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So the question I present here is what kind of person was your Warden?  How did he/she interact with the world around them.  Who were they interested in or did they refuse to fraternize with any of their companions/subordinates/slaves?  What was their general outlook on life?  Were they happy even during the blight or did they allow the pressure of the world around them to cause them to go a little crazy?  What about their life before, does the disconnect from origin to warden cause them to miss their old life or are they glad to be rid of it?

 

I will explain two of my favorite characters because they are both very special to me.  First they are both males, a mage named Rolyn and a warrior archer named Raylok.

If you know anything about the mage origin which I won't spoil for those who don't know anything about it, the character background is a bit less guided in my opinion than others.  Your character could pretty much be anyone and have any past before coming to the circle.  So Rolyn was in the circle for most of his life, he can't remember a time before it.  Still he loved the place he lived in, he studied often and learned much about human and elven lore.  At the core of his studies lay a magical talent not seen before in ages, but his general humility and good will never lead him down the path of darkness (blood magic).  He and Jowan were best of friends and Jowan was even like an older more paranoid brother.  

 

After the events of his Origin, he was a bit sad of how things ended but that sadness was quickly overshadowed by the land that was Ferelden.  He had never been out of the Circle before, and so after crossing the lake everything from there was brand spanking new to him.  He was a bit dumbfounded and nervous, he actually wanted to return to the Circle though he never voiced this out loud to his mentor, Duncan.  Journeying to Ostagar just made him even more excited and he loved to meet the people.  This attitude pretty much carried over for Rolyn for the rest of my playthrough as him, he would go through tough times but was eager for new experiences.  And he eventually infatuated Morrigan who in turn gained his affections as well (maybe as a kindred mage, or a notion of what was forbidden for him being seductive?)  At any rate, his love for learning different things caused him to become an Arcane Warrior when he got the chance, but his innocence and curiosity never overshadowed his bravery and boldness.  He protected his friends fiercely, but when it came to hard choices he stuck by them without flinching in the same way he had learned to wield his magic.  All-in-all he was the stereo-typical hero character, always looking for a better alternative, using his power responsibly, and remaining of generally good morality.  

 

Raylok was a bit more complicated than Rolyn (The R name is just a trend with me so bare with me) Raylok is an illustrious Cousland, he loved being a nobleman, and all the training and privilege that came with it.  But he wasn't irresponsible he was just immensely arrogant.  Still he treated elves generally well as he saw them in the same light as his parents had, as servants but worthy of respect.  He became fascinated by Iona the Lady-in-Waiting of the noblewoman that his mother was hosting.  Typically Raylok wasn't much of a flirt, but he wasn't afraid to go after something or someone whom he was attracted to.  This meant that Iona's being an elf was only coincidence and not very important, he in fact would be willing to marry her had he the chance, she was far more interesting than any of the noble ladies whom he had shared company with.  This arrogance and hot-bloodedness did not cause him to have the same battle-lust of his brother Fergus, however.   He liked to spar and enjoyed the idea of battle, but never saw it as a way to prove one's manliness.  Though his arrogance and sense of honor meant that any who would dare insult him would like end up with the broad-side of a bow in their face or the welcoming knuckles of Raylok's left hand.

 

When his family was betrayed by Rendon, he was furious and wanted to seek revenge but knew that he and his mother would have no chance at it because of the circumstances.  His life would've been forfeit were it not for the agreement his father had made on his behalf in the larder with the Grey Warden, Duncan.  Forced to leave he had to hear the screams of his mother and father as they were tortured by Howe's men before being dragged off, while he and Duncan made their escape.  

 

At Ostagar the events of his Origin story lingered, his bitterness began to grow, and he even reflected this in his dialogue with other people, including the king.  After the defeat of the Grey Wardens at Ostagar Raylok went through a crisis of faith, yet again he had survived where others had fallen.  His mentor and the rest of the Grey Wardens save Alistair were all dead.  But luckily the words of Flemeth helped raise his spirits slightly, and it did help that her daughter Morrigan would be traveling with them.  Though they could not have been more different in background, in personality Morrigan and Raylok were very much the same, they were both practical and self-confident in their abilities.  The main difference was Raylok's sense of honor which often clashed with the Witch's sense of survival of the fittest attitude.  Alistair was often a person with whom Raylok allowed a softer more brotherly side to show, he listened to Alistair as the former-templar was more talkative than the former-lord ever was.  But his relationship with Zeveran suffered, and this would come to a head in Denerim much later on.  

