mmm, it’s a bit sparse, but it’s a cue I can work with :...You wrote two lines...
“I’ve always found that, in a moment of crisis a person invariably does something trivial, like making a cup of tea or lighting up a cigarette. A small detail of this sort adds considerably to the dramatic tension of the situation.”
(Hitchcock on building suspense)
Next, we have to visualize ironic situations (ie similiar soap dropping, suggestive wording ie SMB instead of SMR), and then follow-up by surrounding drama in a happy setting.
Maybe you can work a bit on the happy setting whilst I tackle the irony...





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