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A Peculiar Institution: Elowyn's Story

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Just can't stay away can ya lol

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It's always fun writing about Monkai.

 

Not there yet though!

 

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Hot damn! Dark ely is in full form

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Auts! Caius is going to get it now! And it is fun ;)

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Should Ely make him get on his knees and beg? Should she walk on him in her spike-heeled shoes? Shall she make him lick the blood off her face?  :lol:

 

I think you're enjoying this too much.



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I am, it is way too fun to see Caius getting rolled. :D

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Haha

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Ok, see what you think of this. I hadn't actually intended Caius to react this way, but the writing took on a life of its own. If you think he'd behave differently, I can re-write it.

 

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bit rough but if ucci signs off im game. *says the guy who has little compunctions* but ely struck deep with his controlling nature everyone knows lol



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I'm kind of torn, because Caius has really good control over himself. At the same time, the setting argues that a Magister brought up in that society would be used to taking what he wanted - there's very little reason for him not to. Elowyn pretty much told him what he wanted to hear during their last meeting.

 

Ucci will have to weigh in on whether Caius would betray Nazlik or not - that's a tough call.



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same i wanna say caius would do it caius he's technically in wedlock but at the same time he loves her and their son... definlty a pickle



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It's funny, I didn't intend for any of this to happen when I started writing Elowyn's story!



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well thats what happens when your a adaptable writer and ride the waves. im too linear but you got all the potential lol



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pfft! Just make sure you invite me to your book signing.



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i will front row seats lol with a signed copy



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Ooh! Caius goes for it! When pressure piles up...

There are no objections from me for what happens. I will give you a free reign since this is way too tasty opportunity to pass ;). One request though, don´t make him force her, she has the final say if something happens. Caius feels too much for her to act like a Perfect Magister. But I´m exited to see what happens next...



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I can't decide! Last night I was thinking, no, Caius wouldn't do that. He's so happy with Nazlik and the baby. And where could it go with Elowyn anyway? He already has his family.

 

I think he was just playing with her - at least, I didn't intend for it to look like force. More that he knows she wants to but needs a little push. It's his power that attracts her, and he was showing off.  :D



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He does know what he wants, that is for sure. And he has a bit of flare in him for show off. :D

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There are a lot of people have doesn't mean they won't stray

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Oh, What an encounter... so much heat and passion they have... Caius is now firmly in her hand.

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What to do with all that power though? Perhaps he can fulfill her dreams of commanding an army of the Undead  :lol:



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What ever she wants, sky is the limit now. ;)

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Whoever thought a little Orlesian mage would achieve such heights?

 

It reminded me of something I'd read, and indeed, there is a precedent.