 

Basically to sum up Raylok's personality is that he was arrogant but had a softer side he didn't show often, the events at Castle Cousland left him somewhat traumatized and made him more reclusive and soft-spoken, but it also gave him the drive to do whatever he could to protect people.  He harbored an anger and avenging lust for the crimes committed against his family and any who sided with Howe would pay the price in blood, their blood.  But with his own group and with innocents he was gentle, stern but kind and caring.  He no longer saw himself as the son of a Teryn but as a protector of Ferelden and Thedas.  Morrigan had actually helped him to come out of his emotional shell and his affections towards her actually transmitted to being more open about his feelings in general, and by the end of the Dragon Age: Origins story, Raylok was far more trusting of others and less arrogant.  His anger throughout the story made him brash, but his intelligence allowed him to turn this brashness to sarcasm which he displayed when he was not angrily shouting or simply pointing his bow with arrow drawn at somebody.  So all-in-all, Raylok was more of what I would describe as a hero by circumstance, a not-so-average person who's purpose was altered because of events outside of his control.  And though he became the Hero of the story, if things were slightly different in his story, he might have even been more of the antagonist or coward.  But who knows.

 

Kay so long post but, you get the point.  Write a short-story of your favorite character(s) and please limit the story to 4 characters at max.


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@jacksper, may I just say that you have told two absolutely marvelous stories here.  Your imagination and story-telling ability kept me riveted to my computer.  These are both delightful lines to follow, and now I am having to consider playing DAO all over again so that I can pay closer attention to my characters' and their entire outlook on life.  You have given me new meaning to playing this game.

 

I have played this game too many times to count.  I have played every possible combination of race and starting option.  And although I do start out with something in mind, I always tend to stick pretty much to playing a good character without too much more of an outline in mind.  Your stories have suddenly given me a whole new perspective. 

 

Thank you so very much!!


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@jacksper, may I just say that you have told two absolutely marvelous stories here.  Your imagination and story-telling ability kept me riveted to my computer.  These are both delightful lines to follow, and now I am having to consider playing DAO all over again so that I can pay closer attention to my characters' and their entire outlook on life.  You have given me new meaning to playing this game.

 

I have played this game too many times to count.  I have played every possible combination of race and starting option.  And although I do start out with something in mind, I always tend to stick pretty much to playing a good character without too much more of an outline in mind.  Your stories have suddenly given me a whole new perspective. 

 

Thank you so very much!!

This mostly for me as well.  I can't play unconscionable bastards so my wardens are usually goody-two-shoes, white hats.  That's about the extent of what I attributed to them as I had trouble connecting.  It wasn't till I wrote my fanfics that I attached any kind of personality to the warden at all.

I have to admire OP for his imaginative stories.



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Okay, just to warn you, I went full-out dramatic story-telling mode on this since my Origins play through really got to me and I got so attached to the first game, so here we go…

 

My first Warden was an Elven Warrior who lived in the oppressed world of the Denerim Alienage all her life, with her Father Cyrion Tabris, and her sibling-like cousins Shianni and Soris. She was a well-humored, moral person, with a certain air of strength despite her inner doubts, kind to her fellow elves who suffered the segregation along with her, giving what she could to those less fortunate and doing her best to take a stand against the human dictators that exploited her people. She strived to be the type of person the alienage needed.

 

Upon the day of her arranged marriage to an elf she had never met, Lord Vaughan, son to the Arl of Denerim, abducted the Warden along with her cousin and other female elves, and used his armed guards to take them back to his estate where they planned to rape and abuse them. The Warden fought her way out accompanied by Soris, saving Shianni from a fate worse than death at the expense of the Warden's fiancé.

