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Somasi darkon ungrateful prodigy pt 3

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Act 257: insignificant

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Act 258: beaucracy

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Act 259: council

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Hehe, Cassia does not hold power to overthrow Caius magic. She is not nearly as powerful mage as Caius is  :D. His power exceeds all of them combined together. Caius is the powerhouse who has been hoarding power all his life. None of the Caius daughters know the level of blood magic Caius has, not even close. He is a master of it. The blood magic spells Caius uses are old, from forgotten sources in the archives (and demons) which only few people know.

 

Besides, trying to revert the blood magic spell would result in self combusting, Hotus would simply burn into cinder. That is already a set lore.

 

And Jara would be dead in a very short time trying to budge Caius. If you think five top Magisters in Tevinter, Caius is one of them. He has the power, the wealth, the influence, and the spy network and soldiers to to destroy opposition. He is a like a king inside a kingdom. Caius needs to know everything what is happening in Tevinter and Minrathous, he would not be blind, nor would he let the acts of the mad woman Kina go unpunished. Caius has the muscle to kill her, and so do his servants. Caius employs only the best he can find or train. Caius would either send professional assassins working for him after them, be that poison, magic or blade. Or simply personally kill them, if that would be required.

 

Even if Jara would know Caius financial connections, which she doesn´t, and would try to financially break Caius he would know, and kill her. Caius spy network covers not just the rivaling houses but also the Imperial structures, offices, military, commerce, etc. The house Vaellanius has set its roots all across the Imperium, in itself the family works like a kingdom.

Besides that Caius rules a province of his own, so his income is secured even if the Imperium would fall. And the house Vaellanius is already rich as a king, wealth gathered over generations. Caius has wast fields of crops and mines in the province where thousands of slaves work.

 

I made Caius the way he is not because I wanted to make a extremely powerful and influential person, but someone who has seemingly everything, but is chained by his position. Despite all he has, Caius is a prison of his own life.

 

Just straightening the lore a bit.  :lol:



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Oh the hotus scene fully aware of that one but I found self combustion a bit nightmare starting(#2 fear) so I thought what if "cassia didn't know and thought to get her "friend back" but tried to do what caius did but ending up "fracturing " his mind between hotus and caitus (yes I know bad portematue ) felt more dramatic and i was going for a illusion of sirts similar to fera's stuff .

And totally get it now. Thanks :) sides the act is nearing the end so it will all be resolved in the next 2/3 chapters.

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Act 260: recourse by uccio

Here would be Caius response. :P

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Thank you monkey, for taking this into your story. However, it is not known if Kina is actually dead already, as Caius said her body would never be found, which does not tell if she is still out there. If you want you can keep her still running trying to avoid Caius. :)

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Its a damn good scene and it would have been sinful not to add it! :)

And I honestly lost kina I think I'm lost on what to do with her... I really need structure

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Act 261: stubborn

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Act 262: loose end

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Act 253: pitiable

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Act 254: reparation

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Act 255: addition

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Act 256: holiday

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Somasi darkon ungrateful prodigy pt4

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Somasi darkon ungrateful prodigy pt5

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Act 257: old

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Act 258: flame

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Act 259: problem child

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Act 260: salon

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Act 261: tempo

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Act 262: evidence

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Act 263: discord

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Act 264: dandy

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