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#276
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I was also thinking that if Tiberius would have stepped over the line Zera could have simply told Caius for the sake of getting him killed, so she would get rid of him. Because it works that way too.

#277
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Hmm I'll try something in the morning. Bit spent ATM need rest.

But would that be ooc? She's getting desperate yes but hmm sleep or brainstorm

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I'd go through with the marriage to Tiberius because it would provide lots of drama for further stories, but if you're really determined to send Zera off with Monkai, I suppose you have to get rid of Tiberius somehow. Why not just pay him off?

 

Also, how old is Zera supposed to be? She could start acting with a little wisdom rather than tantrums. Anyway, the wise decision on her part would be to marry Tiberius, and then arrange for him to spend time somewhere else or be conveniently done away with. Widowhood gave women the most power in pre-20th century societies. She would have wealth, status, and even independence if she got sick of sharing Monkai with Scorn.

 

But I'm not writing Zera's story. She's like Lydia in Pride & Prejudice: she acts like a youngest daughter, not the heir. I kept thinking Cassia was the eldest. 



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I have to agree with Sere here. Zera is in position where she has only one way out, given the circumstances. Her only option is to 'go with the flow' and work from the position she has. She goes through the same as Caius did, without the blood ritual though. Still she has much more arsenal in her possession afterwards than Caius did. It is not the end of the world, more like beginning.

Zera is about 22, Cassia 20 and Miriel 18. Short time distance but I had to include it in the story.

At least Cassia knows the game better than Zera does.

#280
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Oh I was fully intended for monkai to lose this one no matter what. I did say caius gave him everything but coated him everything. The hard part is how do I do it just right to capture the drama. But hey maybe we need sere to write this one. Been spot on with this arc :P

#281
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I have final altevinter. I would like to dedicate this one to y'all for pushing me to my limits and supporting me in my bad days in my scenes as I say at my card shop "ladies and gentlemen tis SHOOOWTIIIMMME!" *fireworks go off*

Disclaimer first section is a recap modified better to show character traits I've neglected and due to it fitting/continuity. Its also a start for foray later in another relationship dynamic

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#282
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And he is still alive. At least there is that.  :D



#283
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That was very passionate! Bravo! It gives you a chance to explore what happens afterward - they may still find a way to be together, or each of them may change in some fashion. For instance, if Zera has a child with Tiberius and has to choose between raising her child or running away with Monkai. Or there might be new developments in Monkai's life as he discovers more about his father's family.



#284
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Glad ya'all enjoyed it that was the last of my fire lol

#285
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So are we keeping it or are we at the drawing boards still lol

#286
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#287
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A excellent observation from the outside, if she says this to Caius then he will do as she asks. Support is what he needs now. :)



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Funny thing about writing Elowyn is that sometimes her opinions surprise me. I have to put myself into her head and see things from her perspective.



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A little clash.

 

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#290
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Well calling insanity creating harvesters makercs breath... I'm game. :P

Jokes aside so I we're off the drawing board then? If so I have a lotta work to do before work

#291
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"Somehow that little angry face made Caius feel aroused. "

 

I just burst out laughing at this!  :lol: 

 

There they are, standing in the midst of a bunch of dead bodies and a flesh golem, and Caius is getting excited. Dumat's balls!  :o 

 

I like this argument though. You know, we do have someone locked up in the dungeon...



#292
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A "volunteer", yes.  :P



#293
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At some caius's madness will have to implode :P so do I continue or wait once all this is done. I'm a week behind on the schedule

#294
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There's a schedule?



#295
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For me yes lol y'all no I usually just add when appropriate due general self containment

And I don't structure myself I'll be at the drawing board for eternity. But it seems we're back to business so I'll do something I'll just add the wedding and ely's to the thread I'll be back to work

#296
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A scene from Caius younger years in Seheron.

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#297
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Hehe epic as always

#298
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I love reading about Caius' army days! Though it was sad, too. Nothing to be done when people try to kill you - they must fry. I liked that image of him blowing the cinders away.



#299
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I think there are some untold stories in those years. All this is actually inspired by you Sere, that little story of yours was so good.  :)



#300
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Caius' transformation from naive romantic into ruthless magister is rich fodder. :)