 

When she arrived back to the alienage, she knew she could not stay long. Warden Commander Duncan, an old friend of Cyrion's, conscripted the young elf into the Grey Wardens, saving her life, but involving her in the battle against the Blight that forever changed it. The Warden had been hardened from these scarring events, and learnt that not everyone could always be saved - sacrifices were to be made.

 

Upon reaching Ostagar, the Warden met and immediately took a liking to fellow Warden Alistair, who was to help her through her Joining process and the difficult days ahead. Following the fall of Ostagar, she was glad to have the legendary Flemeth’s daughter Morrigan, the powerful, relentless and cold Witch of the Wilds, fighting at her side, who the Warden often looked up to for her great strength, and as their journey together progressed she eventually considered her a sister. However, her good-willed soul clashed with the Witch’s survivalist nature, often causing disagreements but nothing unsolvable, and the opposing personalities attracted to form a strong bond. Wynne was a definite motherly-figure for the Warden, especially since her true Elven mother had died many years back. The young elf admired her great but gentle wisdom and too often asked her advice on the trials they faced as a group, listening in awe.

 

The City Elf’s love for Alistair grew, and he felt the same way about her, despite her race and background. He was the one able to bring her through most of the torments she faced, and they were inseparable. Until, however, he chose revenge over the Warden at the Landsmeet and abandoned his group, his country, and his love out of spite for Loghain, leaving the heartbroken and regretful Warden behind to face the Archdemon without him. She would never be the same.

 

In general, the Warden felt as though she didn’t have a choice in a lot of things, when really she did but always felt obligated to do the right thing, which is why she respected Morrigan so much – someone who could turn off their emotions and make the most logical, selfish choice without regret. The Warden felt huge amounts of pressure placed on her by her party and those she helped to make all the important decisions on her own, when she was never really sure about what to do. Distraction was the only way to keep her from letting the horrors of the Blight get to her sanity, and her distraction was Alistair. She often entertained her party members with humorous philosophies and optimism to keep them as distracted as she was in love. The Warden never forgot about her old life, her family, and her people in the alienage, keeping them close all the way and missing them dearly, but never allowing the thought in that she would not encounter them again. 


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I play a lot of different Wardens. For some reason, I feel the most comfortable with the City Elf or Dwarf Commoner being my "survivors". They are the most stereotypical "Dark Wolf". They just seem crafty and down to earth enough, and without necessarily steeping into dark territory to do it (my CE, for example, finally decides to rescue Loghain and lets him redeem himself, after she gets tired of slaughtering nobles). She's very much like the City Elf story she tells to those little kids, about a woman who went hidden and spread treasure across the land. A living legend, without much baggage.

 

My Cousland is a bitter bastard, who falls for Morrigan. And a dark ritual survivor. He stops believing in pretty much everything, except the Warden motto and maybe her. I have male Dalish wardens who are good and another goes off the deep end. Male Dalish is another good pairing for Morrigan.

 

Female Dalish is pretty similar to the default Warden (except a Rogue)... a martyr type, who is haunted by killing those humans in her origin story, and then Tamlen getting tainted by the mirror. I like pairing her with Leliana and actually converting (or at least entertaining) Andrastianism. If "Xena the Warrior Princess" was an Elf, she'd probably be my Dalish. Except she looks like Evangelina Lilly in those Hobbit movies. She's looking to redeem herself.

 

Circle mage is a good guy elf and a direct counterpart to Jowan. That's all that really needs to be said. Oh, and like Jowan, he has a redhead Chantry priest girlfriend.  B)  :rolleyes:


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I've just recently got into Dragon Age universe (don't ask why it took so long :P) and despite my expectations I fell for it and really focused on creating my own Warden and his interactions with his companions. A shall describe my second Warden that I consider being my main canon for DA:O. Prepare for a wall of text... :)

 

Daylen Amell (I really suck at creating interesting names, so when creators give me something I can use, I usually use it :D) is Human Magi by his origin, once member of a noble family from Kirkwall. That however ended, when his aptitude for magical arts surfaced and he was brought to Circle in Ferelden. There he trained under watchful eyes of Chantry templars and senior magi. As his personality goes, he is mostly reserved and stoic, but also respectful of other people opinions and generally polite, when interacting with others. Because of some unpleasant events involving death of one of his close friends during her Harrowing, he learned, how to suppress his emotions, so he might act a little cold sometimes. When dealing with his tasks, he usually tries to get the best result for most affected people, even if it should mean to ignore his own opinion on the matter. When he cannot reach such a solution, he looks for some decent compromise. Despite this however, he can screw some things up, either because his inexperience or just simple curiosity. He likes to surround himself with people that have different opinions, even those, which goes against his own, so he can take different views on the matter.

