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A Peculiar Institution: Elowyn's Story

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The beginning of Elowyn's story is in the Fan Fiction thread.

 

There are a few chapters in the Tevinter thread which I haven't yet added to the main story.

 

What follows are updates, works in progress. Feedback is appreciated, especially about the other characters - I'd like to know if the way I write your characters is accurate. I'm a new writer, so plot help is also appreciated.



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Uccio asked me to write about Elowyn training with Caius. Here's my attempt at describing a training session:

 

Vaellanius Manor, Minrathous

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Awesome as always :) . I think you have nailed what Caius is all about from the outsider experience. Caius is a hard nut to crack, but he does have a soft interior. Kind of.  ^_^

I did a response to this.



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What I noticed writing this is just how much the DAI magic system SUCKS! Because I had to go back and remind myself of all the spell trees we had in DAO and even in DA2. So Elowyn, having grown up mostly post-blight, got the DAI tree instruction and knows hardly anything at all. I knew they'd dumbed-down mages and felt like a lot was missing, but it had been a long time since I'd played DAO. It's just shocking.

 

Missing spell trees:

DA2-

Primal (ecxcept for chain lightning and maybe stone fist if you pick rift mage)

Spirit (except for Mind Blast and Barrier)

Arcane

Creation

Entropy

 

DAO- these are trees and each contains lots of spells!

Spirit -anti-Magic, Mana Alteration, Death, Telekinesis

Primal - Earth

Creation - Healing, Enhancements, Glyphs, Summoning

Entropy - Debilitation, Hexes, Sleep, Draining

Blood

Shapeshifter

Spirit Healer

Keeper

 

 

I wasn't sure if Caius would use entropy, but it seemed to fit.



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I only wrote a little bit while I was gone. This comes before Elowyn gets the lovely present from Caius:

 

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Here's a little chat between Elowyn and Zera after Elowyn visits Monkai:

 

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Hehe coldi is a mess

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I´ve usually used only the DAO and DA2 spell trees in my stories just because DAI has so restricted spells. Some are good but mostly end up inferior to previous options. And entropy is definitely in Caius corner, those have great combat applications. :)



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I used a mix of both eras but I borrow a lot from Anders spec

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Minrathous, the evening of Vel's mission

 

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Now I have to write one for Caius. That should be interesting!



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Very goose bumps are abound for me

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Awesome. And so Vel is saved, shes getting stronger. :)

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She is! But she still has to find Feynriel, and I have no idea where to look for him. Maybe he will find her one of these nights.



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Also, I put that blondi in just for you, kultaseni ;)



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Hmm 2 elven dreamers... this city is going to get crazy

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Interesting to see her reaction with Caius. ;)

Blondi! I thought it sounded familiar. :)
Jumalattareni. ;)

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Suudella minua , rakas mestari!

 

(I just love how it sounds!)

 

...ja minä annan sinullehämähäkki.



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*swoons*  :kissing:



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Somewhere in between the balls and the rescuing of errant boyfriends, Elowyn finds time to trespass once again in Caius' dreams:

 

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OOooh hot lol

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That is powerful. Caius surely felt that. 



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Aminia? E_E



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Aminia, yes. A Rivaini mage. She supposedly knows Red through the underground abolitionist movement. But she's got a thing for dwarves.



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Hm... so, she knows him in the underground only? good, good, as everyone e_e