Guest_Draken_*
This is just for fun - this is my personal hobby. I wrote a book. It's fantasy. It's free. It's not perfect. No book is perfect. This isn't for critiquing. (So back off! 
) This is something I do for entertainment. That's all.
So.... bored? Here you go:
https://www.smashwor...oks/view/528978
It's cool that you do this as a hobby and that your confident enough to share it!
I'll try to take a look at it later when I'm not stuck at work and have more time. 
Guest_Draken_*
Is it as good as Berserk?
Nothing is as good as Berserk!
Guest_Catch This Fade_*
This is just for fun - this is my personal hobby. I wrote a book. It's fantasy. It's free. It's not perfect. No book is perfect. This isn't for critiquing. (So back off!
So.... bored? Here you go:
I'm 'bout to critique the sh*t out of this though. Ready...
Too much words. 7.8/10
Book of the year.
Guest_Draken_*
I'm 'bout to critique the sh*t out of this though. Ready...
Too much words. 7.8/10
Book of the year.
"Words. Words. What is this crap?" -Beavis and Butthead
Guest_simfamUP_*
Nothing is as good as Berserk!
Come to the anime thread.
We'd get along.
Lovely.
I adore free things - especially books.
While I'm almost certain you haven't used enough semicolons 
, I may look at it at some time.
Sweetness. I'll have to check it out as well.
Guest_Draken_*
While I'm almost certain you haven't used enough semicolons
Ooh! I do love to throw in the occasional semicolon sentence; it's a great way to smoosh together two related thoughts!
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