 

He is practical in most situations and doesn't care much for religion or faith in general, but doesn't display this publicly so he don't insult anyone. Only thing he can't stand that much are complete fanatics, who force their views on other people. He also values life of others, especially his friends, and freedom of the mind. During his years in the tower, he always wanted to have a chance to explore the world, but he always managed to busy himself with studies and research so he wouldn't attempt to escape like some others. He is also moderately fascinated with powerful beings (like dragons) and artefacts and during the Fifth Blight he sometimes goes out of his ways to obtain those artefacts and see those creatures. Beside that he is curious about weapons, armour, physical arts in general and actually displays some interest in physical and martial training (which culminates in him becoming Arcane Warrior). His opinion on stuff like blood magic and other forbidden arts - he views it as a tool, perhaps more dangerous, but still a tool that can be used for either good or evil. In his opinion magic itself can't be good or evil, only people wielding it can.

 

Following events of his successful Harrowing, he helps Jowan believing if he really wants just to get out to live quiet life and have a family, why not give him the chance. He then feels betrayed by Jowan, when he kills those templars and hides from both Daylen and Lily the use of blood magic. When he gets the opportunity to join Grey Wardens and help Duncan he gladly accepts because of both his curiosity and the chance to put his magic in good use, but at the same time feels a bit bad letting Irving (Daylen has Irving in great respect) down by avoiding the consequences of his doing. Events in Ostagar then take another toll on him, when he basically loose a bunch of people, who showed him respect and acceptance (despite him being a mage). He then reluctantly takes on a role of a leader and although he hardly sees himself better at that role than Alistair, he will do his best...

 

I could probably explain, what he did during the game's events and his motives for it, but that would take too much text even for my liking. :) For those, who would want to know - I have a playthrough on Youtube (shameless self-promotion, I know :D ).


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So the question I present here is what kind of person was your Warden?  How did he/she interact with the world around them.  Who were they interested in or did they refuse to fraternize with any of their companions/subordinates/slaves?  What was their general outlook on life?  Were they happy even during the blight or did they allow the pressure of the world around them to cause them to go a little crazy?  What about their life before, does the disconnect from origin to warden cause them to miss their old life or are they glad to be rid of it?

 

My main Warden was a female City Elf named Shari Tabris.

 

I guess she's kind of based on Arya Stark. She's kind of the "black sheep" of her family since they all have red hair and blue/green/honey eyes, while she has dark brown hair and eyes, and she's the only one who knows how to fight. (Both of which she earned from her mother, the "black sheep" of the alienage.) She's an incorrigible tomboy who spent her childhood running wild through the alienage (with bare feet, dirty clothes and snarled hair), chasing stray cats and dogs and hanging out with horses in the lord's stables. (One could easily mistake her for a skinny little elven stable boy growing up.)

 

Her mother taught her how to fight in secret, and taught her how to use her small lithe frame to her advantage against big hulking warriors in armor. "Quiet as a shadow," "light as a feather," "quick as a snake," "calm as still water," "smooth as summer silk," "swift as a cat," and other mantras that her mother taught her to help her fight like any clever rogue. Some of her nicknames around the alienage were "Shari Underfoot" and "Shari Horsewhip" (partly because of her horse-like hair, partly because she saved an elven child from being whipped with a horsewhip when she was younger).

 

I think she's understandably pretty bitter and angry over how humans have treated her and her people all her life (especially after they killed her mother), but she tries not to let it get the best of her. She was understandably enraged by what Vaughan did and grieved over having to give up her whole life by having to leave her alienage, but I think she tried to see it as an opportunity to bring glory to her people.

