Is that coming from a professional then?
It's coming from someone who sees that this is something that every brainless Call of Duty game, Transformers movie, and Gears of War story has managed to get right. That no matter how stupid the dialogue is and how strongly their characters resemble gorillas, they don't screw this up. And yet for two games in a row now, that's something BioWare hasn't been able to pull off.
As much as I despise what happened in ME 3, it's understandable. There wrote themselves in a tough spot, and did manage to have some very powerful and well written character conflicts and smaller arcs. Then Inquisition comes along with promises left and right to 'get back in touch with our fans' and fix what went wrong with DA 2 and ME 3, and it goes entirely in the wrong direction. They had every reasonable opportunity and motivation to get things right compared to previous games, and yet not only failed to get things right, they managed to get close to everything more wrong. Vapid plot. Vapid characters. Vapid protagonist. Promises up and down of epic, epic, epic. The narrative telling me up and down how epic, epic, epic everything is. And what I get is one of the most pointless and contrived stories I've come across.
This is unacceptable writing.