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A Peculiar Institution: Elowyn's Story

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Vaellanius Manor

 

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A pity that Aeducan had disappeared, you need to find him



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War elephants? So shall it be. :)



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Elowyn's Study, Vaellanius Manor, Minrathous

 

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Tell me more about Aminia



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What do you want to know about her that you weren't able to get from my story?

 

  • Aminia
  • Born in Rivain to a merchant family
  • Apprenticed to House Varazes of Minrathous by contract for ten years
  • Has a secret arrangement with House Caracalla to provide intelligence on Varazes
  • Has friends at the Dwarven embassy, Bjarte and Heidrun, among others
  • Is dating a dwarven guy, probably Vartag, Caius' buddy
  • Studies and invents magical devices
  • Helps the abolitionists
  • Is friends with Galatea, a slave trader and secret abolitionist


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Can I use her?



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I love the lingering thoughts of the relationship between Caius and Elowyn. Something they can´t really put a finger on what it is, it keeps them on their toes wondering. So many levels on it.



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Ucci - I love it, too! So complicated, so much tension between them. There's something karmic about their relationship.

 

Red - as long as she is a powerful, competent mage in your story. Aminia is not a pushover.



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Finally managed to write this, even as demons threatened to crowd my thoughts:

 

A Shopping trip in Minrathous

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Ah, that tension.  That little sparkle in the air. 

Those boots are not made for walking it seems  ;). Elowyn will get a change to delve deeper into Caius mind soon, I need to do some scribbling.

I think Nazlik would let her in on the secret of the baby, she craves for a friend. And Elowyn could pic up that the boy is going to be a powerful dreamer, outclassing his father. The baby already spotted Elowyn in the dream. It seems that Guy is back too. :)



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Maybe... if he is working for the Divine, that could be trouble.



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I finally got this abolitionist bit written. I might have to fuss with it to work it around your stories.

 

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Awesome sauce I'll write something new to coincide with this

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New player? Doesn't matter, he'll be a dead one too once Caius finds him. That is, if he is allowed to do it. ;)

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I have a idea who it it's but writers block gots me

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I felt that Elowyn needed an adversary. This chapter would have to happen after the assassination attempt with Caius (I think - because that goes right after the party), and I need to check in with what's going on with Galatea and Monkai - so busy yesterday.

 

Caius has some clues to go on, if you want to write that part, Ucci, or I can write it (it'd be fun if you wrote it, of course). The proprietor can be questioned, the freed slaves if anyone can find them, and Elowyn's staff is somewhere, most likely a trophy item.

 

I'm not actually sure who the mage is yet, but it crossed my mind that it could be someone we've met. 



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Also, do you feel it was detailed enough? I felt like I kind of rushed through it.



#44
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It wasn't rushed but a bit short on the aftermath of the job

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It was good as always, no question about it. I would love to write Caius investigation part, it would be.. interesting :). Just let me know how far finding her Caius can go. I can leave it open for you to take it from there.

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Was the sex scene ok?



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Ohh yes... i enjoyed it

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Yay! I was worried it was too short. I figured there could be more scenes later on, since he has her trapped.



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Just don't make it too good lol I might procrastinate with the story haha

Jokes aside go for it let your imagination run it's time ely's adventures return and we be support *solidarity thumbs up*

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ok, see what you think of this:

 

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