 

After Ostagar fell though, she stopped thinking about glory and realized they needed to stop the Blight. She also went around helping people with their problems and choosing the "good" way to resolve most quests (like saved Redcliffe, saved the Circle, found a compromise between Dalish and Werewolves, crowned Bhelen to help the Casteless, destroyed the Anvil so it couldn't be abused, etc) because what's life for when everything that makes life worth living is dead and gone?

 

She also befriended every companion because they all turned out to be very likable once she got to know them, and there's no point in antagonizing people who're traveling with you and trying to help you stop the Blight. (Loghain, maybe you can learn something from this.)

 

I think she started off pretty rude and distrusting toward strangers (especially humans), but became much nicer, more trusting, and more friendly toward the end of the game. She even fell in love with Alistair, a human. (I wish Zevran didn't turn up so late in the game. I think she might have fallen for Zevran, but she was already smitten with Alistair by the time he showed up.) She didn't like having to walk and camp and sleep on the ground everywhere since she's a city elf (not fond of dirt or nature), but she adapted and got used to it. I think she felt immense pressure to stop the Blight, but learned to trust and rely on her companions, and felt a little more hopeful with them around. 

 

In the end, she did her duty to stop the Blight, then became Bann of the Denerim Alienage to make sure her people would be treated more fairly. While she still takes her commitments as a Grey Warden seriously, and will promptly deal with any darkspawn threat the moment it arises (it's why she traveled around stopping the Blight instead of stopping Howe's purge, and why she promptly left her post as Bann to deal with the intelligent darkspawn in Amaranthine), she'll still help her people when she has time and ability. Being a Grey Warden is important, but it's not 100% who she is. Her tainted heart still beats with elven blood.


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(Warning: Long post ahead!)

 

My canon Warden is Ridanu Surana, an elven mage.  His magic manifested when he was six and living in the Denerim Alienage, and shortly thereafter he arrived at the Circle, bedraggled and terrified.  However, with Irving's patient tutelage and the friendship of Jowan (and later, Anders) he settled in and began to learn about all the ways his magic could help people.  It was clear early on that his talents lay with the Creation school; he was fascinated by glyphs and had a knack for healing.  He spent much of his apprenticeship in either the infirmary or the laboratory, supplementing his magic with the study of herbalism.

 

After his Harrowing and the events that led to his becoming a Grey Warden, he struggled mightily (and still does, to some extent) with the twin betrayals.  He betrayed Irving's trust, and Jowan in turn betrayed him.  Then, of course, Ostagar happened, and Loghain's betrayal of Cailan added yet another level.  The only thing that kept him sane at that point was the realization that Alistair was feeling even worse and needed someone to look after him.  Morrigan might have learned a thing or two about healing from Flemeth, but Ridanu didn't exactly like her much, even then.

 

He did take Morrigan along, though it was more out of a sense of responsibility and the need to repay the debt he felt he owed Flemeth than because he felt he actually needed her skills.  He did grudgingly ask her to teach him shapeshifting, and eventually agreed to let her think of him as a friend - but only because he doesn't know if there's a term for someone you don't like but can't bring yourself to kick out of the party in country neither of you know particularly well.

 

Ridanu bonded with Alistair rather easily, between their shared experiences at Ostagar, their somewhat similar upbringings, and the fact that race doesn't seem to matter nearly as much when you're the only two Grey Wardens left in Ferelden.  Sharing a similar sense of humor also helped, as did their shared views on blood magic, demon summoning, and slavery.

 

At Lothering, he picked up Leliana and Sten.  At first, he wasn't sure how to feel about the Sten, but eventually he grew to respect the Qunari and to sympathize with the Sten's struggle to reclaim his honor.  Leliana he liked a great deal; he recognized something of a kindred spirit in her, someone else who didn't want to stand by and watch an unfair fight if she couldn't prevent it in the first place.  He wasn't sure whether to believe in her vision, but he does find her idea of the Maker easier to swallow than the one the Chantry preaches.  Ridanu could never understand how a god who cared enough to make this world could turn his back so completely on it, and if Leliana's vision of the Maker isn't true, he'd prefer to believe in his grandmother's Dalish pantheon.  At least the elvhen gods have the excuse that they were tricked into leaving this world.

