This is my backstory for my Trevelyan, William. It's not done and I have a habit of never actually finishing stories, but I've decided to post some of it just to see what people think. Feel free to critique, just do it gently, my ego is fragile. It has some maturity to it, some sex scenes and some language but most of the sex scenes aren't very descriptive because I get kinda uncomfortable writing them. So here it is!
William was born into the family of the Trevelyans of the free marches. They were a royals in as the orlesians would say "A land full of savages". I admit it's not the best country in Thedas, but it's good enough for most people until Kirkwall. What happened in Kirkwall caused widespread carnage, reaching all the way to Ostwick, where William lived. The circle of Ostwick was in anarchy, along with the rest of the circles around Thedas. And the Trevelyans were caught in the middle. William's sister, Brinne was a mage in the circle, but for the past few months she had not been heard of and William and his family feared the worst.
Through those months William and his companion Shane had searched all through Ostwick, and the circling towns and cities. Today they had stopped in Hercinia to look for her. Hercinia is a harbor town on east coast of the Free Marches, filled with piraes and criminals. People only travelled here as a final resort, and this was William's final resort.
"Stay outside Shane, I'll talk to the innkeeper." William said, steeping into the inn, "The Battered Bull" the name was fitting, as the place and for blocks around it was battered and smelled of bull. But it was one of safer places to rest in Hercinia.
As William walked in, everyone stopped what they were doing. To see someone dressed in rags and dirt was not new. It was the bow slung over William's back that stopped them. Weapons weren't very rare either, considering the pirates in the town, it was the style of the bow. It wasn't a shortbow filled with cracks like every other's, it was a longbow with pristine carvings of dragons tangled in vines and leaves all along it, with fanged mouths at the end of the nock. William had made it a few years back, when he found the perfect branch in the forest by Ostwick. And William knew how to use it. People stared as he strode to the innkeeper, people fondled the bow as he passed, William knocking their hands away as he came to the innkeeper. "Do you have a room?" He asked,
"Maybe..." The innkeeper smiled, revealing his blackened teeth, "You've obviously got coin. The question is are you willing to spend it?" The keeper spat, aiming at a can, pinging off the edge and hitting William's tunic.
"Obviously I am, if I'm asking for a room." He smiled back, wiping the spit from him and tossing a small bag of coins to the small innkeeper.
"Right. Well we have one, if it's just you and your pretty bow. If you've got more coin we may have a few ladies willing to take it off your hands." The keeper chuckled pointing to the back room, which smelled of ****** and other fluids.
"I would love too, but I don't think my companion would appreciate it very much." He laughed. The innkeeper grunted and flipped a key onto the counter.
"First room upstairs."
"Thankyou sir." William smiled, picking up the key and striding back over to the entrance, "Shane." Shane looked up from the ground, frowning as William lifted the key.
"Damn." He groaned, " I was hoping we could find someplace with a little more class." He stepped into the inn and followed Will.
"Yes well..." Will trailed off, reaching their room and opening the door.
"What now?" Shane sighed,
"Looks like we're sharing a bed." William laughed, looking through the room.
"No. No. I'm sorry, but I know you.. You would try something. I'm sleping on the floor." Shane pushed past Will, dropping his rucksack on the dirty, stained floor.
"It was one time ok? I thought you were ok with it!" William smiled, closing the door and heading to the bed.
"I was asleep you bastard!"
"Well you were flirting in your sleep!"
"No I wasn't! I don't sleep talk!"
"I beg to differ slip-on." William threw a sheet at Shane,
"We're not getting into that!" Shane sneered, catching the sheet and laying it over the stains.
"It was you who started it-." William suddenly jumped up from the bed, "On second thought... I'll take the floor." He squeaked, pushing Shane off the sheet,
"What? What is it now?" Shane jeered, heading over to the bed, and peering under the blanket. “Seriously?” He laughed, grabbing a small spider by the legs and smushing it between his fingers, “It’s one tiny spider!”
“You know I don’t like anything with more than 4 legs.” William shuddered.
“Fine I’ll take the bed.” Shane smiled, covering himself in the blanket, “Although this blanket does kinda smell.”
“You get the bed!” William cut him off.
“Fine..”
“****! Where is she?!” Shane woke with a start. Will was rummaging through their clothes and bags.
“What? Who?” Shane Rubbed his eyes, and opening the blinds.
“Anna!” William screamed, tearing the room apart,
“Your… bow?”
“Yes my sodding bow!” Will slouched against the wall, “I’m gonna kill whoever took her!”
