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A Magister´s tale.


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I'm interested in seeing where this story goes. I have liked it very much especially the relationship between Caius and Nazlik.


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Thank you, there is more to come still. :)
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Step by step

 

disclaimer: Enchanter Nerva, the Imperator Severus and members of Ordo Silentia are being written by a forum member The Baconer

 

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I like this literary dialogue going on between writers.


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Ooooh, I'm in the middle of reading now, but this thing with Mettius reminds me of the on-off switch of consciousness, the claustrum. When I first read about it, I was like, "Wow, that's so cool!" and my friends immediately thought it would be used for evil. 


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"I have 30 apprentices, this house is full of vibrations from various spells or attempts at work all the time. I only accept the best ones. You should see what they can come up with", he gazed at Mettius for a moment.

 

Elowyn's going to have to work hard to stand out.  :(



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Well she does have a advantage. ;)

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Her cuteness?  ^_^



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That too, that too. No question about it. ;)
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Twelfth Chapter: Decision

 

 

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One thing leads to another.

 

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So good! Caius is a master of intrigue.


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Thirteenth chapter: Ambush and deception

 

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Somewhere there.

 

 

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I love reading about Caius in action. I feel like the war table in DAI could have been more about deploying units and armies rather than guessing which advisor was the best for a minor job. Wouldn't it be interesting to play a game set in Tevinter and feel like the survival of Minrathous actually depended on your choices?


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Exactly, there was a certain element lacking and it was just that. Kind of took the wind out of DAI. Hopefully we get that in DA4, and Tevinter.  :)


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Catastrophic failure should be an option. People might whine, though.


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Fourteenth chapter: happenings

 

 

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at this point the story will cross with Serelir´s  A Peculiar Institution: An Elf's Bondage in Minrathous starting from post #13, Elowyn becomes Caius apprentice.

 

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Looking foward to catching up on your fiction.  Do I need to read Serelir's for continuity with yours?


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Do I need to read Serelir's for continuity with yours?

No. The stories cross over, but each can be read separately.


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