 

The events of Broken Circle took the wound left by Jowan's betrayal and Ridanu's near conscription, ripped it wider and twisted a sword into it.  It may not be entirely Ridanu's fault, but he's been haunted ever since by the "what if?" of it all.  Wynne did her best to talk him out of it, since he took her along after that, but there will always be a part of him that regrets not having been at the Circle when Uldred tried to take it over.

 

It was immediately after that that the party encountered Zevran's trap.  Ridanu has never liked killing unless absolutely necessary, and killing a disarmed prisoner didn't sit well with him.  He didn't and doesn't exactly approve of Zev's assassin lifestyle, but he was wise enough to recognize someone else who might have a troubled conscience and need a listening ear.  By their second conversation, he was fighting the urge to wrap Zev up so tightly that no one could ever hurt him again, and in spite of his flirtations with Leliana, he found himself falling harder for Zevran - which made it easier to break things off with Leliana after her rather patronizing conversation about his background.  He and Leliana remain good friends, however.

 

Redcliffe brought more heartbreak, more regrets about his role in Jowan's escape, and a revelation about Alistair that came as much less of a surprise than it should have.  How to save Connor was a no-brainer, though maybe it shouldn't have been.  Ridanu hired a boat to get the party back to Kinloch Hold the shortest way possible; there was No Way he was going to let Jowan use blood magic.  For one thing, he believes there is never an excuse for blood magic, and for another, blood magic makes him sick to his stomach.

 

After Redcliffe, with Eamon still comatose, the only thing left was to continue the search for the Urn of Sacred Ashes.  He refused to defile the Urn (surprise!), believing that, even if it didn't actually contain Andraste's ashes, it was still disrespectful to defile whoever's ashes it did contain.  And he just plain didn't trust Father Kolgrim.

 

When Eamon was cured, it was off to the Brecilian Forest to meet with the Dalish.  Ridanu wasn't too surprised to find them so suspicious of outsiders, especially when he learned the nature and ultimate cause of their plight.  Once that came to light, it was a simple matter to decide who deserved the most punishment, and he finally convinced Zathrian to break the werewolf curse.

 

Orzammar was another matter entirely, and Ridanu ended up simply choosing the candidate who didn't ask him to lie or cheat... but he would still rather face an entire bevy of Archdemons, Tevinter magisters, and darkspawn combined than deal with the snake pit of dwarven politics again.

 

Then came the true test - Denerim and the Landsmeet.  Ridanu will always remember that time, for several reasons.  First, Zevran's final meeting with Taliesen.  Ridanu would have given almost anything either to not have Zevran be present during the fight or to have Taliesen go back to Antiva without Zevran and with an agreement not to pursue him further.

 

Second, for the goings-on in the Alienage.  Few things are much worse than finding  your childhood home has been invaded by slavers and your parents are either dead or taken away to Maker knows where... except maybe discovering some of your fellow elves are complicit in this betrayal.

 

Third, of course, is Fort Drakon.  The justifiable killing of a very nasty weasel in human form doesn't merit being dumped in the city's worst prison.

 

Fourth, the Landsmeet and its aftermath.  Ridanu went there with every intention of killing Loghain, but he very nearly didn't.  He saw, after their duel, glimpses of the man Loghain had once been, the honorable and valiant general, rather than the paranoid old man he had become.  However, Ridanu could not forgive the sight of Loghain's seal on the documents he'd found on Caladrius' body, and chose to execute him instead - a decision he still occasionally wishes he could have made differently.

 

When it came to the actual Battle for Denerim, he felt he had no choice but to talk Alistair into the Dark Ritual.  He regrets that, too, knowing how much Al and Morrigan disliked each other, but HE had no intention of dying, so the alternatives were asking Al to die for him (which basically counts as murder in his view) or cheating on Zev (...not going to happen.)  So it had to be Al.

 

Cookies to anyone who actually read that novella.  My canon Warden is a longstanding OC of mine who started off as a druid and healer in his original canon, and his quirks tend to come through whenever I write about him.