“Maybe you just misplaced it-“
“HER!” William snapped, “Just misplaced HER! And I didn’t, she was right here!” he spun around the room, flipping tables and chairs,
“Ok we’ll find i- her.” Shane said, “Maybe someone downstairs has it!” Will jerked up, pulling on a pair of cloth greaves and charging down the stairs,
“Where the **** is she?!” He screamed, grabbing the nearest person by the neck, Men around him stood up and drew swords and daggers,
“Calm down man!” Shane hopped down the stairs, fully clothed and dual daggers in hand, “I doubt he has anything to do with it. He wasn’t here last night.” Will let go of the man, who slumped onto a table, spilling mead over another man.
“Oi! **** you think yur doin mate?” The man snarled, putting a dagger to Will’s throat, “That mead was ‘alf my pay!”
“Then you should probably find a new job.” Will jeered, grabbing the man by the arm and flipping him over the table again, grabbing the man’s dagger. “Tell me where my bow is!” Will roared,
“What’s going on!? I told you bastards no more brawls in my inn!” The innkeeper shrieked, barging out of the door behind the counter, zipping up his trousers.
“Sorry sir. My friend is looking for his bow.” Shane nodding his head and sheathing his daggers. Will kept his dagger up, turning it towards the innkeeper,
“You were there last night!” Will yelled, grabbing the innkeeper by the collar, “Where is my sodding bow?”
“Oh you mean that shiny stick on your back last night?” the innkeeper jeered, “I’ll tell you if you let me down.” Will dropped the innkeeper, smashing him onto the floor.
“Talk.” Everyone else sat back down, returning to their own business.
“I saw ol’ McGinley run off with it late last night.” The innkeeper heaved, rubbing his neck. “Think he was heading to the docks.”
“Ol’ McGinley? How cliché.” Shane chuckled,
“Shouldn’t call a pirate cliché boy.” A large man stood up, swiping mead off of his long grey beard, “Might kill ya.” He laughed, a massive hammer was strapped to his back.
“And who are you?” Will sneered,
“I’m a pirate.” He smiled, “Guess what my name is?”
“Blackbeard!” Shane shouted,
“No.. in case you haven’t noticed my beard isn’t black. My name is longbeard. Get it right.” He stroked his beard.
“Great another cliché.” Will sighed.
“Careful Will. He might kill ya!” Shane mocked,
“Yeah… I might.” Longbeard laughed. “I like you dagger kid, your friend not so much. But I’ll take you to Ol’ McGinley. I’ve got some business with him myself.” Longbeard motioned for Will and Shane to follow him. They exited the inn, the sun beaming down on the **** filled streets, amplifying the smell.
“My name is Shane.” Shane smiled, “This is Will.”
“Hello Shane.” Longbeard smiled back.
“Will’s not normally like this.” Shane said, “That bow means a lot to him though. He needs it back.”
“I gotcha. I don’t know what I’d do without ol’ Braindead here.” Longbeard patted his warhammer.
“What’s with everyone naming their weapons?” Shane asked,
“I dunno, guess it’s just ta keep a bond between eachother. Ya know, we kill with em, why not connect with em?”
“I guess.” Shane looked down at his daggers, “Why’d you name your bow Will?”
“Because I love her.” Will muttered,
“You love yer bow?” Longbeard bellowed with laughter, “That’s goin a little far kid.”
“Nah, he’s talking about a girl he knew. She died in the mage rebellion.” Shane sighed,
“Damn mages, always fuckin thing’s up.” Longbeard growled, Will snapped his head up, staring at longbeard.
“She was a mage!” Will yelled,
“Yeah. She was killed by a templar.” Shane added.
“****.. Sorry mate.” Longbeard sighed, putting his arm around Will, he flipped the large arm off his shoulder,
“Don’t touch me.” Will sneered,
“Ok, ok. “ Longbeard held his hands up, “I didn’t mean what I said bout the mages, I just like to agree with people to get them ta like me. Guess it backfired a little eh?”
“Yeah. Just a bit.” Will said, a hint of a smile formed around the edge of his mouth.
“C’mon Will, he’s being nice.” Shane smiled, patting his friend on the back,
“Yeah, I know. I just don’t trust him quite yet.”
“I understand that man.” Longbeard said, “Just met me an stuff. If it helps, I trust you two.”
“Thanks.” Will smiled at the large man.
