective mother angle though. Just a personal bias of mine. Makes having kids seem like such a hassle lol. I'd rather she crossed paths with his agents a few times and at some point received an offer that she saw as mutually beneficial and went for it.

One more thing. The salarians are pretty dirty in my eyes and loss of biotic power and memory would still be seen as a success and a possible weapon to be used clandestinely against asari and other biotic foes should the need ever arise.

Aside from all that though it was a good read and I look forward to your future works.
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Good!

 

  Now get to it!  

 

(lol)

yessir..  :D

 

Um I dont like the idea of a cure for ardat yakshi being created by non asari. They're the ones most invested in finding one after all.

Let's say the asari managed one and it had the same effects as what you described. I'd imagine most would view it as a preferable alternative to a life spent on the run or in confinement. Make a video beforehand detailing certain things like family, friends, etc and it's not really a big deal.

I like that you gave background and motivation to Tela Vasir and her dealings with the Shadow Broker. Don't like the protective mother angle though. Just a personal bias of mine. Makes having kids seem like such a hassle lol. I'd rather she crossed paths with his agents a few times and at some point received an offer that she saw as mutually beneficial and went for it.

One more thing. The salarians are pretty dirty in my eyes and loss of biotic power and memory would still be seen as a success and a possible weapon to be used clandestinely against asari and other biotic foes should the need ever arise.

Aside from all that though it was a good read and I look forward to your future works.

i'm sure you have read the full story here.. the story does not revolve around Tela Vasir's adventures, it's about Illa.. I'm sure we can all agree that Vasir's might have encountered few SB agent's to know where SB is hiding.. and I believe not all Salarians is like Mordin who's willing to risk their lives in the name of science.. 

 

 

thank you for the feedback and thanks for reading as well, it is very much appreciated.. and yes, i will continue to write her story, to bring light to some questions..  ;)



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@JSlither- A cure for a disease, espeacialy a genetic one, would very profitable to anyone who made it. Also as technologicaly advanced as Salarians are it's not a stretch that they'd attempt to produce a cure, since the payoff for succedeing would be huge. 



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@JSlither- A cure for a disease, espeacialy a genetic one, would very profitable to anyone who made it. Also as technologicaly advanced as Salarians are it's not a stretch that they'd attempt to produce a cure, since the payoff for succedeing would be huge.


I agree. However asari have been dealing with this issue for probably the entirety of their existence and may have been looking for a cure for just as long. It makes no sense for salarians to be able to cook one up before them. None whatsoever. Salarian science is advanced but so is asari science. Mordin Solus is brilliant but imagine what he could accomplish if he lived for 1000 years like an asari instead of a mere 40. Asari are no slouches and for salarians to solve one of their oldest problems in what seems to be a blink of an eye is absolutely ridiculous.
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I was neither supporting or oposeing what you said, just saying that it was a proffitable cure which would give any scientist good incentive to make it. For all we know the Salarian made a flawed cure that the Asari had already discovered a long time before but kept secret because of it being considered a failure not woth the risk it posed.


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The Asari's is pretty sensitive with the Ardat-Yakshi topic. Also, it clearly shows that the Salarians have no knowledge about the side effect, and it may or may not cure the disease, for all we know what they did might even have a chance to create an even more powerful Ardat-Yakshi, happy it didn't but i secretly want that.. LOL! That would be a huge problem in the entire galaxy.. imagine the consequences they have to risk..

 

Edit: I'm having so much fun discussing these things, you guys are actually giving me ideas.. appreciate it a lot.. If this character will be a part of ME Universe (well, anyone can wish hahahaha lol). Remember, it's because you guys help me and inspire me to continue writing..  :)



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Edit: I'm having so much fun discussing these things, you guys are actually giving me ideas.. appreciate it a lot.. If this character will be a part of ME Universe (well, anyone can wish hahahaha lol). Remember, it's because you guys help me and inspire me to continue writing..  :)

No prob. ;)


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I was neither supporting or oposeing what you said, just saying that it was a proffitable cure which would give any scientist good incentive to make it. For all we know the Salarian made a flawed cure that the Asari had already discovered a long time before but kept secret because of it being considered a failure not woth the risk it posed.


What risk do you speak of? Do you mean the side effects? Certainly amnesia and lack of biotic power is preferable to spending centuries in prison right? I would imagine so seeing as how its entirely possible to build new memories and substitute biotic power with tech or combat power.

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What risk do you speak of? Do you mean the side effects? Certainly amnesia and lack of biotic power is preferable to spending centuries in prison right? I would imagine so seeing as how its entirely possible to build new memories and substitute biotic power with tech or combat power.

The risk of public backlash at useing a cure that causes amnesia, loss of biotic powers, and skin turning white. Society is wierd like that. "A cure for cancer great!" "It'll give the user amnesia, lynch the doc that made it!"



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I know a lil bit about photoshop..

So i did some tweaking to Shiala's model.. lol!  :D

 

"Embrace Eternity BITCHES!, just kidding, i can't"

loooooooool!  :lol:

 

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Alot more intimidating than greenie-sari Shiala. B)


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