I see your edit, but I don't still don't see any flaws listed. Since I'm unfamiliar with the character you mentioned, perhaps you could elaborate on what flaw you believe the character exhibited in that situation?
Hopefully wikipedia will explain it better for a black character like Lee Everett with flaws without adding a racial stereotype.
https://en.m.wikiped...ki/Lee_Everett#
Ok. Take a look @ Michonne from the Walking Dead T.V. series she suffers from post traumatic stress because she lost her son who has been devoured by walkers and her boyfriend didn't watch the baby, that explains why that she's hardened, tough, and an angry black woman in a post-apocalyptic world she's living in. She's always combative and hostile and trusts no one but then again she has to be. I think she's a well written character far better than Vivienne.
And there's Derek Morgan from Criminal Minds. He's started off as a bad kid because he lost his father who was murdered, growing up without a father he got into gangs and start running the streets until he got caught by the police and was in and out of Juvinille. And a man named Carl Buford who was his football coach is Morgan's role model and a father figure who inspired him of being a man but it all ended when he was sexually abusing him and it made it worse that it drive him to be a arrogant, hot-headed, prickish additude, overprotective, and self-righteous when he becomes an FBI agent. He seems like a bit of a ****** and I didn't like him because of it but when I saw an episode of him visiting his Family in Chicago that explains why he's that way by confronting Carl Buford for molesting children and killing them I understood why he's that way and I misjudged him. They can start off with that type of writing to have flaws without adding racial stereotypes. And have back stories of black characters.
Modifié par N7Phantom, 04 avril 2016 - 05:47 .