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#126
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Caius talks with Zera.

 

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#127
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Hehe pub will have pass kai's big brother exam...

#128
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Okay... I honestly just crapped myself wasn't expecting that... and monkai is in the **** now big time... must know what happens ;)

#129
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There will be... trouble.

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Oooh, developments! I hope Elowyn can win over Publius somehow, though their rivalry is a lot of fun. She's going to hate all the talk about how she got her... position.

 

And Zera! Well, what a pickle.



#131
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Indeed I wrote her to have a rebellious flair but DAAAAAAAmn

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Ooooooooohh, Monkai's in trouuuuuuuuble!

 

Such a joy to see Caius in action  :D



#134
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Haha that seems exactly like coldi just locked in a closet and told to hush lol

And the arrogance between caius and monkai is unreal like the are both momentous forces that meet a immovable object. Neither will budge but a powerful confrontation is coming. I liked the poisoning and bribery it shows his mixed feelings for control but at the same time shows a father trying to compromise with his kid (monkai) while prove to the other that he 's always right(zera), well done.

And you've captured the angst and mistrust to a tea

#135
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There is something to be told, Caius didn't tell monkai everything. And he still has to face zera.

#136
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Can't say I'll like where your going :P

But jokes aside I think I know what's going to happen and I have a broad idea of the next scene but I don't want to toss your plot in the sink

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Nothing too bad, no worries. ;)

#138
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Oh I know it's just what's in my is just brutal and out of character for all three. Free write time maybe be I'll do another flashback for one the ragins

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I wonder what sort of arranged marriage Caius has in mind for Zera?



#140
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One that monkai might crash Ala princess bride

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Maybe the groom will be really cool? *says Elowyn, feeling glad she's not a Magister's daughter*



#143
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Maker this is wrenching. I have a strong anger for caius since he just controls everything but I can't help but pity him even sympathize with him.

But will monkai take the money he's a bastard but is it possible he has had everything... and zera what will she do ... keep going please * turns on popcorn machine in garage *

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The groom.

 

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#145
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"or be out of his mind"   :lol: 

 

What a fun dinner party this is going to be! 



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Elowyn's observations at the dinner party:

 

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#147
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Okay back from business and I come to this..... F-FANTASTIC LADIES AND GENTLEMAN.

Ucci: have I said your the better writer? No? Well you are *gives award* the feels anger, humor, romance, jealousy, everything! Phenomenal! what's your secret I seek to emulate the way you do political scenes. Its as if your job is in politics. :) bravo a 1k times

Sere: ely's development from a fugitive to future magister is epic. Add to her conflict of interest with monkai just heightens the drama. They had a shaky start. Became friends(as much Scorn allowed) and then now this situation . Makers t*ts it's riddled with the drama only I can hope to imagine but never properly flesh it out.

Thanks guys my fire is lite again

#148
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Thanks monkey. You give me too much credit, but thank you  :). I think you tackle these issue as well as I do. With your wily ways.  ;)

There is one above us though, I will hand that trophy over to Sere.  =]



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Nope! No trophies! I admire both of you too much to choose. Monkey, I love the way you handle relationships between your characters, and there's always a lot of crazy action and excitement in your stories. Ucci, you're a master of suspenseful plotting and create this tremendous atmosphere of dread around Caius. It's no wonder at all that Elowyn fell under his spell - who would look at anything else when a vortex of dark energy enters the room?



#150
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All in all fantastic