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#301
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A moment back then.

 

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#302
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I like how this story gives some background, not only to Caius, but to his decisions about his own daughters' marriages. I'd like to read more about his relationship with Mucia before it all went sour. I wonder how she felt about marrying him? Did she start out hoping that it would be a good marriage, or was she only doing her duty? Did she feel any disappointment that Caius couldn't love her? 



#303
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I think we need to study all those things. That will definitely expand Caius character. :)

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A glimpse of the past.

 

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#305
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Wow heavy so murri did love him it seems... heavy

#306
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Actions have consequences.

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#307
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Brutal! It's good to see that Caius hasn't gotten soft.

 

So, all these bastard children running around, hmmm... 



#308
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Haha! Lucius cleaned away most of the bastards. There might be some who escaped his grip appearing later thought.  ;)



#309
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Indeed! I think Caius managed to keep a few around.



#310
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Holy sith blood that was amazing in character development. I could tell he was genuinely hurt that his daughter didn't tell him first. Like it's almost partly out of rage he did what he did. Egad I'm lost for words it's so juicy and moist material

#311
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It is a tight rope he is walking on, but Caius intends to come out victorious.

#312
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I would hope so think he just destroyed the bridge with her. Forced miscarriage and a veiled threat, juicy indeed she may Buck some more

#313
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Oooh, Cassia is truly her father's daughter! Does she know about Nazlik's baby?



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No she doesn't, Caius don't trust her with the secret. She might consider getting rid of her competition.

#316
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Oooh hotus is in trouble lol but damn cassi is amazing I was joking about her plans but wow didn't think we go there! :)

Does zera know of the kid

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No, none of the daughters do know about the child. Only Elowyn does.

#318
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Ah gotcha. Again awesome

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Ohoh, Monkai's in big trouble!  :o

 

I like Elowyn's suggestion. But of course she wasn't privy to the conversations Caius has already had with Zera. I'm excited to see what Cassia will do!

 

I wonder how Elowyn will feel about using Caius as a guinea pig? Conflicted, I'm sure!



#321
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When is he never in trouble this has been a chaotic arc

#322
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If you had something specific planned monkey, and this wont fit then just let me know. :)

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#324
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I like the fact she kept darkon's body and and every thing before(hotus does a fine job of relaying his activities ) but can we amend the fight to where she escapes(not without injury of course she's going against the dragon :P) the arc is just starting and I am kinda going for a Illuminati cult antagonist that's gunning for all three houses. But I like the tone you were going for.

The sense of urgency and preemptive nipping in the bud. But I'll definitely keep this it's great material we can rework later :). Think you might be onto something

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Caius just made sure that she does not attack his house or members of it. Otherwise she is free to act the way before. Caius is not holding her in captivity so she is free to go. But if you had something else planned then I can retract this. I can change that she runs if you require her intact :).

The only problem with her attacking house Vaellanius is that Caius would come for her, he doesn't tolarate any vigilante attacking him. So you need to tone that side down, and keep her more of Caracallas and Raging's problem.