“Ah. Here we are,” Longbeard stopped, “Pirate’s rest. Only place safe for outlaws south a antiva!” They were on a massive dock with ships everywhere, from massive barges to small sailboats. Crates were stacked against the walls and people were bustling around everywhere. Elves milled around, mopping decks and stacking boxes, Qunari were there, selling goods from Par Vollen and other Qunari countries. There were dwarves as well, selling goods from the deep roads. And pirates. Lots and lots of pirates, hassling citizens and merchants.
“So where’s this McGinley guy?” Will asked, slipping his hand onto his coin purse.
“Right over here.” Longbeard walked over to a massive ship, big enough for an army. “This is the ‘Dragon’s Plunder’, McGinley’s ship.”
“This whole thing is his? Shane stared up at the boat in amazement, “Most people in Ostwick don’t have boats half the size of this. Even warships aren’t as big as this!”
“H’yup,” Longbeard chuckled, “McGinley’s big time all right. C’mon, he’ll be inside.”
“Are you sure we should be going into a pirate’s ship uninvited?” Shane said, backing away,
“I’d through the black city itself to get Anna back.” Will mumbled, striding towards the gangplank,
“Woah woah woah boy, slow down there.” Longbeard said, pulling William back, “We gotta hail them first, even tho they know I’m comin.”
“They know you’re coming?” Shane asked,
“Hell yeah. I told ya, I have dealings with McGinley.” Longbeard tapped on the side of the boat in a pattern, a small boy no older than 8 leapt up over the side and landed in front of the three men,
“Hey beardy!” The boy said, smiling and tugging on Longbeard’s finger,
“Hey Sammy, how ya doin?” Longbeard smiled, patting the kid’s head, “You been listenin to the scary captain?”
“Yes sir!” Sammy stood up straight, saluting the comically large man, “McGinny is ready to see you now.”
“Thankya son, can my friends come too?” Longbeard pointed back at Will and Shane, who smiled and waved,
“Course, ya just gotta gimme yur shiny gold first!” Sammy said, holding his hands towards Shane and Will,
“Nice try kid, they’re not that dumb.” Longbeard laughed,ruffling the kids hair,
“Daanngg beardy! Don’t tell em it’s not real.” Sammy slouched,
“Whatever, he can have a bit.” Will smiled, pressing a gold coin into the kid’s hand,
“YESS!!” Sammy screeched, jumping up and down and running back onto the boat.
“Haha, good kid that Sam.” Longbeard chuckled, “Shame he has to work for McGinley.”
“He’s a slave?” Will asked,
“Yup, that coin you gave him might’ve just saved his hide.” Longbeard said, patting William on the shoulder, “Anyways, let’s go in an talk to Micky.” Longbeard marched up the gangplank and in to the ship.
They stepped into a large room, about the size of an inn, over in the corner sat Sammy, and in the middle of the room stood a man with a long black beard, longer than Longbeard’s. The man had a pegleg and an eyepatch, and a long black cutlass hanging from his black belt, he smiled at the group as they entered, tapping his cane against the wooden floor.
“Samuel. Get these felllas so drink why don’tcha.” He said, Sammy ran off down a set of stairs. “Good ta see ya Longbeard.” He said,
“McGinley…” Longbeard had suddenly become very serious, and kept a hand on a dagger around his belt,
“Do you have it?” McGinley said, holding out his hand,
“Yeah.” Longbeard tossed a large coin purse into McGinley’s hand, “These boys are lookin for something you took from them.” He motioned towards Will and Shane,
“You’ll have to be more specific big guy.” McGinley laughed, “I’ve taken quite a few things in my time.”
“I want my bow back!” Will snapped at the pirate,
“No need to be so nippy young man. I have lots of bows, if you’ve got coin I’ll sell.”
“I don’t need coin for something that is rightfully mine.” Will stepped forward, hands clenched,
“Well I may have what you are looking for. Come with me.” McGinley hobbled through the ship, Will and the others following close behind. His cane tapped along the floorboards until he reached a door, painted black with a sign on it saying ‘shop’ they entered the store and a scent of leather and rotting wood engulfed them. Barrels sat in seemingly random positions across the room, filled to the brim with all sorts of weapons with unreasonably high prices. Walls were covered in armour and fancy clothes, some covered with blood unknown if from the user or someone else. In the corner of the room was a chubby man with an apron covering his stained tunic.
“So where’s my bow?” Will growled,
“Let’s ask Seb over here,” McGinley smiled, leading the group over to the chubby man, “Seb my friend, have we come across a bow in the past day or so?”
“A couple yes, want me to grab em?” Seb said, bowing to McGinley,
“Yes please friend.” He said
“Don’t trust McGinley, he’s a sneaky bastard.” Longbeard whispered to the boys,
“Wasn’t planning on trusting him.” Will whispered back.
“Here’s your drinkies guys!” Sammy smiled, handing everyone a glass of mead, Longbeard grabbed Sammy by the shoulder,
“Get off the boat Sammy. But don’t stray too far, I’ll find you after this is done.” Longbeard smiled at the little kid.
“Yes sirree bob!” Sammy saluted him and ran off. Shane gave Longbeard a questioning look, which he quickly dismissed just as Seb came out of the back room with a handful of bows.
“Ere go sir.” He said, dropping the bows unceremoniously on the table, “All the bows collected in the past 2 days.”
“Good. You may go now Seb.” McGinley smiled, patting Seb on the back and pushing him towards the door,
“Y-Yes sir.” Seb hesitated before making a dash out the door. Shane gave Longbeard another questioning look, which he returned with a worried look.
“Is this the bow you were looking for young man?” McGinley held out the bow,
“Yes!” Will smiled, grabbing the bow from the pirate, “Ah Anna! I missed you!” Will kissed the bow.
“Sorry for the misunderstanding.” McGinley smiled, “Usually my men KILL before they take!” and with that the pirate drew his cutlass and slashed at Will. Will jumped back and reached for an arrow, he nocked and arrow and fired it at the pirate, scathing his cheek.
Longbeard and Shane had also drawn their weapons as more pirates burst through the doors, surrounding the trio of warriors, Longbeard swung his hammer at the pirates, taking a few out with one hit, while Shane somehow managed to climb atop a large one and was repeatedly stabbing him in the throat, the big pirate fell, crushing a few others as Shane gracefully landed beside them.
“Kill them!!” McGinley shrieked, taking another swing at Will, who dodged it and fired another arrow, hitting his target in the shoulder, “Gargh!” McGinley screamed, breaking the shaft off, Will nocked another arrow, hitting the pirate in his other shoulder,
“Run!” Longbeard bellowed, charging through the horde of pirates towards the door,
“That bow is worth a lot of coin boys!” McGinley screeched, “Kill them!”
“You aren’t getting this bow again!” Will said, leaping over the dead bodies left in the wake of Longbeard, firing arrow after arrow at the pirates, hitting every shot. McGinley was nowhere to be seen though. Neither was Shane, he was moving so fast throughout the criminals, slitting throats and stabbing spines that he could only be seen when he stops to kill someone. Longbeard was clearing the way while Will was picking them off.
They emerged onto the ship’s deck, pirates swarming them. Onlookers watched from the shore, laughing and screaming. “Watch out beardy!” someone said, Longbeard looked up to see Sammy hanging from a rope, holding a flaming bottle. Longbeard shoved Shane and Will out of the way, diving away himself. The bottle dropped onto the horde of pirates, engulfing them in flames. They screamed and cursed as they were burnt to bone. But there was one shrieking that stood out. It was Sammy, the rope had caught fire and dropped the boy into the flames.
“Sammy!!” Longbeard shrieked, dicing into the flames after the boy,
“Longbeard! Stop!” Will yelled, to no avail.
Longbeard emerged from the flames, patting himself down. He opened his arms to reveal the boy, his clothes burnt away and half of his skin. Sammy smiled as his beard tickled him, but cried out in pain as well.
“****.. **** shit.” Longbeard sobbed, “C’mon kid. We need you!” Sammy was gone though. His lungs had given out, leaving him just a burnt shell. “Motherfucker!” Longbeard cried, slamming his fist on the burnt deck.
“Poor kid.” Shane sighed, tearing up.
“Who was he to you Longbeard?” Will said, knealing beside him and patting his back.
“He was my son.” Longbeard sniffed, “That coin was for his release.”
“Oh… damn.” Will sighed, pulling Longbeard up, “We’ll have a funeral for him when we get back to Ostwick.”
“Ostwick?” Longbeard asked,
“Y- yeah. I thought you were gonna come back with us.” Will said, “Sorry. I just assumed.”
“No.” Longbeard said, standing up, Sammy still in his arms. “Don’t be sorry. I’ll come.” He sighed and lifted the boy over his shoulder, “We can use my boat, It’ll be faster then horses.” He walked off ‘The Dragon’s plunder’ and walked to a small schooner. “This her. ‘The Golden Hammer’ My life’s savings.
“Right. She’s pretty.” Will smiled,
“She’s a piece a ****.” Longbeard laughed. “Let’s get going. You got everything?”
“Yeah. Let’s go.”
Hope you enjoyed the first bit of it. I may post more, I may not. We will see. Thanks for reading!





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